SaekoGami

The Elder Scrolls, Unsung Heroes of the Oblivion Crisis.

I'm going to humor you Mr. 420blazeit, I'm going to help you correct your CS if you truly want to join

Name:The Great Shlongdom = (Sorry but that is a title, not a name, put an actual name here like eg: John Doe, then create a different one for a title)
Race:Brenton = (this is fine, good job)
Age:20 = (so is this0
Appearance: Really pretty, a bit like Channing Tatum = (Ok, generally you want to use pictures, if that is to hard for your little brain to handle, I suggest description, not just "looks a bit like Channing Tatum" Describe his hair, eyes body shape, height, weight, need to go into detail if you can't use a pic)
Five major skills: Killing Elves, Ruling people, Winning battles, Using lots of magic, Having a huge magical sword = (Ok please read the first post, you are just being stupid)
Five minor skills: Signing, Dancing, Playing the violin, Running fast, Making lots of awesome weapons = (Same with this, please read the first post, and don't just make sh*t up)
Class name: Warrior = (this is fine, good job again)
Brief history: I murdered loads of elves and became king of a huge Clan = (First, never use "I", this is a character you created, not You, so no "Is Mes or Mys" secondly, try to have a little more detail, what was he doing before killing elves, why did he kill the elves, why was he made a king of a clan for killing the elves and why was he captured)

Right follow those tips and you will be as good as any normal newbie, also bare in mind, different rules apply to different RP's so please read the first post carefully, and follow rules.

The Elder Scrolls, Unsung Heroes of the Oblivion Crisis.

your welcome to play but make an actual CS

Soul Eater Next Gen (Restart)

She followed him to a seat and sat down beside him quietly, taking off her back and handing him a bag of gummy bears like she always did, everyday.

The Elder Scrolls, Unsung Heroes of the Oblivion Crisis.

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The Elder Scrolls, Unsung Heroes of the Oblivion Crisis.

n-nothing its just...its really long XD

The Elder Scrolls, Unsung Heroes of the Oblivion Crisis.

Your name...I hope its a joke

Soul Eater Next Gen (Restart)

They came to the classroom, Satsu slowly walked in, holding the door for Arc, hoping the teacher wouldn't notice them.

Soul Eater Next Gen (Restart)

She let out a sigh "Grrr you are so stubborn...fine!, come on, we have already missed half the class" She continued to walk infront of him to their class

Soul Eater Next Gen (Restart)

She placed her hands on her hips "you have stitches in your head and a bunch of broken ribs, you need to rest!"

Harmonica - (Fantasy Based RP)

Lilith couldn't sleep, she could never sleep, whenever she closed her eyes she could still see everything. There was no point so she got up. Pulling her long red hair into a pony tail and straightening her cloths she left her room, making sure her glasses were on properly. Not of lot of people were around, if any. They must all be out exploring or getting food She thought to herself. Her brain going off on a tangent when thinking of food, she was probably hungry, so she made for the door.

Flicking her finger against the bracelet triggered it, she didn't really understand a lot of it, but she assumed food icons meant food so she headed for the closest one. Many thoughts went through her mind, including but not restricted to, if the food was edible, how she would pay for the food, if she had to pay, what kind of food is it, and it could probably be poisoned. She shrugged to herself and kept walking, the loudness of her stomach growling shattering her thoughts.