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    1. Satsuki 11 yrs ago

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9 yrs ago
Lets try this again, Once more into the rapids that are group rps. Perhaps I will find the one that doesn't end a waterfall.
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@smarty0114

Your ability needs to be something you yourself can fight against. Gestures is a good start but your character should require concentration to exert his will on something else, and limitation on what he can actually accomplish. Your character needs to be able to lose, and he needs to use more than his power to solve a problem, else how can he grow? Throwing objects around him, sure chairs even loose rocks, however flinging things that would instantly kill a normal person I am going to say no. People who are aware that he may try it can simply struggle making it far harder to lift them, let alone throw them. Crush things to smithereens...Once again Small objects only and this excludes steel bars and solid stone.

I have had some things come up, With my other rps I obviously can not seem to dedicate the needed time to make a worth while contribution.
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@smarty0114

I am going to add on to AFS's initial point. Your telekinesis needs to be fleshed out a little more. While I am fine with the power you did not explain how fast it takes hold. Lifting a motorcycle gives us an idea that it is capable of raising something that weighs 500-1000lbs into the air and holding it. You did not tell us how fast and how high. Does this mean he can compress things? Is he able to use it to push and pull? How fast can he do it.

I apologize if this seems like I am abusing you but it is due to the meta properties of leaving us in the dark about an ability like this one. We would like to avoid you tearing someones head from their shoulders "Because he looked at him with rage."
I smirked when you used the 11 year old as the reference.

I will adjust as needed, I had to write this 4 times so I was a tad irritable on this last run. Oh and its 12, typo.

-withdrawn-
Marking for return.
I am working on an ares. Sorry it has taken me a moment to decide on a character.
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