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I gave her a backstory and I don't think a princess is too far fetched since Dragon Ball has monarchies in the series


I just need you to add an origin, Weird Tales. And what you plan on doing with the character in the RP as far as story goes, like I said before, if you know what I mean. XD

I don't think a princess is far-fetched either. 1Hawkeyes was just saying that the character needs an origin to explain everything, because she's not as easy to grasp as everyone else.
@rhema13

Hell yes I'll be a Red Ribbon villain. Be back in a bit with the app.


@Doc Doctor I am excited to see what you come up with!

@Weird Tales Well, it's important to know your character's backstory because she's so unique. With a character like Gin or Shin we don't need a background as much because they can be explained through story. With Princess she has such a unique aspect of her unlike any Z-fighter that it would be hard to really add her into the story properly without any better understanding. It would be like adding Pokemon into a war thread. No one understands why that would be good or how to put it in unless you give Ash a backstory that fits the plot, or can be fitted in. I hope that makes sense, I just woke up. XD


@Weird Tales This differs only slightly from what I would have responded to you. XD
Here's my second character

Name: Princess Aria

Age: 12

Gender: female

Le powah level (average strong person should be around 100 to start): 180

Who were le trained by?: the great fairy dragon

For how long?: six years

Alignment: tries to be lawful good, but becomes chaotic neutral when pissed off

Race: human

If you could have one wish granted by the eternal dragon, Shenron, what would it be?: world wide cuteness

Abilities:

Cute Beam: she fires off a pink beam of energy

Pink Puff Puffs: Aria shoots out balls of pink energy and when they explode they release a puff of pink smoke.

Rainbow Wave: she charges up energy in her hands and then fires off a powerful rainbow beam of power.

Rage Attack: when angered, Aria surrounds herself in red hot flames and goes on a rampage, attacking with punches and kicks

Do you enjoy perverted old people?: it depends

Looks:


Personality: cute, nice, can be hot headed, vengeful and tenacious. Do not insult her dolls or she will murder you.

Crush: none yet

origin (optional):

Other: she has a golden scepter that she uses as a weapon and can fire off beams of energy by channeling her power into it.


Hey, Weird Tales. I just have a few questions with the character.

1. What do you plan on doing with her story-wise? Where does she fit into all of this? I'm sure you have some ideas.

2. What is her origin? Who is the great fairy-dragon? Where does the princess status come from?

Those are really my big ones, I think it's important that things like that are answered before I accept, because right now I'm just trying to get a good envisionment as to what you're planning for this character. I hope you get what I mean. Thanks, Tales.

Also, @Doc Doctor...
I'm just scared the thread is going to become too crowded with heroes. If you have any villain ideas for the Red Ribbon Army, you can totally jump right in. I don't think I'll be accepting any protagonists until we get to Dragon Ball Z.
"Look at that, folks! It seems like Samu managed to easily block Shin's attack!" The announcer explained to the crowd, as the blow was stopped by Samu's hand. Shin had moved so quickly, the announcer assumed he had only thrown a single punch. If he would have saw the eye-poking incident, Shin would have received a warning. "Uh-oh! It looks as if Samu's using his teeth and claws as weapons now too! How will the boy counterattack!?" The announcer continued to express the just of everything that was going on for the people both up close, and also very far away from the arena.

'That wasn't a single punch that kid threw! It was three attacks! Collectively known as the Jan Ken Fist! Only a select group of people are aware of that move! Who is this boy, really!?' Jackie Chun questioned, as he watched the battle from the outskirts of the temple with the others. 'Could his father really be?...' The turtle hermit questioned to himself, as the deceased fighter flashed through his mind.

'That idiot! If he would have just let the kid poke him in the eyes, the battle would already be over!' Eno angrily expressed in his head, as he clenched his fists. He understood Samu wanted to get a good fight out of the match, but if a person can take a win, he should. At least, that's what Eno always thought. If it were him out there, he wouldn't have wasted any more time than he needed to, and would have gotten the kid disqualified.

"Yikes!" Kiro exclaimed, as he jumped back a bit with every bite Samu snapped at Shin. A bite like that would leave more than just a scratch, at least, that's what Kiro figured. The battle had only just begun, and things were already getting intense.

Master Shen simply smirked, as he watched Samu dodge the poking attack. This pleased the crane master, as he felt as if the boy, along with all those supporting him, needed to learn who was the superior fighter. Especially with Roshi talking how he was.
"Fighting in the bright blue uniform is Shin! Which as you've probably have noticed," He laughed a bit to himself, as Shin waved and introduced himself to everyone. "Is quite the friendly character! Don't let that fool you, though, folks! If he's made it this far, he must be full of surprises!" The announcer reminded them, as he turned his attention to the other fighter. "And in the green and yellow, Samu! Who doesn't quite look like someone you'd want to mess around with!" He laughed, as a lot of the more animal-like people in the audience cheered for the fighter who seemed most relatable.

"Hmph, just watch and learn, Roshi." Shen laughed, as he leaned on the brick wall that separated the audience from the arena grounds, eager to watch the beat-down unfold. "This kid won't last ten seconds against one of my most skilled pupils." He assured his rival, as the announcer continued on.

"Okay, guys! Let's try and keep this nice and clean!" He asked of Samu and Shen, as he backed away to the outskirts of the platform. The announcer lifted his microphone high in the air, as he screamed, "Let's get those punches flying!"

A helper in the background sounded the gong once again, as the battle began.

Eno crossed his arms, as he halted at the other side (from Kiro) of the temple's entrance to get a good look at the battle. Eno saw a couple of Shin's fights, but it was extremely difficult to get a read on where he stood in power, as the boy defeated all of his opponents so quickly. He had no idea what the outcome of the battle would be, and that made him uneasy. His face was shown to be calm, as revealing any emotion would only make him seem weak to everyone else, but the young man was very nervous nevertheless.
@NacNak @1Hawkeyes @Shazbot21 @Weird Tales

FIGHT TO THE DEATHHHH

Meanwhile, in the distance...



I also did Shin. XD
"Number five, alright..." The announcer confirmed, as he wrote her name on the fifth line. "That puts you in round three, with Jackie Chun." He informed.

"What's that!?" Jackie Chun exclaimed, as he inched just a bit closer, cupping his hand behind his ear. "Who's my opponent!?" He laughed, inching just a bit farther towards the announcer.

"Oh, I apologize, sir. I said you and Majin Eve will be fighting in the third fight." The announcer repeated, assuming that the old man was simply hard of hearing.

"That's what I thought you said!" The old master began to laugh uncontrollably, as he tried to contain himself from jumping straight through the ceiling out of pure excitement. "You young people really know how to spoil an old man..." He whispered, Chun wrapped his arm around the announcer, as he admired Eve from afar.

"Sir, I had no part in choosing who you would end up fighting. It was purely random." The announcer explained, almost angrily, as he pushed Jackie Chun off of him. "Ehem." The announcer awkwardly coughed, as he dusted off his pants before continuing on. "This will be single elimination, in a full regulation-sized arena. You lose if you fall outside of the ring, stay down for ten counts, or give up. But poking in the eyes," he pointed to both of his eyes, which were hidden away by his sunglasses. "or hitting in the private parts is not allowed!" He further explained, gesturing to his own groin. "Just stay here, and I'll come back when it's time." With that, he excused himself from the group, and proceeded outside.
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"Drinks!?" Shen angrily shouted. "The last thing I want to do is go out in public and be seen with your stupid face! I'm embarrassed you and I even trained under the same master!" He continued on his rant, but quickly cut things short, as he noticed the crowd began to hush down a bit. Shen looked up to see that a blonde announcer was approaching the stage.

"Now, ladies and gentlemen," he exclaimed once he reached the center, now easily seen by most people, holding his microphone close to his face. "are you ready!?" He asked, while already knowing what the response was going to be.

The crowd went wild, throwing numerous hats and caps in the air, screaming at the top of their lungs, showing that they were indeed prepared.

"That's right, people! It's time for the 21st World Martial Arts Tournament!" He continued to explain, as the crowd only grew louder with anticipation.

"Okay, and here are the big match-ups for the tournament's first round..." He trailed off, attempting to keep everyone on the edge of their seats. "The first match, Shine versus Samu!" He revealed. "Second match, Gin versus Akita!" The announcer continued on. "Fight three, Majin Eve versus Jackie Chun!" The man explained. "And match four, Kiro versus Eno!" He ended.

Kiro gulped, sticking his head just outside the temple's entrance, as he got a good look at the stage, as well as the intimidating crowd, just as his name was revealed.

"The first match between Shin and Samu will begin momentarily, so don't go to the lemonade stand!" The announcer warned the crowd in a failed attempt at comedy. "Before we get things fired up, let me remind you that this year's winner will receive a prize of 500,000 zeni! With that said, let's welcome the esteemed director of the tournament who has a few words of wisdom to start this baby off."

An extremely old dog-man passed by Kiro, as he climbed onto the stage.

"Please, go ahead, sir." The announcer whispered to the dog-man, as he passed him the microphone.

The old man took the microphone, and walked a few paces forward, to make sure everyone heard his wise words.

The whole crowd went dead silent, eager to listen to whatever the director had to say.

"Ehem..." He mumbled into the microphone, as he looked all around the audience, making sure everyone was paying attention. "Ruff!" He barked, as it echoed throughout the crowd. The director handed the microphone back to the announcer, never taking his eyes off of the crowd.

"I-Isn't that profound!?" The announcer exclaimed, as if trying to tell the audience to clap and cheer.

The entire crowd stayed silent, not really sure what to make of things, as one man awkwardly coughed.

"And now, the first match of the tournament!" The announcer quickly shifted gears before anyone got too bored, as a gong was rang by two of the helpers in the distance. "Will the contestants please come done!?" He exclaimed, as he looked back at the temple's entrance.

The crowd went wild once again, shrugging off the lame speech that was given, as they continued to cheer madly in anticipation of the two great fighters.

"I think that means you, Shin." Kiro explained, as he looked back at his new friend, turning his attention away from the crowd on the outside. Him and Shin were in pretty similar situations. They both had to fight two really strong Crane fighters. "Go get 'em, man!" He laughed, as he patted Shin on the back.

"Finish him off quickly, there's no reason to stall his defeat." Eno reminded Samu, the quicker the better, he always thought. There was a lot riding on this fight, as their Master Shen would be watching. If Samu lost, disgracing their school as fighters who could be defeated by children, Shen could very well kill the man-wolf. Eno would just say that he was worried about the school's reputation, but he wouldn't want to see his furry partner end up dying, even if it were justified.
@NacNak Beautiful! I'll write up a reply ASAP! Let the tournament BEGINNNNN!
Thank you, thank you. :3

Also, when you get off of work, but there aren't any new replies. ;_;

@Weird Tales

I think I said a little bit before, but Shazbot21 convinced me that we should do a Red Ribbon Army Saga before King Piccolo, to get some added character relationships and development. Right after the tournament, most of the heroes are going to West City, where we'll jump into that. Ally, Samu (?), Master Roshi, and Eno won't be majorly in the RP again until King Piccolo. XD

I'll reveal things as they approach.
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