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Get out of my head woman. Lol. That is so how I was picturing it myself. I figured it was where stuff happened when it all went down at the start and you worded it just right. Yay!!!! The prison part I figured only the worst offenders get out there or the ones they catch that can control nightmares and such. It would be guarded by nulls maybe that can't be effected. Damn That would be a fucked up place to be though. Just saying. The residential would be the only ones that could go through the gates too I would think and only tightly supervised. And no one that has been found guilty except for what I am saying in a minute below could ever go back from the Zone. Harsh but relevant.

The kids that are caught breaking the law I figure would be given 3 chances to reform before age 18 guaranteed there are no deaths. If there are deaths then they would be sent to the Zone but if nothing else happened by the time they 18 could be provisionally allowed back outside. Their families would be given the choice to go to the Zone with them until they are 18 or they would be sent to a detention center. Those families would be allowed out of the Zone for work and such. That way if all went well they could get out of the Zone eventually.

I think that is all I got for now but I am still percolating on some stuff. I also need to go back and read what we have discussed before to make sure I am not contradicting anything we have talked about in the past.

Opinions?

I like the idea of it being opposite and since it cloaks her she can't sense it in others. Like that a lot. Nice

Hmm. The Zone was started as a place for those that can't afford the machines to live and yeah it makes sense that criminals would be sent there. However I am thinking the Zone has sections in it where different groups would live like one part had the criminals and is kind of like a jail area. Another has the poor people that live on the streets. Then another has the residential area where the families that are unable to afford better and maybe were sent there with younger kids that didn't control their stuff or that killed someone are sent or live. It might also be called the Forbidden Zone since the nightmares there are not policed like outside. Damn I am going to have to think on this and see what all I picture. Then I will try and write it out better so that it makes more sense. What do you picture for the Zone?
Haha. Right. The people outside of the Zone have much better prices and such since it is usually safe. Makes the greedy and criminal lyat after it even more. Is why getting out to it when you live in the Zone is tricky.

Something I thought of was that Damia has the control gene true but her mutation cloaks her from Nathan. That way he has never sensed that she can do that just that she is a dreamer too. Something like than maybe. Or she just might be smarter and know more About it so she has better control and can hide it from him. What u think?
Nah. He keeps that very much to himself. He figures once he gets enough then he will tell her about it so they can both live the good life. For now he still doesn't know her well enough to share. And I was kind of thinking that the prices of stuff would be inflated in this world since nightmares are kinda common so 50 grand would be like 20 grand. Nice but not awesome.
Finally posted. Let me know after uread it if something does not make sense or you have questions about. I tried to explain stuff but you know how it goes when it makes perfect sense in your head but someone else reads and are like what the Fuck. Haha. I am just glad to get it posted. I was lazy the past few days and just didn't so am like whew now. *grins*
The noises from down the street were starting to grate on her nerves. It wasn't anything unusual, just the normal sirens and screams that drifted in from the Forbidden Zone, but today they were making her antsy. She sat down in the bed to pull on her black combat boots and started to lace them up. It was the beginning of her work week and she was not looking forward to it at all. It wasn't that her job was bad or anything, but she was just so tired of having to work and work and still barely manage to pay her bills with nothing left to enjoy. Tying the last knot, she sighed and walked over to the dresser and grabbed her purse. It wasn't a long walk to her job so she had plenty of time, but even though she did not have to be there for another hour the thought of staying cooped up inside was more than she could handle. She needed to get out of the apartment and away from the monotony that was her life even if it was only briefly. She passed out of her bedroom and saw her cousin sitting on the living room couch painting her toenails.

"Be careful today, Karen. I heard on the radio earlier that one of the nightmares is still on the loose and if it gets past the border then all hell will break loose. You should be far enough away that it won't be an issue, but still don't take any chances." Rachel said as she finished the toe she was working on and put the cap back on the bottle of polish.

Karen shivered a bit at her cousin's words and replied, "I will be careful. I have my tazer and pepper spray on me. If anything seems odd I will haul ass to the nearest emergency center. Enjoy your day off. You suck you know." She laughed a bit as Rachel stuck her tongue out at her and walked over to the door and let herself outside. She walked down the few steps and started down the sidewalk. The sun was bright and warm but she still felt a chill every so often. Lots of people were out today but no one stopped and made conversation. Everyone kept their eyes on The ground and avoided direct eye contact. The news of the loose nightmare must have made everyone more paranoid than usual and that was saying something. Taking a deep breath, she quickened her steps. She only had about six more blocks before she got to work. Her earlier anticipation of a rest in the park near her job was now just a fleeting thought. All she wanted was to get to work quickly and safely.

With one block left to go, she heard the warning siren go off and her heart started to race. All around her she saw people start to run and scream as they hurried towards the closest emergency center. The nightmare would have to be close by for the siren to go off and by the sounds coming from a few blocks away it was a deadly one. She raced up the stairs to Smithson and family Law just as the PA's on the corner started to broadcast. "Please be advised that a nightmare is nearby. It has taken a medium size creature form. Its saliva and talons have proven deadly on contact. Under no circumstance should you engage this creature. We are tracking down the source and expect for it to be dealt with soon. For now everyone is directed to go to the nearest emergency center or building until otherwise informed." The PA abruptly shut off and the silence lasted for a few seconds before what few people were left on the streets began yelling and running again. Karen hurried through the double doors and a security guard bolted the door and turned on the lockdown sign in the window. Steel shutters came down over the Windows and doors with a hiss and clang and the place was sealed.

Karen went through security and was soon heading for the elevators and the fifth floor where she worked. The next eight hours would probably stretch out forever. This is just a perfect beginning to the work week. I am sure that my boss will be in uber dick mode after all this. If I make it through the day without punching him it will be a miracle. She pasted on her fake smile and walked off the elevator and headed towards her cubicle to begin the joy of data entry.

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After the fun in the shower, Nathan was ready to start the day. He got dressed in his usual jeans, t-shirt, and boots and went into the living room. He grabbed his laptop and pulled it onto his lap and booted it up. He checked his banking account as soon as it was running and smiled when he saw that his latest deposit had come through. Fifty thousand bucks. Not bad for a few hours work. If I can get a few more clients like this then I can retire and just live off the interest. It sure was lucky that I happened to run into that man at the bar one night and for him drunk enough to find out just what he is terrified of and what I could do to make it a reality. I still don't know why a businessman like that was in the Zone but lucky for me though. He knows that if he ever says a word to anyone I will kill him too instead of just ask for a contribution like I did. Maybe later I will go down that little cafe outside the Zone and see if I can find another mark. Since I was never registered they have no way to trace me so it might be worth it this time if I can sneak past the guards.

He grinned at his thoughts. When the laws had first come down about nightmares and their makers, everyone that was found to have the gene was made to register so that if anyone was caught not using their suppressor machine then they could be arrested and made to pay for any damage or deaths that occured from their carelessness. After a few months this became mandatory and testing was done in middle schools across the country since the gene usually showed up around puberty. There were also other ways to catch the late bloomers as well. However, in Nathan's case since he was in the first group that the gene activated in before testing, he managed to get away without being discovered.

He set his laptop to the side and went into the kitchen. Opening the fridge he saw that supplies were getting low again. "Damnit, Damia I thought you were going to do the grocery shopping this week. There isn't shit in the fridge worth eating. What the hell?" he yelled towards the bedroom and frowned. This was the second time that she had not done her part of the chores in a month. He knew she was busy and had responsibilities but Goddamn. He managed to do his shit so why couldn't she. True he did not have a full time job since he mostly worked off the computer from home but that wasn't the point. It was about being part of a team and she was starting to piss him off.

He slammed the fridge door and went into the bedroom to grab his keys and wallet. She was lying on the bed reading something or other and he glared at her before saying, "I am going to the store to do the shopping. When I get back I think we need to have another talk. Plus there is something I want us to do that I will need help with as well. I have an idea that I want to run by you and see what you think." He tried to stay mad but just looking at her made his anger start to drift off. He leant over and have her a kiss before leaving with a muttered "spoiled brat" before leaving. He really did love her but sometimes she drove him nuts.

He closed the gate behind him As he hit the street and went over to his car. It wasn't anything special, but it ran and was an upgrade form the piece of shit he had before. He started it up and pulled slowly out onto the road. While the Zone was fairly safe during the day, it still paid to be vigilant since accidents could happen. He knew of a man just a few blocks away that had been killed While driving when a nightmare had blown his car into the air and wrapped it around a tree. Usually his sense told him when a nightmare was close by but not always. It was another aspect of the gene and the specific mutation he had that let him control his nightmares. It also made him hyper aware of others that dreamt and the, for lack of a better word, resonance that their body put out. It was something that not all dreamers could feel, only those that had control. Well that was just his guess anyways. He only knew or thought this since he used to know another guy that could control his nightmares but the Dumbass had pushed things too far with the wrong guy and ended up dead. That was the vibe he had gotten off of him at any rate. Just went to show that while it was nice to have control it did not make one immortal or anything. They were still human and could die just like a null. Fucking shame that.

Shaking his head at his random thoughts, he turned on the radio and flipped the dial until he came across some music that didn't make him want to hit his head against the dashboard. His stomach growled and he pushed the pedal a little harder. The sooner he got this done the sooner he could eat and run his idea by Damia. He hoped that she was agreeable to it. It was risky but the payoff would be well worth it. It would mean only one thing that he wasn't sure she would be ok with and that was leaving the Zone. Travel outside the walls that was not job related or an emergency was prohibited unless you had the cash to bribe the right people but he knew someone that owed him big time and once outside then things would really become fun.
The machine they stole probably would protect them both since I am sure there are some made for couples and they want to steal the very next. Haha.

I am already playing with the tension a bit in my post so that will work well. Stripper it is if she so wants it. Yay.

Nathan:Those Fuckers better not think they can touch her. I will kill their asses. Plus she told me she would quit soon after we got together. That liar. Me and her are going to have words soon. *glared at the world in general*

As for the blackmailing thing that works well with my post too cause I have a plan for them to go outside the wall and cause some mischief and it can be something to do with Rextons family. They can maybe think that by kidnapping or blackmailing him they can get some money. Not sure on the plan details yet but it would work well. Karen could get involved too somehow with maybe helping Rexton? So many ideas and plans. Fun times ahead. *giggles*
If they can afford the mechanisms then yes it would but most people can't so is why they have to emergency stations and such. Most businesses have protection and I had the Law firm have some kickass ones. I figured they would spare no expense. Lol.

As for Damia, either would be good. A stripper would probably be alright but Nathan gets jealous easily so that could cause some tension. A dealer would work too or she could work at a pharmacy and do a little selling of stuff from the supplies on the sky as well as her acquring things from habitats at night. Haha.
Got a few more questions for ya. What is the name of rextons family firm or do u want me to make something up? I have finished Karen's part and am working on Nathan's. I have Karen working there and figure it would be a multi story place with many offices and such since it is such a big town. She works in the fifth floor and does data entry. Also, something I am doing which I wanted to give u a heads up about is that when a nightmare gets loose there is a system that is in place. There are emergency shelters and a pa sytem which lets people know. A siren goes off and then the pa gives instructions and such. Kinda like a tornado warning thing but that is directly linked to the police and martial system they have since this all started. I hope I am making sense with all this. If not then let me know. You will understand more when I get my post up I think. I also have Nathan being a bad boy and using his talents to get paid by blackmail. Thought that would be fun. Haha. I will try and have it posted in a few days once I get finished with Nathan.

What does Damia do for a living? It is relevant to my post. I can leave it kind of vague like I did for now but was just curious. Ok. That is all for now. Going back to writing.
Yeah she is already annoying Daniel. He will be fairly mouthy I think. He is at his limit for dealing with her and when that happens more of his thoughts come out of his mouth without filtering. Yay.
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