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Rhul Thaar Demon Lord Incoming [THIS IS THE CS SPOT]
Palamon
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Male. New Jersey. Alive. Healthy. Something Something I like roleplay.
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NewSun said
I think we have a few in the works, just with sheets needing to be submitted. Might be worth contacting Terminal, Saint and Flagg to see the world building they already did for Mortal Plane. Alternatively, you can PM me the basic idea you had for a Demon Lord and we can work it together? I feel like more Planes need adding.
Roger, I'll send ya a bunch of stuff I work out, I got the time to write up a bunch o' stuff.
NewSun said
Maybe what you had in mind would be applicable for another plane with minor adjustments?
Already on it, gotta human incoming, you seem to be lacking those.
I'll change no worries bro
Well I'm pretty damn interested in this RP and I'm gonna be workin on a CS for something.
[CS INCOMING]
[CS INCOMING]
If there is room, I believe I can add to this lil party.
Woo Celestine System is full of people who don't like each other! This is gonna be fun! :D
WIP
Faction Name: The Second Unity of the Disciples of Ralirim or shorthanded, The Ralirim or
The Unity
Faction leader: Primarch Carimus Aventum IV
System: The Celestine System
Planet(s)/Territories: Tyral V, a temperate planet with bountiful farmland and bustling tiered cities, and its moon Agartha, a tropical forest moon with settlements mainly focusing on genetic and other scientific research and academics.
Faction Desc: The goal of the Second Unity is to unite all the followers of the Ralirim religion under one banner. The Ralirim religion is based in the knowledge and teachings contained in the word of The Grand Architect Ralirim, the entity solely responsible for the creation of the Universe and mankind. Ralirim manifests within individual “prophets” who spread his word and become The Ralirim religion’s Primarch, and leader. The Ralirim follow strict moral and ethical codes that is set down in their sacred text, The Prime Lexicon. The Ralirim seek to spread “order” to the chaotic Universe that Ralirim created.
The Ralirim beliefs regarding the Primarch are as follows: Primarch's are a unique incarnation of the will and teaching of Ralirim. As one Primarch dies, another incarnation of the prophet is born within the same day, this a great search begins as clerics and disciples are sent out in droves to find the new prophet. Upon being discovered the prophet is taken immediately to Concordia for testing. Eventually after the child's holy nature is reaveled, he is immediately blessed by the Council and crowned Primarch of the Second Unity of the Disciples of Ralirim.
The Tenets of Ralirim as written in The Prime Lexicon
I. In the Beginning Ralirim created everything, and thus everything belongs to Ralirim
II. The Universe is vast and chaotic, and so Ralirim gave birth to Mankind to bring order to his creation.
III. Man is the servant of Ralirim and must follow his word.
IV. Mankind must bring order to the Universe.
V. All of Mankind was created equal
VI. Those who do not serve Ralirim are not of Man
History: The early history of the Disciples of Ralirim is not fully understood, and what little fragments remains are kept secured in the codex vaults on Agartha. What can be certain is even in the earliest days of the Arcturus Imperium, the Disciples of Ralirim existed, though perhaps shrouded in secrecy it may have more resembled a cult than anything else. In the II Historical Codex, it is written that in ASY 3,047 Tyral V officially became the seat of the newly formed Second Unity of the Disciples of Ralirim , and theocracy of Ralirim, with Veerus Caerum II as Primarch.
After the fall of the Imperium, the Ralirim found that the absence of Imperial authority allowed for them to rise in power. As many human feared the xenos insurrections, the Ralirim offered a light in the darkness, a home for mankind. Their numbers grew, but the Ralirim were never able to attain the military presence they so desired in order to begin their “Grand Crusade” as described in the IX chapter of the The Prime Lexicon. There began short lived
Focusing mainly on sustainability and domestic stability, the Pax Ralimus began in and The Ralirum began their age of isolationism. They spread the Tenets of Ralirim through special “missions” to convert the “corrupted” populations around them. They focused research efforts on genetic enhancement in order to compensate for their lack of economy and technology. Sooh with GMO crops and cattle, The Ralirim were able to reach of level of sustainability that many never attain.
Now, as the Grand Duchy begins to fracture, The Second Unity sees an opportunity for the true word of Ralirim to be heard. Order must reign in the chaos.
Government type: Theocracy - Primarch Carimus Aventum IV as the leader
Military Capabilities: A minimal fleet focused on defense, and a land force made up of genetically enhance soldiers, and light vehicles.
Second Unity Fleet
200 Light frigates - fast lightly armed ships, mainly used to transport ground troops
120 Corvettes - fast, moderately armed ship, fighter squadron compliments
40 Carriers - Ships primary function to serve as platform for launching fighter and bomber squadrons
70 Crusader Battlecruisers - heavily armed and heavily armored ships that suffer a loss in speed and maneuverability
10 Inquisition Class Dreadnoughts - Heavily armed, heavily armored, and as fast possible for a ship this size, these ships are the only aspect of the Ralirim fleet that pose a serious threat.
The Sword of Ralirim (Ground and Air forces)
Foot soldiers receive varying degrees of “Baptism” that is the equivalent of being genetically enhanced and undergoing intense and severe physical training.
Clerics: Superior genetically enhanced soldiers that rely on their ability to out smart, out shoot and out maneuver the enemy. They act as personal guards for the Ralirim hierarchy, inquisitors and the spearhead of the Second Unity's ground forces.
Disciple Class Infantry: Foot soldier of the Ralirim, clad with standard issue Mk-7a Ballistics armor, and baptized by Ralirim with minor genetic enhancements. Disciplined and tough, they stand ready to fall in the name of Ralirim.
Clone infantry - Expendable Infantry units that can be produced at quick rates (Funded by Enlil)
Mk 2 "Zealot" Heavy Tank
MX6 Harbinger Combat Mech (Funded by Enlil)
MAT mk 23b Troop transport
P-89d Planetary and Stellar Fighter
Faction Name: The Second Unity of the Disciples of Ralirim or shorthanded, The Ralirim or
The Unity
Faction leader: Primarch Carimus Aventum IV
System: The Celestine System
Planet(s)/Territories: Tyral V, a temperate planet with bountiful farmland and bustling tiered cities, and its moon Agartha, a tropical forest moon with settlements mainly focusing on genetic and other scientific research and academics.
Faction Desc: The goal of the Second Unity is to unite all the followers of the Ralirim religion under one banner. The Ralirim religion is based in the knowledge and teachings contained in the word of The Grand Architect Ralirim, the entity solely responsible for the creation of the Universe and mankind. Ralirim manifests within individual “prophets” who spread his word and become The Ralirim religion’s Primarch, and leader. The Ralirim follow strict moral and ethical codes that is set down in their sacred text, The Prime Lexicon. The Ralirim seek to spread “order” to the chaotic Universe that Ralirim created.
The Ralirim beliefs regarding the Primarch are as follows: Primarch's are a unique incarnation of the will and teaching of Ralirim. As one Primarch dies, another incarnation of the prophet is born within the same day, this a great search begins as clerics and disciples are sent out in droves to find the new prophet. Upon being discovered the prophet is taken immediately to Concordia for testing. Eventually after the child's holy nature is reaveled, he is immediately blessed by the Council and crowned Primarch of the Second Unity of the Disciples of Ralirim.
The Tenets of Ralirim as written in The Prime Lexicon
I. In the Beginning Ralirim created everything, and thus everything belongs to Ralirim
II. The Universe is vast and chaotic, and so Ralirim gave birth to Mankind to bring order to his creation.
III. Man is the servant of Ralirim and must follow his word.
IV. Mankind must bring order to the Universe.
V. All of Mankind was created equal
VI. Those who do not serve Ralirim are not of Man
History: The early history of the Disciples of Ralirim is not fully understood, and what little fragments remains are kept secured in the codex vaults on Agartha. What can be certain is even in the earliest days of the Arcturus Imperium, the Disciples of Ralirim existed, though perhaps shrouded in secrecy it may have more resembled a cult than anything else. In the II Historical Codex, it is written that in ASY 3,047 Tyral V officially became the seat of the newly formed Second Unity of the Disciples of Ralirim , and theocracy of Ralirim, with Veerus Caerum II as Primarch.
After the fall of the Imperium, the Ralirim found that the absence of Imperial authority allowed for them to rise in power. As many human feared the xenos insurrections, the Ralirim offered a light in the darkness, a home for mankind. Their numbers grew, but the Ralirim were never able to attain the military presence they so desired in order to begin their “Grand Crusade” as described in the IX chapter of the The Prime Lexicon. There began short lived
Focusing mainly on sustainability and domestic stability, the Pax Ralimus began in and The Ralirum began their age of isolationism. They spread the Tenets of Ralirim through special “missions” to convert the “corrupted” populations around them. They focused research efforts on genetic enhancement in order to compensate for their lack of economy and technology. Sooh with GMO crops and cattle, The Ralirim were able to reach of level of sustainability that many never attain.
Now, as the Grand Duchy begins to fracture, The Second Unity sees an opportunity for the true word of Ralirim to be heard. Order must reign in the chaos.
Government type: Theocracy - Primarch Carimus Aventum IV as the leader
Military Capabilities: A minimal fleet focused on defense, and a land force made up of genetically enhance soldiers, and light vehicles.
Second Unity Fleet
200 Light frigates - fast lightly armed ships, mainly used to transport ground troops
120 Corvettes - fast, moderately armed ship, fighter squadron compliments
40 Carriers - Ships primary function to serve as platform for launching fighter and bomber squadrons
70 Crusader Battlecruisers - heavily armed and heavily armored ships that suffer a loss in speed and maneuverability
10 Inquisition Class Dreadnoughts - Heavily armed, heavily armored, and as fast possible for a ship this size, these ships are the only aspect of the Ralirim fleet that pose a serious threat.
The Sword of Ralirim (Ground and Air forces)
Foot soldiers receive varying degrees of “Baptism” that is the equivalent of being genetically enhanced and undergoing intense and severe physical training.
Clerics: Superior genetically enhanced soldiers that rely on their ability to out smart, out shoot and out maneuver the enemy. They act as personal guards for the Ralirim hierarchy, inquisitors and the spearhead of the Second Unity's ground forces.
Disciple Class Infantry: Foot soldier of the Ralirim, clad with standard issue Mk-7a Ballistics armor, and baptized by Ralirim with minor genetic enhancements. Disciplined and tough, they stand ready to fall in the name of Ralirim.
Clone infantry - Expendable Infantry units that can be produced at quick rates (Funded by Enlil)
Mk 2 "Zealot" Heavy Tank
MX6 Harbinger Combat Mech (Funded by Enlil)
MAT mk 23b Troop transport
P-89d Planetary and Stellar Fighter
You guys still looking for people?
Character Application Sheet WIP - Will finish this weekend
Name: Todd O'Hara
Age: 26
Job: "Motivator"
Appearance
A handsome young man by most standards, if you can look past the the crooked nose and slightly off kilter jaw, occupational injuries. Mr. O'Hara stands a full 6 ft tall, a broad and imposing figure. His back is thick with muscles and his arms 'just' fit into the sleeves of his pinstripe suit. His shoulders make his shadow appear rigid and square. His eyes glisten in the artificial light of the city, and thick dark hair makes him look only more at home in the depths of the city.
Personality: Mr. O'Hara is an embodiment of moral neutrality. He's done terrible things and he's done benevolent things, but the one constant is that he'll do anything for money. The idea of ethics escapes him, and personally he really doesn't care. He'll break the leg of a single mother or he'll make a donation to a widow foundation, actions are not based on thought out process or organized systems of code, but rather on immediate emotional feel.
He's a proud man, and he presents a suave and careless demeanor. This demeanor only falters when aggravated as he has been know to have quite the temper.
Backstory: Born the son of Irish Immigrants, Todd O'Hara never really had much. Growing up education was thrown to the side and what he know he learned on the streets of New York as a news boy. He got his first taste of violence when he made the mistake of joining in a fair work protest. That's where realized what he was gonna do when got older. So he started beating people up for money. He found himself on the other side the protest lines, beating down on protesters, and getting paid by any company who needed "labor motivation".
To summarize: Big guy, small brain. Moral compass - almost non-existent. Works for whoever pays most. "Motivates" employees who may be disgruntled or seek to cause "issues" with production and business.
Name: Todd O'Hara
Age: 26
Job: "Motivator"
Appearance
A handsome young man by most standards, if you can look past the the crooked nose and slightly off kilter jaw, occupational injuries. Mr. O'Hara stands a full 6 ft tall, a broad and imposing figure. His back is thick with muscles and his arms 'just' fit into the sleeves of his pinstripe suit. His shoulders make his shadow appear rigid and square. His eyes glisten in the artificial light of the city, and thick dark hair makes him look only more at home in the depths of the city.
Personality: Mr. O'Hara is an embodiment of moral neutrality. He's done terrible things and he's done benevolent things, but the one constant is that he'll do anything for money. The idea of ethics escapes him, and personally he really doesn't care. He'll break the leg of a single mother or he'll make a donation to a widow foundation, actions are not based on thought out process or organized systems of code, but rather on immediate emotional feel.
He's a proud man, and he presents a suave and careless demeanor. This demeanor only falters when aggravated as he has been know to have quite the temper.
Backstory: Born the son of Irish Immigrants, Todd O'Hara never really had much. Growing up education was thrown to the side and what he know he learned on the streets of New York as a news boy. He got his first taste of violence when he made the mistake of joining in a fair work protest. That's where realized what he was gonna do when got older. So he started beating people up for money. He found himself on the other side the protest lines, beating down on protesters, and getting paid by any company who needed "labor motivation".
To summarize: Big guy, small brain. Moral compass - almost non-existent. Works for whoever pays most. "Motivates" employees who may be disgruntled or seek to cause "issues" with production and business.
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