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So, I think there is a mistaken bit of info here.
1) You do not create your own Master and Servant pairing. You make a Master and Servant, and then I'm going to place them on different teams. (That way we can get people interacting rather than a lot of "Me and me are talking and talking, and we're getting along great! That way we work flawlessly together. So instead there can be some back and forth. Etc.)

2) And looking at the list, I'd suggest either going way smaller in historical significance, or just making a non-actual person. I say this because I don't like personally like the idea of Winston Churchill running around 1939 political hotbed of Germany weeks before they invade Poland. He'd probably have a middle man doing the work for him. (Most of them probably would.)
Because as interesting as that story would be, most Masters end up dead, and full blown alternate history probably won't be where this goes. (Anne Frank is honestly your best bet if you really insist on this.)

3) If you can provide good reasons for why they'd be there, beyond just being mages, I'll think it over again. But I'm just not seeing it.


Anne Frank it is then.
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Sure. I mean as long as it doesn't end up being utterly ridiculous. Think of it as tentative approval, and I'll want you to let me know who you make before you even start work on the bio. Since depending on who you choose it can be a hard no, or a soft yes.
@vn2202 and I will probably be asking that all bios be ready by the 10th.


I'm conflicted in choosing one of the following. But this will be the master-servant combinations I am thinking, in order of preference.

Winston Churchill - Lancer Artoria
Anne Frank - Caster Merlin/Solomon
Georgy Zhukov - Rider Medb
Erwin Rommel - Any Rider Class Servant
Leon Trotsky - Rider Boudicca

Feel free which one I should get.
Can my master play as a real life figure of the time? (i.e. Anne Frank, Winston Churchill, Erwin Rommel, etc.)
Thanks for the feedback @Krayzikk, I am new here, matter fact, this is my first RP in RP Guild. I'm pretty sure I have a lot to learn.

Here's a revision based from your review.


I am super interested! Have you seen my profile pic?
Character:

Name: Eun Mi Steinbach
Age: 60, looks like in her 20's thanks to anti-aging enhancements
Sex: Female
Profession/Rank: While officially just a Captain, She is the right-hand and wife of Arthur Steinbach, leader of the Steinbach Legion, a former mafia organization turned legitimate and autonomous mercenary arm of the Earth Federation Walker Corps (something like the French Foreign Legion).
Appearance: Eun Mi is half-Asian, half-White, that appears to be in her 20's thanks to anti-aging enhancements.

Personality: Cunning, Capricious, Calculating, Manipulative, yet at the same time, Humanistic, Romantic, and Open-Minded. Often compared to P.T. Barnum.
Skills: She is a distinguished pilot, leader, businesswoman, and negotiator. While she has extensive skills from her old trade, she had long turned her back from such practices, using them only when necessary.
Weakness: She is a capricious and a fraudulent liar whose real loyalty is money.
History: Eun Mi's story is in a nutshell, a "Cheng I Sao in Space" story, kidnapped and raised as a prostitute by the Markhov Syndicate, a mafia organization, from a young age. With her body re-engineered for such specific purpose, it seems like she has no opportunity for growth, but that changed when she met Arthur Steinbach, leader of the Richthofen & Churchill Confederation (named after the decommissioned long-range patrol vessels, Manfred von Richthofen and Winston Churchill, and the precursor to the Steinbach PMC), a rival mafia organization. She was rescued by Steinbach, who saw potential for her as his accountant and organizer, the brain to his brawn, something she is surprisingly very good with, and helped make the organization grow as one of the largest crime organizations in the known universe. The two became lovers, and were eventually married. Unfortunately, Arthur Steinbach was captured, and was rumored to be hanged, by the Red Guard Triad, the largest crime organization of the time. As his right-hand, Eun Mi took over the organization, and vowed vengeance. To achieve this revenge, she has to team up with the Earth Federation, the Federation agreed on one condition, she needs to legitimize from a criminal organization to an autonomous mercenary arm of the Earth Federation Walker Corps, and so the Richthofen and Churchill Confederation has now become Steinbach Legion. It didn't took long for her to achieve her vengeance, as the Legion and the Federation thoroughly destroyed the Red Guard Triad. Much to her surprise, Arthur Steinbach is apparently still alive, and is soon back in charge of the Legion, now named after him. Afterwards, the Legion flourished as a Federation asset, whose brutality and efficiency made them perfect in cracking down pirates and criminal organizations alike, yet surprisingly gentle and more disciplined compared to other mercenary groups.
Equipment: (Sorry, I'm a noob, I don't know what to put here)

Arsenal Walker:

Base Model*: FXW-035[G] Nellis Prototype (Federation Experimental Walker-035), based from the FAW-022 Raptors chassis, but without the transformation ability. While considered a downgrade from the Raptors, it does make it more affordable, plus it is not as restricted as the Raptors in weaponry.
Designation: Steinbach Mk.II
Appearance:

Armaments: 120mm L/55 Sniper "rifle" (It is really a smoothbore tank gun with a rifle stock), Pistol, Heatsword, 2x Vibro-Kukri
Weakness: Glass cannon, maximizing maneuverability and stealth over protection and survivability, very capricious just like her pilot.
Pilot(s): Eun Mi Steinbach
I would like to join.
I'm new here, can I join?
Hello everyone, I'm Selvariabell and I'm a noob here. I look forward in having a good time.
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