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Since my character was a bit... not well written, here is a re-write:
Hope this is a bit better? :P Will probably write a second character soon© Second character:
Hello Ploxerdon, I'm Kyle - Grammar Nazi extraordinaire. Few things:
  • Please keep posts in past tense.
  • Though I can't fault your use of paragraphs, I am a little confused as to why you start a new line for nearly every sentence?
  • If your character is attacking a player without using the dueling system (as would appear to be the case in your post), they will become an orange player. That's fine, if that's what you wish for your character. But I thought I'd quickly clarify that point just in case.
Fat Boy Kyle
Hello Kyle, the Grammar Nazi extraordinaire. I agree, i screwed up with time in that post. Looking back at my post, i really have no idea why i started a new line for nearly every sentence, won't do that again. Pain has been an orange for quite a while now, him "dueling" people involves him just attacking random players (even though he doesn't kill them). Thanks for making sure though
Pain is walking outside of the town, with his sword on his back, as he is heading back to the town to take a rest. While walking there, he noticed somebody walking in the distance, a person that didn't look that experienced at fighting. "Lets have some fun.." He said to himself, as he started dashing towards his target. The person turned around, and noticed a guy sprinting at him with a huge sword, as he draws his own weapon. "I guess you are up for the challenge then..." Pain said, as he swings his sword toward the random person, making a clear cut on his face. The random person tries to stab Pain with his one-handed sword, but Pain instead jumps on top of the sword, standing on top of the blade. "Are you even trying? Come on big boy!" He shouted, as he mockingly clapped in his hands. The random person tried to quickly raise his sword up to throw Pain off, but Pain instead jumped up, leaping at his opponent holding his sword in both hands, slicing the opponents body up as he lands down, leaving him near the brink of death. The random person started to cough up blood, as he fell backwards onto the ground, Pain's sword still through his stomach. "Just end it.... I have no purpose of living anymore!" He shouted, as Pain started to move around the sword a bit, dealing even more damage to his opponent. Just before he manages to finish his opponent off, Pain removes his sword from the guys chest. "Let this be a lesson for you weakling... you need to train, or else you will end up dead soon!" He said, as he put his sword back onto his back. Then he started to laugh like a maniac, walking back to town leaving the wounded person there on the ground.
Edit: I want to join btw
Ploxerdon
Nah, you only came here to show off your character. Admit it.
SirBeowulf
Damn you are onto me D: Anyways, posted my character in the CS bin, will get to my first post soon to show some lore for my character.
Edit: I want to join btw
Hello everyone! I am new here, and i will probably stay here for a while. Have done some roleplaying here and there, so looking forward to doing even more. So yeah, wassup? :P Feel free to ask any questions if you have them ^_^
Sooo.. would it be possible to join? I don't know if you guys are planning on having x amount of people joining, so thats why im asking. Also, haven't been playing the game for a while, so wont be running tier 0 decks myself.
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