Lugubrious said
Forgive me, I'm just drawing a blank on how to improve him. Do you have any suggestions?I could make it so that rather than simply survive a year at the school, Riot's job is to place individuals among the School of Deities asleep using Hypnos's powers, which in turn adds to Hypnos's domain. It's a sort of insidious, tricky thing to do; as he goes throughout the year, making others fall asleep, his master's power grows. I can change his personality to be more somber and subversive.Alternatively, I could literally make Phobetor into my character, a young daimon trying to learn how to become the God of Nightmares.
I'm sorry, but I couldn't possibly suggest much more than a re-write.