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There would be a central village where a lot of plot elements are focused around, though all nations will be available.
OOC Here ---> Naruto: Shinjitsu no Mon!
So I'm fairly new to the site, but I've been RPing for years. I'm pretty laid back, and just enjoy letting stories unfold while making sure things progress at a manageable pace. I've been working on this RP idea for a while, and it's being fleshed out as you read this. The story is set in an AU (alternate universe) of the Narutoverse we've come to know, the main villages and countries will be there but not the canon characters. Canon clans and canon concepts will be involved but be original with your characters. The only canon history that's being included is the Sage of Six Paths and the story of his two sons.
So, I would like to gauge the interest of those who may wish to join. Before expressing interest, I'd like to point out that I'm looking for people willing to post at least a couple (2-3) times a week at a High Casual standard.
The story begins approximately half a century after the Sage has passed, after the first Great War and the political climate is rocky to say the least. The story is ripe with conflict, and the world is stuck in a Cold War-esque scenario. There's a lot of room to fit in other players' stories as not much history has been written in this Shinobi world as of yet.
Who's interested?
So I'm fairly new to the site, but I've been RPing for years. I'm pretty laid back, and just enjoy letting stories unfold while making sure things progress at a manageable pace. I've been working on this RP idea for a while, and it's being fleshed out as you read this. The story is set in an AU (alternate universe) of the Narutoverse we've come to know, the main villages and countries will be there but not the canon characters. Canon clans and canon concepts will be involved but be original with your characters. The only canon history that's being included is the Sage of Six Paths and the story of his two sons.
So, I would like to gauge the interest of those who may wish to join. Before expressing interest, I'd like to point out that I'm looking for people willing to post at least a couple (2-3) times a week at a High Casual standard.
The story begins approximately half a century after the Sage has passed, after the first Great War and the political climate is rocky to say the least. The story is ripe with conflict, and the world is stuck in a Cold War-esque scenario. There's a lot of room to fit in other players' stories as not much history has been written in this Shinobi world as of yet.
Who's interested?
Hirothelegend said
Gem you can have just make sure you have a backstory to back it up, and i don't mind if it's in necklace form.
I've made all the requested changes, could I get a review from someone here?
Hirothelegend said
Chev, your character is accepted, and Ouroboros you character is really OP in my opinion. Inorganic Reanimation is a bit much, Not needing a Gem for Hokage-Shiki Jijun Jutsu - Kakuan Nitten Suishu is busted, much more. Especially for an A-Rank. Some of these justus are even First Hokage ranked skill... so please edit your character to an appropriate justu list.
I understand your concern, and as such I've removed a few of his Jutsu including Inorganic Reanimation. I should have clarified earlier, but I never intended to have his Mokuton techniques on par with the First Hokage's usage of such, I can see how that seems over the top, but as a user of Mokuton he does possess a fair amount of Ninjutsu. As for not having a gem for the Hokage's suppression technique, I simply felt that the gem was more canon and would not fit into this RP's story. Also, does it matter if he's wearing the necklace or not when he performs the technique? The original Jutsu requires either the Jinchuuriki OR the wielder to be in possession of the gem.
Appearance
Name
Senju Enzeru
Age
37
Gender
Male
Village
Ex-Konohagakure; Missing-nin
Village Rank
ANBU Captain - Defected
Ninja Rank
A
Release
Doton, Suiton, Mokuton
Tools
Odachi, shuriken, scrolls, explosive tags, kunai,
First Hokage's Gem - A pendant worn around his neck given to him by his sensei, Tenyuu. Tenyuu found the pendant around the orphaned Enzeru's neck and held onto it, unsure of what is was, though capable of sensing the strong chakra imbued in it. When Enzeru's Mokuton powers manifested, Tenyuu eventually became aware of what the pendant meant. Knowing that this was the key to the Hokage's Hijutsu he kept it until Enzeru was mature enough to understand its value, and bestowed it upon him as he became a true Shinobi.
Wrappings of Oni- The bandages Enzeru wears are said to have come from the body of an infamous, but powerful, Shinobi of very early Konohagakure. He was so great, and murdered so many, that it was believed he wielded the power of demons within him. According to legend, after he was slain in battle, his corpse would rise each night and slay those that wandered near his grave. Of course, there were never actual sightings of this, but it was beleived that the so-called demons that empowered him would steal the souls of weak-willed Shinobi who ventured too close to his resting place. The disappearance of so many in this particular graveyard in Konoha was dealt with by a wise and powerful sage. The sage devised a set of seals and inscribed them along the inside of the wrappings, and brought them to the grave. He wrapped the body in these bandages whose seals were used to seal energy from coming in or out. The wrappings were robbed from the grave during wartime by those who heard rumors of their power, but did not realize the consequences of disrespecting evil spirits. Eventually these wrappings fell into the hands of Enzeru's sensei, Tenyuu. Tenyuu passed these onto Enzeru on his death bed. The wrappings are blessed with the strength and endurance of steel, meaning blades cannot pierce them, nor can they be torn. The seals placed on the wrappings protect from all forms of chakra, disallowing any entry to the wearer. This effectively makes the wearer immune to most Jutsu. However, the one huge flaw of the bandages is simple: the wearer cannot perform Jutsu. While being worn, the user cannot mold their chakra into a usable form. Natural energy is the only form of energy that may pass through these bandages, meaning they can be harmed by Senjutsu. The wearer may gather natural energy, but may not enter Sage Mode nor perform Senjutsu whilst wearing the bandages. They are easily removed by the wearer and seem to provide a clarity of thought while wearing.
Biography
Enzeru follows a strict personal dogma born of love for the world he lives in. He has endured many hardships, including being orphaned at the age of three. He was cared for by a lonely sage by the name of Tenyuu. Tenyuu provided all the love and care, the discipline and teachings that a mother and father should have. Enzeru grew up hostile, unruly and defiant of everything that was given to him. He was distraught by the death of his parents so much that he refuted all that Tenyuu tried to offer him. Tenyuu showed nothing but kindness and understanding despite Enzeru's temper and frustration. Eventually Enzeru came around and grew to understand that his parents had died for a reason. They were taken from him, and although he thought it unfair at the time, he soon realized that he had all he needed in Tenyuu.
He grew up quiet from then on. His temper was quelled by the warm heart of his sensei. He was taught how to provide for himself and survive alone in the world, for Tenyuu was old and was not long for the earthly plain. After being taught to provide for himself, he was taught how to defend himself from the evil of the world. He was given proper instruction in hand to hand combat, but was told never to use his strength for ill intentions.
Tenyuu gave him seven simple principles. Have no fear, appreciate what you have, act with good intention, accept what you cannot change, pay careful attention to everything, do not dwell on negative thoughts, defend your will. He was taught incredible patience by his sensei, which was necessary in order to eventually learn Senjutsu.
Enzeru practiced meditation throughout his entire life since meeting Tenyuu. This was the basis for his magnificent chakra control, which was taught to him after learning to provide for and defend himself. Once learning to mould his chakra, he was taught the ways of Water, his primary element. Tenyuu's element was Earth, which was passed onto him second. Tenyuu had no idea of Enzeru's heritage, so when his Wood Release revealed itself during deep meditation one day, Tenyuu concluded that Enzeru was a special child, one who he was meant to raise for a reason.
He spent most of his youth training in the ways of Taijutsu and Ninjutsu, and after learning of his Senju heritage he began the path of the Sage, and all of its teachings and secrets were passed onto Enzeru. He became a noble young Shinobi, skipping the academy due to his knowledgeable upbringing. He was cast into the role of a special Chuunin, his set of skills were versatile and highly regarded as one of the most unique abilities in Konohagakure.
He was quickly thrown into the ANBU Black Ops for his prowess as a Shinobi and his gifted nature. Rising through the ranks faster than most, by his twentieth birthday he became the leader. His tactical mind and calm approach made him one of the most valuable assets Konoha had. When Konoha detached itself from the peaceful Shinobi Republic and assassinated Shinobi attempting to enter their, Enzeru felt it was also time to remove himself from the mainstream Shinobi world, and defected from his position as head of the ANBU Black Ops, scratched a line through his forehead protector and left on his own path. He would not fight and pledge his name for a village that would not adhere to peaceful standards.
Enzeru currently holds big hopes for the world, and his idealistic views are enforced by his mighty will. He is in a state of mind where he is ready to take action and begin impacting the world as it is in a great way.
Jutsu List
Sage Mode
Kawazu Kumite
Chakra Sensing Technique
Kekkai Genki
Mokuton
Other Info
Enzeru holds massive chakra stores and great control of said chakra through years of meditation and practice.
Name
Senju Enzeru
Age
37
Gender
Male
Village
Ex-Konohagakure; Missing-nin
Village Rank
ANBU Captain - Defected
Ninja Rank
A
Release
Doton, Suiton, Mokuton
Tools
Odachi, shuriken, scrolls, explosive tags, kunai,
First Hokage's Gem - A pendant worn around his neck given to him by his sensei, Tenyuu. Tenyuu found the pendant around the orphaned Enzeru's neck and held onto it, unsure of what is was, though capable of sensing the strong chakra imbued in it. When Enzeru's Mokuton powers manifested, Tenyuu eventually became aware of what the pendant meant. Knowing that this was the key to the Hokage's Hijutsu he kept it until Enzeru was mature enough to understand its value, and bestowed it upon him as he became a true Shinobi.
Wrappings of Oni- The bandages Enzeru wears are said to have come from the body of an infamous, but powerful, Shinobi of very early Konohagakure. He was so great, and murdered so many, that it was believed he wielded the power of demons within him. According to legend, after he was slain in battle, his corpse would rise each night and slay those that wandered near his grave. Of course, there were never actual sightings of this, but it was beleived that the so-called demons that empowered him would steal the souls of weak-willed Shinobi who ventured too close to his resting place. The disappearance of so many in this particular graveyard in Konoha was dealt with by a wise and powerful sage. The sage devised a set of seals and inscribed them along the inside of the wrappings, and brought them to the grave. He wrapped the body in these bandages whose seals were used to seal energy from coming in or out. The wrappings were robbed from the grave during wartime by those who heard rumors of their power, but did not realize the consequences of disrespecting evil spirits. Eventually these wrappings fell into the hands of Enzeru's sensei, Tenyuu. Tenyuu passed these onto Enzeru on his death bed. The wrappings are blessed with the strength and endurance of steel, meaning blades cannot pierce them, nor can they be torn. The seals placed on the wrappings protect from all forms of chakra, disallowing any entry to the wearer. This effectively makes the wearer immune to most Jutsu. However, the one huge flaw of the bandages is simple: the wearer cannot perform Jutsu. While being worn, the user cannot mold their chakra into a usable form. Natural energy is the only form of energy that may pass through these bandages, meaning they can be harmed by Senjutsu. The wearer may gather natural energy, but may not enter Sage Mode nor perform Senjutsu whilst wearing the bandages. They are easily removed by the wearer and seem to provide a clarity of thought while wearing.
Biography
Enzeru follows a strict personal dogma born of love for the world he lives in. He has endured many hardships, including being orphaned at the age of three. He was cared for by a lonely sage by the name of Tenyuu. Tenyuu provided all the love and care, the discipline and teachings that a mother and father should have. Enzeru grew up hostile, unruly and defiant of everything that was given to him. He was distraught by the death of his parents so much that he refuted all that Tenyuu tried to offer him. Tenyuu showed nothing but kindness and understanding despite Enzeru's temper and frustration. Eventually Enzeru came around and grew to understand that his parents had died for a reason. They were taken from him, and although he thought it unfair at the time, he soon realized that he had all he needed in Tenyuu.
He grew up quiet from then on. His temper was quelled by the warm heart of his sensei. He was taught how to provide for himself and survive alone in the world, for Tenyuu was old and was not long for the earthly plain. After being taught to provide for himself, he was taught how to defend himself from the evil of the world. He was given proper instruction in hand to hand combat, but was told never to use his strength for ill intentions.
Tenyuu gave him seven simple principles. Have no fear, appreciate what you have, act with good intention, accept what you cannot change, pay careful attention to everything, do not dwell on negative thoughts, defend your will. He was taught incredible patience by his sensei, which was necessary in order to eventually learn Senjutsu.
Enzeru practiced meditation throughout his entire life since meeting Tenyuu. This was the basis for his magnificent chakra control, which was taught to him after learning to provide for and defend himself. Once learning to mould his chakra, he was taught the ways of Water, his primary element. Tenyuu's element was Earth, which was passed onto him second. Tenyuu had no idea of Enzeru's heritage, so when his Wood Release revealed itself during deep meditation one day, Tenyuu concluded that Enzeru was a special child, one who he was meant to raise for a reason.
He spent most of his youth training in the ways of Taijutsu and Ninjutsu, and after learning of his Senju heritage he began the path of the Sage, and all of its teachings and secrets were passed onto Enzeru. He became a noble young Shinobi, skipping the academy due to his knowledgeable upbringing. He was cast into the role of a special Chuunin, his set of skills were versatile and highly regarded as one of the most unique abilities in Konohagakure.
He was quickly thrown into the ANBU Black Ops for his prowess as a Shinobi and his gifted nature. Rising through the ranks faster than most, by his twentieth birthday he became the leader. His tactical mind and calm approach made him one of the most valuable assets Konoha had. When Konoha detached itself from the peaceful Shinobi Republic and assassinated Shinobi attempting to enter their, Enzeru felt it was also time to remove himself from the mainstream Shinobi world, and defected from his position as head of the ANBU Black Ops, scratched a line through his forehead protector and left on his own path. He would not fight and pledge his name for a village that would not adhere to peaceful standards.
Enzeru currently holds big hopes for the world, and his idealistic views are enforced by his mighty will. He is in a state of mind where he is ready to take action and begin impacting the world as it is in a great way.
Jutsu List
Sage Mode
Kawazu Kumite
Chakra Sensing Technique
Kekkai Genki
Mokuton
Other Info
Enzeru holds massive chakra stores and great control of said chakra through years of meditation and practice.
Approximately how long has Konoha been detached from the Shinobi Republic? I'd just like to know so I can better tailor my character's history for the thread.
Still accepting?
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