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Ok I will look over the edits when I am feeling a little more ambitious later, and see about grammar. The lack of names and specifics has a lot to do with being unsure of how much creative license I should take with the setting, while the gaps in details are indicative of crunching years of time into a few paragraphs and not wanting to overload the profile. So when I revisit it I will do so from the position that you have invited me to provide some of those details.
Sir Rhayven A. DarkMorne


Rhayven smiled at the librarian and shook his head at the misplaced comment. Glancing back over his shoulder he found rose peering at the sheaf of papers loosely bound. As he turned to offer it to her he caught sight of Prince Darvus. "As hello Prince Darvus, we werent expecting anyone to join us in our research. As to your question Rose, that is a treatise I wrote, and recently, on a ruin I explored, and the nature of the magical secrets I discovered within and its relation to our known history. That is what I do, I explore, mostly as a way to study magic,to deepen my understanding, our understanding of the magic we use. It also helps further my research into the development of new forms of magic." As he handed her the sheaf of papers he tapped his chin thoughtfully, turning to include the prince in the discussion they were having. Tilting his head slightly he lined up what they had reviewed so he could share since he had no idea how long the prince had been in the library for.

"Still it is a pleasure to have you join our research inquiry your highness, what Rose and I have been researching is a confluence of historical detail and fictional writing. Which is to say, some of the presented fairy tales bare a striking resemblance to places of historical fact, and that appear to connect to the artifacts of legend. It is far from a settled matter but our current theory is that the truth of the weapons lies somewhere between the truth of established history, and the supposition of folk lore, and it should mean we have deciphered candidates for probably places to look for specific weapons. Further I think, though Rose will need to look over that treatise I wrote, that I have been to a sight linked to one of these sights and might be in possession of an artifact to facilitate gaining entry into the dungeon in which it is stored one of the so called keys." As he finished the explanation he look to Rose to see if she had anything to add, or if she had already started skimming through the work he had written on the subject matter.
Well then, I will look forward to my review.



Whelp, this is my character proposal, hopefully here is okay?
I am interested if you are still recruiting? It looks like you have a solid healer, and are trying to discourage a magical party in terms of heavy magic use.

If it it isnt a stretch I had an idea, for a character, a young man, maybe mid twenties, a swordsman or spear-man, not necessarily formally trained, but with skills forged from constant use. He is a physical adept, fast and strong and always working to be better. But he was born with a touch of the gift, and no real head for spells or magic, instead its linked to his emotions, it isnt something he can use, but rather something he has to fight against, he doesnt necessarily know why it happens or how but when his emotions spike in intensity things happen around him, to him, or to the things his emotions are focused on, and like all magic there is feed back into him. His lack of understanding, and guidance on it means its like an affliction, if he cant control his emotions he will end up hurting himself, and quite possibly others.

The idea being to portray his journey towards mastery over himself, and eventually to either overcome or succumb to the emotions and the indulgences of magic depending on his experiences on this journey, he is choosing to undertake as a way to forge out of his current self a better self at the risk of being shattered and the pieces ruined.

Sir Rhayven A. DarkMorne


Rhayven drummed his fingers on the edge of the table thinking, it was possible he had found a dungeon, but he suspected he had found a key, though it was also possible he had simply found the first step in a series of steps leading to one of the kings and keys. In his head he worked over what had been in the treatise, he knew he had included a map and its location relative to all nearby known habitations of the current era to make it easier to cross reference. He had he believed also included an esoteric discussion on the ancient name and what it might mean in translation and how that might influence or reveal the sites original purpose. As Rose read the book he strolled through the shelves looking for what had been bothering him, to see if a copy of the treatise had been sent to the castle, he knew he had one at home, another at his manse in the north country, and the college had a copy, but he wasnt sure the material was suitable to the generic subject matter of this library. Still listening to Rose he moved to the counter and penned a note to the librarian asking if a copy of the treatise had been submitted to the castle library.

There wasnt much for Rhayven to do as he waited for Rose to continue her reading. He went over the details in his head. As she finished her assessment of the first book he made a few mental notes. "That so far as we know corresponds with the legends concerning the weapons of the ancient war. It follows that more than a kernal of that story should ring true." His comments came in response to her final assessment as he wandered back towards the librarian to see if she had found the treatise he had written, or if it was even in the library. He was hoping not against hope but against probability that a copy was conveniently in hand.
Sir Rhayven A. DarkMorne


Rhayven had been looking over the titles of the books as soon as they were set down seeing where Rose had started where she had begun stacking up titles, and where she had indicated he should start he had begun to feel a tickle like something just on the edge of memory. As he mulled the feeling over he looked over at her watching, luckily too because left unattended she might have caused a calamitous sound in the other wise silent library. With a deft move he leaned over and righted her stack his hand coming to rest on one of the titles. As his eyes darted along the title it clicked. Not from his reading and research but from his practical delving.

“Rose, I have just had a stunning realization, and there is something I need to retrieve as a result. Would you be a dear, and synthesize the information from these three books, on a ruin they reference, try to ascertain all pertinent details on its location. It occurs to me, that when I was working in one of the ruins of the ancients recently, that I came across something I believe refers to a location described in these three books, only, the descriptions are wildly different, and only the connection to the item I found made me wonder if without the key, different people experienced the ruins differently.”

Rhayven deftly plucked out three titles from the two piles of books, The Knight and the Fairy, Records from MidHaven, and The Lost War: a Retrospective. He wasn’t sure about the last as it had been years since he had read a copy of that particular volume but it wouldnt surprise him to find that all three sites were connected to one of the sites of the lost war, in fact if he was right, and the item was connected it would guarantee that the site was a lost war ruin. “When you are finished we need to find the others, but we will have to do so separately, we can try to find the prince, or go looking for the two foreigners, I am inclined to say we go after the foreigners in town, as if my suspicion is correct the site described will be tied to their once illustrious homeland. I’ll meet up with you after I find the treatise I wrote on the object and the ruin I found it in.”

With that Rhayven stood up, by his mannerism it was clear the connection in his head rated as urgent. However Rhayven’s Lord Father had drilled the boy with proper mannerisms, so as he stood fixing his seat at the reading table while waiting for her response. He was not so rude as to pile up the rest of the books as that would dismiss any of the young doctor’s insights, and he was loathe to ever do that. So he watched her head slighly tilted to see what her response would be, the sparkle of knowing something now he hadnt known before glinting from his blue eyes, while a slight smile of discovery played across his lips.

Sir Rhayven A. DarkMorne


Rhayven let a slight smile lift the corner of his lips as the king granted his request, before it shifted to a lifted eye brow as the doctor volunteered her services to convey the kings wishes. As she turned to him he glanced to the king with a respectful nod, before giving her a full grin and gesturing for the door. For all intents and purposes the king had condoned his course of action, and rather than waste time it suited him to be on with his task. Palming the ring he gestured for Rose to head to the door. He would follow shortly behind her, discreetly leaving the meeting. Once outside he would make his way out to the courtyard hopefully with Rose in pursuit where he would send the raven on his shoulder skyward to stretch her wings, she would mind her business until she chose to rejoin him. With that a priority for him out of the way he would turn to the good doctor. "Would you lead the way then?" His tone was cheerful and his manner polite as he let his mind turn to the enormity of their task.

Once the doctor started off in the direction of the library, the mage knight would follow his hand dipping to a pouch at his belt, from the pouch which he found by muscle memory he drew a strand of leather, and quickly strong the ring through a loop and tied it off, pulling it over his head and tucking it into his shirt under his leather coat. A slight scowl crossed his otherwise fair features as he contemplated the thing he was starting, this was going to be a long and dangerous road, and he hoped that the number of people who got stepped on in the process of traveling it would not be too great.
Sir Rhayven A. DarkMorne


Rhayven stood silent once his part was spoken, he listened as one after another the others in the room spoke, culminating in a statement by the king, all but giving them their marching orders. As the king spoke or rather just after the first of the Isparians left the room with their own thoughts. Rhayven stifled the desire to shake his head in distaste at the mans behavior, instead he listened briefly to the kings second bit of speech, with the rings placed on the table Rhayven nodded. "As you command my king. Since we do not know, yet where we should look the rings are useful but not in an immediate sense. If it pleases you my lord I would ask for access to the royal library. Perhaps there are clues within, that might point us at one or more of the artifacts." He spoke the words as he took one of the rings turning to the king with a respectful bow of his head.

As he waited for the kings response he looked among those who remained, the young countess, the count, the prince, the doctor, he himself. They all had different backgrounds, perhaps they could with their disparate experiences and knowledge sets puzzle out the locations of the artifacts. For now, that tract would have to be suggested by one of the others in accord with their specialties, perhaps the Isparian guest knew a legend or could recall one. Perhaps the Count had heard rumors in his business dealings. Event he medic through her patients might have heard such stories, or from comrades and field medics. Each of them had different connections, perhaps if they were lucky those connections would become the short cut to an age of research and searching. Rhayven would use his research ability but he would also send a message to his former colleagues at the college, they might have rumors legends and lore to draw from which might suit his needs as well. One way or another Rhayven could see the first foot steps he would take along this path forward.

I feel like the meeting should happen in course, we are worrying about speed before the thread has managed to develop a natural rhythm. The council is mostly in agreement already, take that agreement parlay it into a course of action and trigger the first arc of the story. Things will move quickly enough now that we have settled on a path, and once we settle on a way to pursue that. Then you can directed story at events or introduce a character to participate with which you can use to help guide us and interject relevant information.

In any case I think too much focus is on getting this going, and not enough on developing the story and getting a natural rhythm for posting for the thread going.
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