PopeAlessandros

The Truth Behind The Blaze ~ PopeAlessandros x tenebrae16

*Slow grin from behind duct tape* *Grin continues to widen as Pope turns into Silver Ocelot Pope* *Claws off tape* *Puncesnuggles the Ten-chan*

Nyau~ I have many forms *Grin*

The Truth Behind The Blaze ~ PopeAlessandros x tenebrae16

*Goes back to sobbing pathetically*

The Truth Behind The Blaze ~ PopeAlessandros x tenebrae16

*Mumbles from behind duct tape* *Shiny sad eyes*

The Truth Behind The Blaze ~ PopeAlessandros x tenebrae16

*Falls into sad heap and just sobs silently behind duct tape*

The Truth Behind The Blaze ~ PopeAlessandros x tenebrae16

M loves me, forever and always, and delights in my evil ways *Wicked grin* Yes, I am an evil, evil man, who just so happens to be lovable and adorable and irresistibly cute sometimes :P *Basks in the admiring hate* Mwahahahaaa! You can't be properly mean because ya don't got the spirit for it luv. You need a particular something to be properly ebil like me(And yes I spelled it that way on purpose). *More evil grinning* But that's fine, you're good the way you are and oh so fun to watch. *Chuckles*

Yush! I am in the US of A. Where do you happen to be if you don't mind my asking?

The Truth Behind The Blaze ~ PopeAlessandros x tenebrae16

Yeah, you are adorable when flustered and I take all the credit for that, and with pride! *Grin* Unfortunately for you Bonnie died a long time ago so you'll have to content with my goofy grin as I watch you squirm. Sorry, that sounded evil :P I tend to be evil quite a bit when I take a liking to someone(Friend wise, as I am in a committed relationship). You are very cute in my eyes and nothing you can say now will change that *Grin*

Your writing is good, and can only get better. I looks forward to continuing this RP. Happy Turkey Day! Unless you are somewhere out of the united states, then I just hope you have a good day. This is not me saying good-bye, it just crossed my mind to say :P

The Truth Behind The Blaze ~ PopeAlessandros x tenebrae16

Can I just say, and I mean this in a friendly way, you sound adorable when you're flustered? At least, you come across as flustered, so correct me if I'm wrong, but it just really comes across as cute *Grin*

Anyways, I am enjoying RPing too, I too like moving things along sometimes(Just did a 5 day time skip in one of my RPs) but only after talking to my partner about it. I also don't mine events being inserted between events in my partner's posts, in fact I do it too, however I try to leave it so they can actually respond to it. In this case you could have had Xeph respond to what my guy was saying with his evil plans in mind, but stop the actual post with him rounding up the kids so I could have added my own little hunting scene or at least interactions with the kids and/or teacher. Then in your next post had Xeph bring Lai down and dump all that work off on him.

Also, just a note, and this is not a criticism, but you do realize you have far more paragraphs in your post than you put? Some of your para can be broken into two or even three, so if you're worrying about paragraph count, you're doing fine :P

So, by all means, insert all you want, just keep an eye out for things a nosy little angel may want to put forth his two cents on and keep the questions coming. I will do my best to answer them in a timely manner :P

The Truth Behind The Blaze ~ PopeAlessandros x tenebrae16

I'll work with it this time, don't worry, just, try and pace yourself back a bit. Each day doesn't have to pass within a certain number of posts. Heck, I have an RP where the love making scene has stretched 20 post, and it's still ongoing, and the scene is only 2/3 done :P RPing is all about responding AND moving the story forward, but responding first :P Look for moments you think my character may have something to do/say and then ask me if he wants to do/say anything or if you can brush right past it. We'll figure out a rhythm, eventually :P You're running just a little bit fast for me right now. I'm more of a savorer than a racer :P

Lost On Course To Tomorrow ~ PopeAlessandros x ShadowRaeper

This is a one-on-one RP between PopeAlessandros and ShadowRaeper, not us, don't post. Also, M/M, don't like, don't read.


Base Premise:

~In the time of machines and space travel, magic has become all but a myth. Unfortunately for one young soldier he's about to find out that all those old myths carry quite the bite. During his survival training he finds a young man asleep in the woods. Separated from his unit and unsure what to do next, he decides to consult the young man, thinking he must live in the area. The youth indeed lives nearby, though further away than the soldier could ever imagine. The young man, lost and without his memories, will take them both on a ride they'll never forget.


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Saved space

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So, do you wanna start with Plot or Setting?

The Truth Behind The Blaze ~ PopeAlessandros x tenebrae16

You have an. . . .odd spatial thing going on. In my post, there is nothing about going inside or there being more than a few seconds between the first thing Lai says and the second. In essence you put a huge chunk of happening in between two things that that in my time frame happened back to back, and in doing so left me unable to really contribute to said happenings other than making my character a tag along. . . .In other words, I said my character spoke here, and you scrubbed that and put it in your own timeline. To me, Lai said all that stuff outside near that shadowy spot and away from prying ears. . .The only problem here for me that has me on the fence about this is(Well two things) I didn't put in that it was all at once, and it made for a funny post. . . .Still, this falls back to the 'not asking' issue. Also, this rushed things past my character and negated his participation. . .It's rather off-putting.

Building the relationship should be fun.