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    1. Plightz 10 yrs ago

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paigesweetheart said
Idk what else to post D: Alyssa is sitting down but idk lol someone come talk to me :D


Same here, gotta wait for Lowkey's post lol
Kinda new here too, first of, welcome :D

Secondly, it's absolutely fine to do so, I don't see why not. Well I am not a mod or anything though.
Night Night both of you.
Ryu said
G'morning for you.Also, get some sleep, what are you doing, being sleep deprived? Isn't healthy for you.


I know you're not talking to me but...
Can't help it dude, vacation!

(Also, wb to the RP, I see you made your character)
Simplicity said
Thanks for the advice/tip/comment :)


Welcome!

Now we wait for the others to post.
Simplicity said
Really :DThanks! I started role playing to get better at writing so thanks! Any constructive criticism or something I can improve on?


Not really, you have really good writing, but one thing I did notice is a small amount of misuse of the comma for lines like;

Simplicity said
and most mindless, task.


Other than that, it's really good
Simplicity said
First post out :)I just ended on a cliffhanger so I'll try to get another post out tomorrow.


That's really good writing o.o
Laine stretched and yawned as the screen said;

Thank you for participating in the Closed Beta!

I haven't really participated in anything though, so it was a hoax?
he laughed to himself and then says "Oh well, I don't mind, seems like alot of people are quite angry though." As he drags his cursor to the red 'X' on the top right. He remembers how he found this site through a forum he was active in, thinking it was pretty interesting, he went to the website and had a small sense of hope. He couldn't find anywhere to sign up. "Weird" he thought.

After making a topic about seeing the
Thank you for participating in the Closed Beta!

No one else seemed to get the message and people were calling him a fake, much to his annoyance but simply dismissed it. Looking at the time he sees that it's 11:54, "Oh well, i'll talk to the people in the forums tomorrow, maybe get this whole thing sorted out" He mutters while laying on the bed.

He never got a chance to.
CondorTalon said
@Plightz: Ah, yes. In the future, please let me know when you make an edit.


Ah, alright, sorry.
Was my character accepted?
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