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開けオメ、in a sense, I guess! Congrats on a strong start so far, folks. =)
"I beg your pardon!" A cry split the early morning stillness, ringing bright and clear through the chill grey air. There was some muffled tapping, the sound of someone rapping on a wooden partition or door. After a few moments, the call came again. "I beg your pardon!"

Touka shuffled her feet slightly, her sandals sliding almost smooth against the cold grey stones of the road. They were beaten-up and old, nearly worn through; she would have to make a new pair later. The thought that it might be embarrassing to arrive here, at this particular place, with shabby and worn-out waraji crossed her mind briefly, and she snorted. If the human pup was to scorn her for something as trivial as her shoes, how shocked would the faces of the elders be when she returned and told them just where their misplaced faith had gone? How sweet would it be? If she was turned away here, she'd head back immediately, not even staying to rest a night or fix her sandals, not in this house. Well, maybe she'd steal the pup's. Let him feel just how horrible it was to have to walk with near-naked feet.

She raised her hand to knock again, rapping the same spot on the wooden gate. It was probably wood cut around here; she recognized the hard pine. "I beg your pardon," she shouted again, trying to mask her irritation. Times like this always gave her an upsetting little itch in the small of her back, and she stiffened, trying without much hope to scratch her own back with the weight of her obi. It was nice enough, a lovely orange and very soft, but it still didn't feel right. And again, dressing up for a pup! Maybe she could just deliver Grandma's letter and leave. No one would know the difference if she said she had been insulted at the gate - and really, being made to wait this long was an insult. She glanced back over her shoulder at the village below, much larger than her hometown. Smoke was just starting to waft up against the slate-grey sky; she sniffed and smelled cooking fish. She bit her lower lip.

Well, maybe she'd give them the opportunity to insult her over breakfast.
Congrats, Sylph! Can't wait to get started here. Should we have our characters arriving just in time for Ryuunosuke's birthday or somesuch?
Yeah, it seems fine to me. Particularly if Hatamoto Sr thinks that his son is useless in a fight; it'd be safer to have him in Mitsumine land.

Incidentally, if anyone wants a hand picking kanji for their characters' names, I'd be glad to help with what I can. =)
I don't think it's my place to critique another player's signup, but I will say that I have no idea where you're going with Yamato or what role you intend for him to play. You have an idea somewhere in there, but it's almost impossible to pick out among the non-sequiturs and vagaries in the bio and personality sections. Why does he need Zen to stay awake when people are talking to him, especially when he himself volunteered for a service role? Why was there an 'intellectual minority' studying him? What makes him anomalous?

From a story perspective, though, this is more important: What are his goals in life, and what will he be striving for in the roleplay? If his one and only goal is to protect the Mitsumine heir and he's already doing that, he has nothing to aim for, and no reason to be involved with any characters aside from Ryuunosuke. The charm is a possible hook, but none of our characters have reason to know his mother or recognize the charm even if they were to see it, so that would have to be a hook explored by you yourself, or potentially by Sylph as Takeshi. 'Strong, silent type' characters are very hard to play in ways that make them interesting to write for and for other players to interact with.

Just my two cents.
よろしく、ジワン。 =)

You said you were looking to practice your Japanese, right? I'd be willing to lend a hand if you're interested.
Here's my character sheet, finally.

Name: Hakurou Touka 白狼 藤花
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Race: Youkai
Appearance: Here.
In her human guise, she has black hair and black eyes, and hides her tail and ears.
Personality: Impetuous and a little headstrong, Touka is an energetic girl. She has strong regard for her house and her relatives, and is very proud to have been born ookami and a member of the Hakurou clan. She believes that the good of her family and their homes in the mountains are paramount, and has little patience for the intricacies of human politics or most humans themselves; she knows almost nothing about these topics and excuses her ignorance with the belief that the topics are beneath her, or that humans are too short-lived for it to really matter who currently sits on something as impermanent as a daimyo’s throne. This view of hers has been questioned multiple times by her elders, who point to the trained exorcists of the Phoenix clan and the wise rule of the Kirin Emperor as reasons to respect, if not love, humanity; she remains unconvinced. At heart she’s a good and honest girl, though, if straightforward at times.
Skills and Abilities:
-Wolf form: Touka can shapeshift between humanoid and wolf form, and is equally at home in both. In her wolf form, she appears pure white to people who can perceive the supernatural, and dark grey to those who cannot. In both forms her eyes are yellow.
-Tracking: Touka has an amazing sense of smell, even in her human form. Even people who take steps to approach noiselessly or conceal their presence can’t sneak up on her, unless they coincidentally (or purposefully) approach from downwind. The perfumes and incenses of courtly life dismay her, but she can bear it unless she’s trapped in a stuffy room with people enjoying incense. She is also very good at hunting, though only in her wolf form.
-Calligraphy: Touka’s one marketable skill in elite society is her proficiency with the brush. Skilled in both writing characters and making ink paintings, she has little mind for writing poetry, but can make it look very good on a piece of parchment. This skill helps with her ability to establish barriers, as well.
-Warding: Having been raised at least partially seriously as a shrine maiden, Touka can perform minor acts of magic relating to shrine protection, including setting up minor wards and barriers. In order to get the most strength out of this ability, she has to channel energy into a character or invocation painted on the warded object.
Possessions and Assets:
Touka’s major combat ability is in her wolf form, but she carries a short, straight blade strapped to her back to defend herself in human form if she has to, and to act as a deterrent. She carries a small portable writing kit with her as well, a brush and sealed inkpot in a lacquered box that she keeps in her belt.
She brought most of her possessions to the Mitsumine manor with her – two formal kimono, one in orange and one in indigo; her everyday outfit, pictured above; a futon and pillow; and a gift of a wolf-fang wakizashi for Ryuunosuke that her mother made her bring. She hasn’t decided whether he’s worthy of it yet.
Bio: Born deep in the mountains of the Mitsumine holding, Touka spent much of her life out in the wilds, running free through the ancient foothills and hunting with the packs of her ancestors. Her parents, more conscientious than most of the humans in the village were about keeping up the local shrine, insisted that she learn some techniques and spells and serve at least a little as a shrine maiden, in order to interact with humans; as time passed, she began to scorn the villagers who didn’t pay the shrine proper respect and who only came to pray when something was wrong. Eventually this turned to scorn for most of humanity, and despite her parents’ best efforts, she has maintained this derision for the politics of humankind stubbornly since then.
When Mitsumine Ryuunosuke, the eldest son of a family once held in high regard by the Hakurou clan, came of age, the clan held a large meeting at the mountaintop shrine of their patriarch to discuss what was to be done about the boy leader. Touka, wondering what was so impressive about a family that had lost its pack leader and was relying on a child to lead, finally annoyed her parents to the extent that they volunteered her to travel to Mitsumine Takeshi’s manor, bearing gifts, to give the family the continued goodwill of the Hakurou clan. At the suggestion of her grandmother, she also bears a signed and sealed letter to Takeshi, asking his pardon and asking that he look after her for a while, to help her see more of the world, grow and mature. The same letter also states that if Ryuunosuke so desires, he has permission to court Touka.
Working on it, I swear!
I'll get to work on my application soon, as well. Sorry for the wait, everyone! I've been working out some details with Sylph.
Bumping this back up.
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