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5 yrs ago
Current I promise I'm not dead, guys! Coming back from a ten day trip tomorrow
5 yrs ago
Another interview and more hectic events Be back ASAP!
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5 yrs ago
Crazy flooding down here! Be back on Monday.
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5 yrs ago
Hey guys! School started this week in earnest, so replies will be a bit slower.
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Thoughts on your thoughts:
-RIGHT! Totally forgot about how Vitiate was behind all this. Kinda the "Apex Sith" in this whole affair.
-Yes, I agree. I was SO excited when Bioware released the SoR expansion and then I read through the plot online and I just shuddered. Revan would NEVER do a lot of the things he did in that storyline.
-Ohhh, gotcha. I played through about 11 chapters of KOTFE, but never got to the point where Vitiate revealed that he was trying to use the Outlander as his new avatar. So my question is: how is Vano going to find them? Will she disappear from the Qyaari academy altogether and teleported somehow? Will she have already gotten on a ship and was on her way to Zakuul?

So basically our plotline would go something like:
-Go find Meetra at this remote base.
-Arcann and Vaylin intercept, battle ensues.
-From there...well, does Vitiate somehow intervene through Vano? Or some other way? Renso could communicate with multiple people, so I assume Vitiate (who surpasses Renso in power) could do the same and potentially give one of our party members extra power to give Arcann/Vaylin the creeps? Or could Vitiate possess Arcann AND Vaylin?
-In either case, Meetra dies here. How? I don't know if Arcann would willingly kill Meetra due to the powerful bargaining chip she is, but Vaylin is just cooky enough to do it in order to spite Revan and his gang of upstarts. If Vitiate possesses Vaylin/Arcann, then he could kill Meetra in order to get Revan off-balance enough to do something headstrong or foolish.
-The party manages to evacuate without Meetra and Yerbol will...well, let's just say he'll be changed from this encounter for a while (I can't give it away xD).

After that, we can start to piece together how to stop Vitiate. I'd be ok trying to find a solution other than Vitiate's father, seeing as I kinda feel like we've hit our limit on finding older and more powerful beings to fight the slightly younger, older more powerful beings xD
Hmmm...how about we skip forward to where Meetra is being held? The team can infiltrate where Meetra is being held to find Arcann and Vaylin waiting for them.

By the way, did we talk about:
-Where Meetra is being held? I imagine that they wouldn't keep her somewhere easily accessible; maybe on a remote base on Zakuul somewhere? It could explain how Revan found her without having to comb the galaxy.
-How Valkorian is involved in this? Will he be a figure in the shadows, permanently dead or active in some fashion? IIRC, Valkorian used basically an avatar to be the Emperor that the JedI Knight (in our case, Voldon) killed in JK storyline. That would mean that Valkorian could still be alive somehow.
Alright! So here we are.

Just so I can remind myself of Act I:
-Aria kills Lysa, Aria and Yerbol fight, discover a Star Map that leads to Quensu
-Duo go into the temple, find all sorts of stuff, including crazy flying blind force beast (one of our favorite creations, honestly)
-Report back, Bracknell and Saresh form an alliance, start to colonize Force users.
-Tython and Korriban implode.
-Retreat to Zinuthra after assembling remaining Masters and Lords.
-Fight against Bracknell rages for months.
-Finally Bracknell finds Zinuthra, launches full scale attack.
-Aria and Yerbol slay Bracknell on his own ship with the dogs.
-Peace (relatively)

Act II:
-Discovery of the Xiss and our favorite blue-skinned seductress.
-All sorts of Xiss try to overthrow the newly minted government.
-Eventually find where Xiss were created by True Sith, kill them, end of story.

Obviously this is truncated, but just trying to capture everything the way I remember.

How much change would you want to incorporate into the story? I've got a few ideas which I'll list in a second.

Edit: What I meant to say was: what do we want to do for the time skip? I'll get the ideas in a minute. I listed the events of Act I and II for later when we're ready to start that part of the story.
Preliminary stuff


Hi all! Redeemed here with a hankering to get back into writing after a year of...well, strangeness in my personal life. So good to be back with you!

Below is the normal "here's stuff about me". I've tried to keep it short:
-Like many of you, I work full-time, have a family and do things that require me to be away from the site. I try to post at least once a day, if not once every other day. If there's a period of time where I'll be gone, I WILL let you know. I'd ask the same courtesy from you.
-I LOVE worldbuilding, collaborating and talking to my partners about where we're headed. I also enjoy spontaneity, but I'd love to have a dialogue with you about the general direction of where we're going with the story, characters, etc.
-I've been ghosted by others and I have ghosted some in the past. I don't like either. Please let me know if you want to stop replying and I will extend the same courtesy if need be. I don't take it personally and we can even try something new if you'd like that :)
-I do enjoy exploring "mature" themes, but I keep things PG-13 for the most part. Fade to black is something I prefer, but I've become more open to exploring tasteful ways of expressing that act in the story IF it is something that makes sense for the characters and progression of the plot. We can work that out as we go.
-I'm a guy and much more comfortable playing guys, but I can write female NPC's. Just not main characters. The more noble gender eludes me when it comes to writing them well as a main character.
-I really hope this doesn't sound pretentious, but I will ask for a writing sample from you. Not to judge you at all, but I want to see if our writing styles are compatible. Speaking of writing styles, I guess I consider myself "advanced" (goodness that sounds elitist...I'm sorry xD) and I write on average three to four paragraphs, but it can be longer or shorter depending on what the situation calls for. If you'd like to know what my writing style is like, please feel free to check out a Star Wars AU thread that my longest standing writing partner and I have created. @The ElvenQueen won't mind a shameless plug for our long-running story XD



The stuff you're actually interested in


Right then, onto the plots! I've got a few ideas below and I'll update this as frequently as possible.







Feel free to send me a PM and we can go from there! :)
Hi guys! Was actually a member of the site for a long time, but had to step away due to some personal issues. Now that I'm finally pulling myself out of a very dark place mentally, I'm getting the urge to write again. Decided to create a new account for a fresh start. Looking forward to writing with you all!
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