Nicias Askani

Bleach: A New Dawn

Hey hey hey. Copying is a but strong. It was My inspiration yes but I actually got the weapon idea from an entirely different series. An extending weapon only comes in so many shapes. This one is a whip. I don't think it being a whip is a passive skill. I thought it was the function of the form. If it an issue I'll simply change the zanpakuto.

Still thank you for the help!

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1. But wait. The four swing is the duratin but why a cI'll down for the primary ability. To hyper extend it should and will have a cool down. But in general it's a whipsword.

So the hyper extension will have a 5 post cool down.

2 ok that works.

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1. I meant to add a max lenght. thanks for reminding me. i'll figure that out in a minute. how is 4 swings before having to retract it sound?

2. I explained it poorly. yes fast things have the capability to pierce, especially sharp fast things. in this case i imagined the speed vs power debate. more power equals less speed, more speed equals less power. that relationship. with Renji's sword, its shaped for tearing and slasshing, not really stabbing...at all. with This one, the shape is more conducive to stabbing. clean through. but if its lighter, with a lower density then it can move faster at the expense of power, which means it extends faster. but when its denser it packs more of a punch but moves slower.

does it help to add that this ability is more so in reference to using it as a whip in regards to its extention. Like come paring a rope whip and a bull whip?

3. Thank you

4 thank you.

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the Menos theory just gives me something to write about along with his own story.

I need/ asked for help with the cooldowns.

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So um... the people I was Rping with kinda sorta stopped. and i really really really dont want to go back to being a solo again.Can anyone Rp with me....please?

also
WIP need help/advice for cooldowns

Trinity Akina

Name: Trinity Akina

Appearance:


Age: 140

Hair Colour: Brown

Eye Colour: Brown

Race: Shinigami

Rank: (Start off unseated) Unseated

Spiritual Energy Colour: Red

Personality: um…just don’t take it personally if she tells you to kiss her ass…yea that about sums it up. Rest to be Rp’d

History: Trinity was found in the Northern 64th district by a rather mysterious woman who took her in and raised her. Trinity, along with several other children became rather notorious pickpockets but were always told never to break the law in their district. Less of a chance to get caught that way. As life went one most of the children in the household developed a strong spiritual pressure. Their mother seemed to have known all along that they would grow up that way and trained them personally in how to control it. Among her siblings Trinity was not the fastest learner, but she was definitely the hardest working one, the only one that took an actual interest in learning to read a well.

Trinity never could understand why they used sticks to practice sword fighting, or why she was forced to fight grown men who had no problem beating the shit out of her in order to learn hand to hand. She really didn’t understand why having spiritual pressure meant her life was now destined to suck. But she kept stealing to eat, training to win and surviving none the less.

She thought her only purpose in life would be to survive, she had seen what she thought was the worst of humanity where she lived. But she refused to ever be taken advantage of in anyway, especially as a female. She watched her mother deal with plenty of shady characters, all of which she was warned to stay away from.

Fate, Fate had different plans for you Trinity Akina and her siblings. Almost instantly things fell into place for her in a single day. Standing in the midst of a would be altercation was something she never before saw. A shinigami. She had heard rumors, she knew they existed but never had she seen one before. He was offering his attackers, well one of them, a chance to become a shinigami. Her mother must have known this would happen, she had to have known somehow. Because the next thing she knew she was going with the man as well, to become a shinigami.

The academy….was a cake walk. Not because she was some prodigy like people kept calling her, but instead all the shit she went from her mothers training made the entire school look like childs play. Her biggest issue was more so academic rather than physical training. But she had a one up on the rest of the school. Giovanni Cain, the man who brought her to the academy, saw that she was taken care of without being coddled. Because of that she graduated in a little over a year, instead of the three it normally takes. She wasn’t the top of her class but physically he was more than ready to wear her shihakusho.

Other:

~Zanpakuto~

Zanpakuto name: Imma

Type: Earth

Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: Obliterate

Spirit Appearance:

Sealed appearance:

Shikai appearance:


Bankai appearance:

Shikai skills:
(Start off with no Shikai or 4 to 5 Shikai skills)
1. Its primary function is to extend in a manner similar to Renji’s Zabimaru, the biggest difference being that both side of the blade are sharp. The length is proportionate to how much energy is poured into it. she can somewhat control how it moves through the air, however it tends to move in curves. So no sharp direction changes. maximum extention...

2. Perhaps the most unique and equally dangerous part of this ability is its fluidity. She can alter its density which allows it to move faster/slower. But of course the faster it goes the less damage it does (for now). The drawback is that it has to be fully retracted in order to alter the density. She cant ‘launch’ it then change it.
(really not sure about this cool down cuz of the way it works. )

3. Clobber: By infusing the weapon with spiritual pressure and swinging it she produces a massive amount of force upon impact. The force is blunt damage so it tends to shatter things rather than slice through them. 4 post cool down

4. Earth snake: By stabbing the Zanpakuto into the ground it can tunnel through the ground and attack from below. She can control how it moves through the ground. 6 post cool down. 3 post duration .
5.
6.
7.
8.

Bankai skills:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6. (Ultimate Skill)

Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills:

Skills

Zanjutsu:
Hōzuri
Shitonegaeshi

Kido:
Academy leve kido

Hakuda:
Tesshō

Hoho:
Shunpo

Points gained from missions:
Mission log:
Points spent and skills gained:

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When Giovanni finally made it back to the Seireitei and to the squad five barracks he was able to ascertain just how much time had passed. it had been hours. which meant he was not officially behind on paperwork and short on time to find seated members for his mission the next day. He didnt even go to his office, he got himself cleaned up and went back outside. He had done a lot of thinking on his way back, realizing that he had no more answers than when he had started. He had a bit more insight into structure but his most pressing concern was the Menos, and of course the adjuches. presumably the menos sightings were due to the adjuches but given that the first menos he fought were likely a distraction for the arrancar that put capitain Kuchiki on bedrest he was doubtful. Chances were who ever was behind this wasnt counting on the Sect at all. at the same time though, it probably wasnt much of a set back either. Giovanni sighed, he knew he needed two things. advice and training. one was easy to come by. the other not so much.

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Giovanni sheathed his sword in hopes it would keep the Sect from killing him outright. Sure he had helped them, sure he had basically saved the leader twice but there was no guarantee that meant anything to them. The Sect leader stepped up to him as everyone else simply watched with varying degree's of interest. Some looked in curiosity, some in anticipation, others with animosity. Gio couldnt help but feel like a mouse surrounded by hungry cats. Suddenly the name they had been calling him fit. "What is your name Shinigami?"

"Giovanni Cain." he omitted his rank and squad. it didnt seem to matter here anyway.

"Cain... I and many others, owe you our lives this day. My name is Tiberius. the leader of the Western Clan. The North speaks of you often. Far too often" The man explained. Gio wasnt surprised that his mysterious female friend was double dealing information. he probably would have done the same thing for the sake of his own ass. They knew who he was, and that didnt feel like a good thing. "The south would like to see you dead. the East cares not. The North thinks you noble but I...we Think you strong. The mistress, your friend, warned you of this battle as a test. To prove you to us as you have proven yourself to her. "

"So you know who i am?"

"oh yes, we know many things, especially about you. just as you know also about us. Though we stand on similar sides we are not on the same side. you fight for those who would pay to see us dead. we work for ourselves."

"and occasionally money and sex" giovanni accidentally remarked with far too much sarcasm, which caused the man to glare at him. Since he was already up shits creek he might as well peak his mind. "am i wrong"

"no, you are not entirely wrong. while as a clan we do our best to seek honor in our own ways, some choose...other things to seek. we have low tolerance for such. The issue remains however, what to do with you. You've Seen our faces, you've felt our spiritual pressures. You are not loyal. thus you are a liability Cain. you can imagine what we do to those"

"i also imagine your honor involves repaying debts. "

"Ah, my life saved your life spared. indeed I have considered that, but how might I be sure this ends here?"

"....it wont. As im sure you've heard i actually give a damn about the outer districts. and the Sect as we call you, is a godsend to them because shinigami are not stationed so far out and havent been for decades. Your faces, your name, your clan will not be spoken of by me. Just as it has yet to be in the year I've known of you. "

Tiberius smiled "well spoken, we have a use for you. we do not make allies often, and you Cain are an ally. one who believes as we do without taking the steps we have. perhaps one day you will join us, perhaps another day you shall aid us again. WE of the West acknowledge you Givanni Cain, as one of honor, a brother in spirit, and a warrior who fight the fight we fight. Until we meet again"

Giovanni didnt even feel the blow. definitelly didnt see it, only woke up hours later alone with a pain in his chest. other than that there was no evidence he had been in a battle. well the pain and his tattered clothing. He had been healed, very well he might add but knocked out and left. decent way to cover tracks. He had no idea where he was or where Gustavo was either. With everything that had happened he remembered he was supposed to be finding two seated officers for a missino he was supposed to be goin on. and he had no idea how much time was lost. great....

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WIP need help/advice for cooldowns

Trinity Akina

Name: Trinity Akina

Appearance:


Age: 140

Hair Colour: Brown

Eye Colour: Brown

Race: Shinigami

Rank: (Start off unseated) Unseated

Spiritual Energy Colour: Red

Personality: um…just don’t take it personally if she tells you to kiss her ass…yea that about sums it up. Rest to be Rp’d

History: Trinity was found in the Northern 64th district by a rather mysterious woman who took her in and raised her. Trinity, along with several other children became rather notorious pickpockets but were always told never to break the law in their district. Less of a chance to get caught that way. As life went one most of the children in the household developed a strong spiritual pressure. Their mother seemed to have known all along that they would grow up that way and trained them personally in how to control it. Among her siblings Trinity was not the fastest learner, but she was definitely the hardest working one, the only one that took an actual interest in learning to read a well.

Trinity never could understand why they used sticks to practice sword fighting, or why she was forced to fight grown men who had no problem beating the shit out of her in order to learn hand to hand. She really didn’t understand why having spiritual pressure meant her life was now destined to suck. But she kept stealing to eat, training to win and surviving none the less.

She thought her only purpose in life would be to survive, she had seen what she thought was the worst of humanity where she lived. But she refused to ever be taken advantage of in anyway, especially as a female. She watched her mother deal with plenty of shady characters, all of which she was warned to stay away from.

Fate, Fate had different plans for you Trinity Akina and her siblings. Almost instantly things fell into place for her in a single day. Standing in the midst of a would be altercation was something she never before saw. A shinigami. She had heard rumors, she knew they existed but never had she seen one before. He was offering his attackers, well one of them, a chance to become a shinigami. Her mother must have known this would happen, she had to have known somehow. Because the next thing she knew she was going with the man as well, to become a shinigami.

The academy….was a cake walk. Not because she was some prodigy like people kept calling her, but instead all the shit she went from her mothers training made the entire school look like childs play. Her biggest issue was more so academic rather than physical training. But she had a one up on the rest of the school. Giovanni Cain, the man who brought her to the academy, saw that she was taken care of without being coddled. Because of that she graduated in a little over a year, instead of the three it normally takes. She wasn’t the top of her class but physically he was more than ready to wear her shihakusho.

Other:

~Zanpakuto~

Zanpakuto name: Imma

Type: Earth

Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: Obliterate

Spirit Appearance:

Sealed appearance:

Shikai appearance:


Bankai appearance:

Shikai skills:
(Start off with no Shikai or 4 to 5 Shikai skills)
1. Its primary function is to extend in a manner similar to Renji’s Zabimaru, the biggest difference being that both side of the blade are sharp. The length is proportionate to how much energy is poured into it. she can somewhat control how it moves through the air, however it tends to move in curves. So no sharp direction changes.
2. Perhaps the most unique and equally dangerous part of this ability is its fluidity. She can alter its density which allows it to move faster/slower. But of course the faster it goes the less damage it does (for now). The drawback is that it has to be fully retracted in order to alter the density. She cant ‘launch’ it then change it.

3. Clobber: By infusing the weapon with spiritual pressure and swinging it she produces a massive amount of force upon impact. The force is blunt damage so it tends to shatter things rather than slice through them.

4. Earth snake: By stabbing the Zanpakuto into the ground it can tunnel through the ground and attack from below. She can control how it moves through the ground
5.
6.
7.
8.

Bankai skills:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6. (Ultimate Skill)

Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills:

Skills

Zanjutsu:
Hōzuri
Shitonegaeshi

Kido:
Academy leve kido

Hakuda:
Tesshō

Hoho:
Shunpo

Points gained from missions:
Mission log:
Points spent and skills gained:

Bleach: A New Dawn

i thought mastery brought it up to a captains lever...since you know its the word mastery and all. mastery level tended to be captains and experts were more so lieutenants. but ii'll change it to 75.

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Giovannis act of defense must have awarded him some sort of merit. The members of the Sect seemed to incorporate him into their fighting style as soon as he rejoined the battle. The hollows that remained required multiple people to take them down. They were smarter, faster and stronger than your usual hollow. Thankfully they continued to fight separately. If the hollows started working together it would have gotten a lot worse. Not to mention the super hollow that was still not dead.

Gio and some others surrounded one of the big hollows. Together they closed in on it in a pattern. As they moved forward they all shunpo'd and continued their assault from other directions. The hollow was unable to track the movement of everyone so the sect attacked from blind spots. It was attack and retreat. Attack and retreat. Attack and retreat. Every time the hollow turned another attacked it's blind spot. But this thing wasn't dying. It kept regenerating and maintained a stable guard of its vital spots. Everything else grew back quickly. Gio took notice that it never looked up and the next flash switch gio went up. After a couple more rounds of attack and retreat gio came down on the hollow stabbing it in the head. It didn't die though, it flailed to and fro trying to shake Gio out of its face. the others took the opportunity to go in fot the kill, slicing at where they believed its major organs to be. Together they cut the beast down. all that remained now was the one fight between the Sect leader and the super hollow.

Gio took a step forward but someone put a hand on his shoulder "easy there Mouse, big guy knows what he is doing" The man tried to assure Gio. "this isnt the first adjuches he fought"

Gio looked closer at the hollow "that...is an Adjuches? what the hell is it doing out here?"

"who knows? but it will be dead soon" the man replied as their leader was beginning to drive the hollow back. The leader fought with vigor but more notably he fought with ambidexterity. it didnt matter that he was a phenomenal hakuda master if he couldnt cut into the hollow, thus the ambidexterity. at first glance it looked like the sword was in the way of his fighting style, but it was not true. any and every minuscule opening the man made in the hollows defenses where attacked with the blade and an amazing speed. such a simple technique mastered to an amazing level was something he figured was learned in squad 2, if he had to guess. they excelled in hand to hand and zanjutsu, not so much kido.

"hey Mouse" one of the men addressed Gio, he wasnt sure why everyone decided to call him that but now wasnt really the time to figure that out.

"what?" he asked not taking his eyes off the fight

"your good with kido. can you pin him down if you get the chance?"

"Sure can, just say the word " gio admitted

"i'll help you, one of my zanpakuto's ability is to share energy freely. "

"lets do it" gio nodded and the man put a hand on his back, spiritual pressure flowed into him, as he stabbed Sorareo-O into the ground infront of him. after a moment he was ready.

but the battle between the Sect leader and the adjuches raged on, relentlessly. at someone elses signal a large number of the sect members lept into the battle. it was a tactic similar to the one they used against the last hollow. a lot of Shunpo from everyone trying to disorientate the adjuches. The response was to charge a cero but that gave the leader just enough time to shunpo into range of a mighty round house kick that knocked the adjuches into the ground.

Giovanni clasped his hands together, with the fingers intertwined intricately, "bakudo 75" 5, Giant pillars slammed the hollow to the ground. for good measure he threw another set on top of it, doubling the force of the binding. With the target bound and immobile it almost seemed like over kill with all the long ranged attacks being hurled at the creature. kido blast, and zanpakuto abilities of the masses all culminated into one massive explosion that left behind no trace of the hollow. If an adjuches was that strong Perhaps Giovanni had a bit more training to do before he was ready for that liuetenant spot. those things tended be tough for lieutenants to match. but that was a matter for another time. for now all eyes were on him. and suddenly he knew why they were calling him Mouse