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Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Since I have school for eleven more hours, more reviews are planned on a later point of the day.

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

@Purrfect
Several things there are a no go. Genin only have one Chakra Nature, so either Water or Lightning.
To your KG, I am going to have to say a no to the second part.
As a Genin, having both Good Chakra Control and Higher Reserves of Chakra are not being accepted by me - either one of them alone will be good. Remember, we are talkng about a Genin here.
@Nicias
I accept it as well. Feel free to post it into the CS, I do wish you a pleasant time in our role play !
@Nytefall
I am not entirely fine with the " Regains blood when sleeping part " and would like to see it either changed or changed to bring it to balance.
Other than that, Gero´s notes.
@Glithcy
I approve !

Exodus | Hard Sci-Fi NRP | High Casual - Advanced

I do wish you good luck with your exams!
I will keep the subscription active in case anything changes.

Exodus | Hard Sci-Fi NRP | High Casual - Advanced

Any chance of try and bringing in, let´s say new players?
I really, really like the settings, and ... well, I like everything about it.

Exodus | Hard Sci-Fi NRP | High Casual - Advanced

Any chance of still joining this masterpiece?

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Ryoku Samidare
The Amekage

When nobody reacted to his inquire to enter, Ryoku sighed. Good thing he had the file prepared. It was designed for two Anbu operatives working in The Fang Country. One of the operatives will approach the government of the country on an official level. He will offer a treaty of "mutually beneficial cooperation" for the both villages, which will effectively place The Fang Country into a vassal position. That is when the second operative will either join in or quit. If the agreement will be accepted, the first operative will carry a scroll that contains the necessary documents in a sealed form. The Anbu knows how to unseal it and make the treaty official. All wind end well and Amegakure will be able to grow. A growth that will benefit both villages.

If the offer will be refused, the mission starts for the second operative. He will roam the underworld of the Country in search of any possible dissidents who would like to have the country in a cooperation with Amegakure. Not his way of doing things, but if his village was no longer to be ignored, he had to show the world they are ready to expand their interests. And that they can take care of them by themselves. Walking to the doors, he leaned down and pressed the file under the door for the operatives to find it. With a small smirk on his face, he returned to his desk to check some documents before going to meet Lady Hoshi.

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Hiroshi Hon
Konohagakure Jounin, Team 6 Sensei

"Will you float on the surface like leaves ... or sink down below like stones?"

Hiroshi could only nod at Shinko´s apparent reason for skipping the introduction. Whatever the case was, they needed to move forward. Most teams were already on their missions, but Hiroshi wanted to teach his team something first - and that teamwork could compensate for a smaller arsenal of techniques in the disposal of Genin. Seeing them all tied with the rope, they took their planks. While he was tying the rope to his own waist, he observed his team. Shinko appeared to catch up, but then again, as soon as she tied the rope to her waist, she seems to be lost in herself again. At the same time, Suzume urged them to move with cold determination. Something he approved and loathed at the same time, but she was the only one to take the initiative. Something he liked to see so soon. Shizumi, too only tied the rope and waited with his plank.

Moving first, Hiroshi dropped his plank of the surface of the water and walked towards it on the surface of the water, carefully sitting down and keeping the plank balanced all the time. He assumed a meditating position on it and looked at his students." As you can all see, the plank did not move. It remained in balance without sinking or getting me wet. Why is that? I am confident in my abilities? Partially. It is because I am in balance with myself. Because I am in a state of balance, I can keep my surroundings balanced as well. The journey to finding your inner balance is a hard and turbulent one, and while I am here to help you, I can only help you with starting. The rest of the steps must be taken by each one of you personally."

Hiroshi took a brief pause and then pointed at the rope." You must be wondering why the rope, haven´t you? This exercise has two purposes. One is to teach you the importance of balance. The second is to teach you the necessity of trust in teamwork. You can keep your plank in balance by having faith in yourself. In the same way, you can keep the planks of your teammates and that of mine in balance by having faith in your team. If we will all do this exercise as it should be, we will float on the surface like leafs. If we will fail to trust each other ... we will sink like stones."

With that being said, Hiroshi mentioned his team to follow him and he started to practice the molding of chakra, forming the Ram Seal and holding it ... still perfectly in balance.

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Masami Hyuuga
Konohagakure Genin, Team 9

Their teamwork was working! Not as much as Masami hoped it will work, but it was the first time they went on a mission. Masami had her doubts over certain aspects of it, bud decided to keep them for herself. There was time to discuss them after the mission. Narrowly dodging a stream of water from the turtle, Masami landed. She was warned by her Byakugan but the speed of the technique surprised her - this was indeed one hell of a big turtle. And weird. She was really tempted to ask Hiron-Sensei about the whereabouts of this turtle after the mission, but first things first. Stopping the turtle first - asking questions later. Something told her the answer would be ... either weird or funny. Or the combination of both. Smiling a bit, she focused on the turtle and she had an idea.

But the turtle had an idea as well and it executed it faster. Pulling back most of its body into the shell, it started spraying mud all around - and gaining quite a momentum as it approached the lake. Frowning a bit as the first projectiles of mud approached her, she realized she could deal with them using her Gentle Fist, but that was not going to stop it. A plan formulated in her mind, a bold one - and she immediately shared it via the communicator." Yes! Shikaroku, Mia - we need to make it stick out that large head of it again! Either make it angry or something! I think I will be able to land a Bottom Palm from under! Any better ideas?!" It was difficult to talk and defend at the same time, but her training routines payed off. And to prove it further, she slowly started to approach the turtle, confident in her teammates doing their share of the job.

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Shinri Rai
Kirigakure Genin, Team 14

Rai scoffed at the reply of Hayashi-sensei, but decided not to push it further. He thought about questioning the bandits to learn if there is more of them around. What good was it to strike at them, time and time again if they could end it all in one strike? The move of his team was lacking some logic in his opinion, but he kept it for himself. He wanted to avoid further humiliation in front of his teammates. He was bad at receiving this kind of treatment, and now somebody will have to be his target. For what? For simply venting his frustration and anger ... and when he was angry, he knew no limits. His more primal instincts awoke in this state. And in this state, he thirsted for bloodshed.

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

If you are referring to Kimimaro with his Dead Bone Pulse Kekkei Genkai, I personally will only approve it in balanced conditions. Then again, I am confident you will be able to balance it out just fine ;-)

Also, a note for all to see - I am attending an AnimeShow that is held every year in our Capital + a Midterm from Calculus is approaching on Monday. I apologize for everybody delayed by this absence.