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Civilian Name:Lucia Ginger
Magical Girl Name:Tina T
Age (13-18):16
Years at HeartShine (1-4):2
Sexuality:Unknown currently
Civilian Appearance:A young girl. Boxy shape and more masculine. Has a crooked grin and bright ginger hair. Has Brown eyes. Wears uniform when required. Hates both uniforms
Magical Girl Appearance:Uniform gets crisp at the edges. Hair goes brighter like a second sun. Eyes become fiery.
Spiritstone Appearance:A volcanic stone with rippling outwards like an explosion
Personality:Fiery and very blunt. Explodes easily and angered easily. Can be nice one second and brutal another. Unpredictable. Arrogant and has a sense of self-righteousness. However she is not completely evil, only troubled and may have some mental problems
Bio: Lucia was a young girl growing up in a small town until her family was robbed in their own home. Tied up and helpless, she summoned her first power: An extreme version of "Crazed", Which while killing the burglars also killed her family. She is in a deep sense of denial and tries to ignore any mention of her past. She had lived in multiple foster homes before coming to this school. She has trouble controlling her powers combined with a sense of emptiness from the loss of her family leave her a true wildcard as she is today.
Power Theme:Explosives/Fire
Utility Abilities:
Know it all: Knowledgeable in all manners of explosives and able to activate or deactivate and explosives
Karisma: Can reverse any charismatic act by another person Only uses it when she's mad
Burning ring of fire: can set anything aflame whether she means to or not.
Minor Attacks:
The bomb: minor explosive attack which is like a firecracker punch
Just for kicks: A fiery kick that can burn
Moderate Attacks:
Sugar: A blast that seems weak at first but over the course of the battle leaves the foe weakened slowly
Boom: A more powerful "the bomb". Very powerful but more draining
Major Attacks:
Crazed: A extremely powerful blast that while being extremely powerful reduces her to a comatose state