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I kind of want to join this.

But it'll take some time for me to think of a character.


Well, since the first season ran for over 3 years, I think you have plenty of time.


Since I already approved Jack, I'm going to go ahead and approve this. Though, I'll admit, Im a bit confused as to what's going on
Hate to pester you about this, @nitemare shape, but do you think you could add Lisa to the roster on the OP?

Walking the Line
Subject GE-04 - Lisa Hernandez Robeatics


Yeah, I need to update the roster which I've fallen behind on because of not feeling so well as well as dealing with some issues offline. I'll be doing that if not over the weekend, then on my days off early next week
I've edited the Bio further, is it up to scratch now or does it need more work?


Close enough, you're approved.


Looks good so far, I'd like to see the sample a bit longer, the minimum is 4 paragraphs or 12 lines, which is the Advanced minimum. Otherwise, the CS looks good.


Approved
or not....just got some bad news. Not really in the mood for writing today.
I've got some stuff in the pipeline, haven't been feeling so hot today so I've been relaxing a bit. Hopefully I'll have at least 1 post up tomorrow if not sooner.
OK, looking at the CS as is, I can't accept it as written. The CS was overly vague in and of itself, and as others have mentioned, it is uncomfortably close to cartoon physics and reality altering, which are not allowed in this game.

That said, it is well written, and I would just need to see more about the character herself before we can consider her.
Phoenix and Mandate are both approved
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