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Current My life is now complete. I can check getting the RPG status bar talking about classical music off my Liszt.
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Here's something by a pretty famous artist portraying his depression and his love for the woman who stayed with him through it: youtube.com/watch?v=R2RNK1h…
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7 yrs ago
Happy Birthday to me, Happy Birthday to me!
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Hmmmmm.... I'll think on that.
Yay!!!! I'll work on it tonight when I'm not supposed to be doing real-world things.
So I've been really uncertain about exactly what I wanted to add to this world. I love the dark fantasy aspects, the gritty, unforgiving setting, but at first ideas eluded me. This is the concept I finally came up with:



Please excuse any typos. I'm working from my phone because the idea hit me while away from my computer.
Blood. Sickly sweet and cloying. The oily blackness of it filled Rhiannon’s nose, forcing her to breathe through her mouth as she ran. It was drying on her arm as she flung herself forward, binding her soaked hand to the black-coated knife still clasped within it, a foul-smelling adhesive. It clung to her face in blotchy droplets and soaked into the fabric of her carefully woven tunic. More still mingled with the deep, healthy red pumping from her damaged side as her free hand pressed against the four ragged claw marks in a desperate attempt to stay alive. Alive! She hadn’t even lived yet.

Trees whipped by, black monoliths, each one hiding a thousand more tainted wolves, or so it seemed. Within Rhiannon’s mind, she still felt the slimy presence of them as she had reached out with her thoughts, her essence to touch these creatures, the first she had met after several long days and nights in this cursed forest. Their eager howls had first sounded joyful to her lonely ears, but if they had been, it had only been the joy of bloodlust, of taint and destruction.

A sudden sharp pain, tiny next to the ragged openings in her side, jerked Rhiannon forcibly back to the present. It was a high root against her ankle and she was falling down into a pool of swamp muck, her already strained leggings acquiring a new coat. Grimly, she pushed herself up again, coaxed on by flashing images of a heavy body falling towards her, spiked jaws open, eager.

Eventually, the demonkin woman began to slow, her clumsy footfalls coming at longer and longer intervals, her heartbeats softer against the drums of her ears. Adrenaline was seeping out of her pores like sap out of an old maple, taking strength and fear with it. She began to bargain with herself, to cajole:

“A few more steps… That's it, past that tree to sleep… Just until there’s some dry ground…”

When the trees began to thin, Rhiannon didn’t quite believe it at first. What place did fresh air have in nightmares? She shook her head; it remained. She blinked. It was still there. With a last animal effort, she surged forward, breaking out from the dark trees at last near a lone house set alongside a dirt road.

“Its dry,” she said, stupid with fatigue and blood loss, and collapsed in a heap.
Interested!
While we wait for Void to voice his thoughts, I think I'll write up Rhia's arrival to this scene. She collapses before Mortimer finds her outside and before Vox sees either of them, so it'll give us somewhere to start.
Hahahaha, we're both replying just a little too quickly. Alright! She's collapsed but hasn't passed out or anything like that. Have any of you ever used Pirate Pad? This may be easier to write if we do it collaboratively.
That makes a lot of sense. She wouldn't have encountered something like that before and wouldn't have known to be wary. Well, friends, I can't do a whole lot in the next scene, but I vote for any option that doesn't involve trying to hide from scary undead creeps who may have powers of perception we don't yet know about.

Edit: Very cool, @Dynamo Frokane! I really like the concept, I'm just a newbie in your world.
Why would Rhiannon fight a wolf? She can communicate with animals, she has the power of suggestion over them. Brigands, maybe or some other men up to no good, but Rhiannon wouldn't have any reason to fight an animal.

Edit: I'm sorry if I responded too bluntly, @Dynamo Frokane. I'd just like to know your reasoning.
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