oOWonderKinOo

Hello I'm Clasified

Hi and welcome ^_^ Hope to see you in the forums. :)

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@XxLyraxX That's fine, take your time. :)

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@KaelRavenheart Too much cussing (Example: F___ you little F___ F__ F__), too much gore (Example: The monster pressed his giant thumb against the back of the woman's head and it popped off her body like a cork from a bottle of champagne. Then the monster, using the points of his nails, pulled her spine out like it was an illusive worm and wiggled it with amusement), too much sexual content or turning the plot to smut (Example: Sex 3 times a day or every day. Example 2: Everything arouses a character. Example 3: Character talks about doing sexual things all the time or thinks about it all the time.) I'm looking to write a good plot. Mature content can make things interesting but if it takes away from the plot, then I don't want it at all. I try to do mostly action/adventure plots which means that sexual content might happen but not if the plot doesn't swing in that direction. What is more likely to happen is gore and cursing though. I don't mind cursing in moderation. I don't mind to f-bomb, but I don't want it used like the example I showed. Does that help?

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Seeing the guy from the day before, she smiled and gave a polite wave. Glancing down at his name tag, she finally got to know his name so it wouldn't be as awkward. "Oh! Umm ...Raven! Do you guys do to-go? I promised my friend I would would call her once I get to look at the menu! I'm sorry for being a bother!" Looking around, she saw that the place was packed to almost full complicity. Now she really felt bad for coming. In a way she was only adding to the workload. More people came in behind her and she stepped forward to make room for them. The place was too crowded and too loud. How could anyone handle this regularly? Elly missed the quiet of the flower shop now. Another couple people came in causing her to step forward again but she accidentally bumped into one of the people standing beside her. "Oops! Sorry!", She cringed stumbling away. Elly seemed to have lost her balance and flailed reaching out for anything that would keep her from falling. Her hand grabbed someone's elbow but suddenly everything changed. It was silent in a way but her ears felt like they were full of something, maybe, water? Actually, even her vision was blurred now. Everything seemed murky, where..what happened? Everything was in a blue tent like she was in a pool. No, it was bigger than a pool. Was she underwater? How did that happen? This she gasped suddenly realizing that if this was water, she needed to get air. In reality, Elly's eyes looked wide and oddly bright. She blinked seeing the restaurant then in another blink of an eye the depths of a watery pool of some sort. Was she hallucinating? That had to be it, but why? Still holding on to someone, she tried to clear the fog in her head. She could hear people asking her is she was ok. Too many people. Too much noise. Elly needed out, she needed..air. It was like she was drowning, but she wasn't. Bits of her hallucination were sifting through. The people around her looked distorted like she was in a fish bowl looking out at them. Still having trouble breathing she coughed and spluttered. Do you need me to call an ambulance? Are you ok? She's going to faint. All these words made her feel like each voice was a body lying against her, smothering her. "I need air!" She cried, and with that gusts of powerful wind burst through the front door and open windows. It was like some sort of invisible serpents were causing table clothes, decorations and napkins to fly about. Everyone was so distracted by the havoc that Elly managed to regain her footing, let go of whoever she was clutching so tightly for support, then stumble out door still coughing and gasping. Still very disoriented, her hand trailed along side of the wall of the restaurant as she shuffle around to the back. Her legs gave out due to lack of air and she fell to her knees in the lot behind the establishment. The same odd wind that had surged through the main dinning hall, seemed to escape and revolved around Elly for a moment. Her eyes began to glow brightly and she got her first clear breath of air. The wind died down shortly after she re-established a normal breathing pattern. Elly began to shakily look up. What the hell happened?

Human-Born (1x1) [oOWonderKinOo]x[XxLyraxX]

@XxLyraxX I like it!

Human-Born (1x1) [oOWonderKinOo]x[XxLyraxX]

Like splash mountain or old faithful? That would be awesome! O.O @XxLyraxX I'm going to make it through touch again ok?

Human-Born (1x1) [oOWonderKinOo]x[XxLyraxX]

@XxLyraxX O.O! I got an idea! They both experience a terrifying moment from the other human-borns dream. Example: Elly has a vision of being underwater, then feels like she's drowning and runs out of the store thinking that she's feeling smothered by all the people. Her abilities will also kick in causing a 'rouge' blast of wind to rush through the front of the restaurant. Something similar can happen to your char. Sound good?

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Oh, sorry! I didn't notice the post until now. I'm interested in whatever makes the plot good. I like talking it out in ooc chat before hand, but usually as long as it's not excessive, I don't mind mature content. @KaelRavenheart