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Well, considering the size of the Jutsu and the advantage Renji gains once it's cast, It should probably take at least 2 posts minimum to cast. Unless you feel differently, in which case I'm happy to go longer.

In regards to dodging, the main things to dodge would be the spikes/fissures, though they aren't instantaneous attacks. If anything they're supposed to be used to catch an opponent off-guard in order to setup for another attack or jutsu. Therefore most, if not all, Chuunin-level ninja & above should be able to dodge them quite simply under completely normal circumstances. It's possible for an opponent to escape the crystallized area using whichever mobility/flight jutsu they prefer or by simply climbing any structure or tree that might populate the area.

Apologies for the delayed response.


Two posts? We cool, accepted.

Reviews!

Shizuka Ichimi - denied bc he's 2cool4skool.. jk accepted

Kazayatsu - Accepted

Chojiro Akimichi - no custom jutsu? Accepted

Bumu Aka - grumbles about furries.. accepted
Kyo









Normally a young Chuunin would be nervous with the towering Hokage addressing them, but not Senna. The young girl felt the Hokage's warmth and his own empathy for their situation matching hers. As he rested his hand upon her shoulder she felt at ease, even more so after he assured Kyo that he would not be going out into that forest alone. Gisho spoke kindly of the Akizakura, and even spoke of Namine. "Yes sir, I believe you're speaking of my mother. You trained her yourself when she was even younger than me. She tells me quite a bit about you."

Kyo on the other hand did not receive the Hokage's message as well as his comrade did. Despite this, he respectfully allowed the Hokage to finish and bowed his head when he was done speaking. "Yes, Hokage-sama." He did well to keep his emotions from reaching his face even though he resented the Hokage's decision. And with that Kyo took one last look at the Gisho before turning his back and walking out the door, not waiting for Senna to follow.

Senna, sensing Kyo's discontent for Gisho's reaction to his report, immediately turned and followed him out of the office with yet another concerned look. Once she followed him outside he was already almost twenty feet ahead of her and marching off, and not in the direction of his home. "You can't be serious right now?!" She yelled as she ran toward him, placing her hand on his shoulder and forcing him to turn and face her when he did not respond. "I'm not stupid Kyo, I don't know what you think you're doing but you're a fool to try and go back there right now!!" She spat at him.

Kyo just looked at her with his usual cold, emotionless expression. It wasn't like him to force this side of himself on her, because he knew she could always see through it. "This is not the job for some nameless squad of Shinobi that don't have a connection to or a care in the world for Mizuki. This is my cross to bare and I, and I alone, will be the one to bare it. If someone is going to go into that forest and die looking for our comrade, it will be me." He spoke solemnly and with abandon for any emotion that might have played a factor in talking himself out of going. He may have spoke like he was ready to die for this cause, but truth be told his overconfidence in his abilities led him to believe that he could actually save his friend if he were still alive somewhere.

Senna's eyes widened at Kyo's short-sightedness. For someone with eyes like his, he sure had a hard time seeing the big picture sometimes. "Well that's just so fucking noble of of you, isn't it Kyo Uchiha?! The genius boy dying a martyr for his comrade before he ever became anything bigger than himself! Well fuck you, Kyo!" She snapped at him, her eyes welling up with tears as she turned to storm away and let him go on his foolish rampage into certain death.

Kyo winced as she had hurt his ego, but in the process she released him from the strings of self pity that had been guiding him toward what would have been his demise. His guard dropped immediately as she turned to leave. His face softened, mouth opening slightly to begin to respond as he placed his hand on her shoulder to prevent her from leaving.

Before Kyo could retort to her words, Senna spun around with tears streaming down her face, smacking his hand off of her shoulder with force. This caught Kyo well off guard, taken aback by her brash actions. He knew her to get emotional with him even if she was normally level headed, but this was a passion seldom seen from her.

"If you go and get yourself killed for no fucking reason, who's gonna be here to take care of me?!" Her face was soaked with tears at this point. Any words that Kyo may have had were gone at this point. He was speechless to the reality of her words. His mouth was left hanging open slightly like a fool, and after a what seemed like a long moment of silence, of her looking to him anticipating his reaction, he now knew the gravity of the situation. He gathered himself up, his resolve hardening his expression and he looked her in the eyes. "I will always take care of you." He kissed her with a fiery passion that she had never seen from him, and after an eternity had passed all in a single moment, they parted lips and he held her under the moonlight in perfect serenity.

~

The sun kissed Senna's eyes as she awoke in Kyo's arms beneath a tree not far from the Hokage's office. She moved her hand to her forehead to shade herself from the light, and judged the time of day by the sun's position. She looked over to her lover and took in his innocent, sleeping face. ~He's so peaceful.. I want this moment to last forever... Why do we fight so hard to keep things the way they are?~ She allowed the moment to linger for just a little while longer, solemnly expressing how grateful she was for him.

Not a moment later she was shaking him by the collar of his shirt and screaming in his face. "Hey idiot you realize we're gonna be late for the stupid exams right?!" She pulled him back and forth with force to shake any notion of going back to sleep right out of him.

Kyo flailed back and forth as she swung him around like a children's doll, a spot of drool wagging around comically as his peaceful slumber was ever-so-gracefully stricken from him. He wiped his eyes and looked over to her with his coy little smirk and the charm that she grew to know so well. "Good morning to you too." He stood up and gathered himself, giving her a helping hand to her feet as well. "Sleep well?" He asked, giving complete abandon to the notion of being late for such an important event in their lives. He simply dusted the dirt off of his clothing and began a slow trot toward where the exam was being held.

As he helped her up she fell silent, a total 180 from how she had awoken him. "But.. we're late.." she whispered to herself as he made no motion to hurry to make sure they arrived on time to represent Konoha. She saw in him a complete disregard for the rules for her own sake. She knew fully well that he was enjoying every last second of serenity they had together before it would all be broken by the trials of war, or rather a condensed and kindergarten version of war supervised by the higher ups of all the villages. But make no mistake, this was war even in its most premature of forms, even if death was not the expectation, these were fully grown Shinobi ready to enter the highest levels of their respective villages. This was a true test of their character.
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I mean, fire jutsu are the most bland of all jutsu in Naruto. Even looking at these two jutsu there's nothing that really sets them apart because they're both just essentially 'I shoot fire at you lol'. If I condensed it like such and made it into a custom jutsu, you'd basically end up with EXACTLY the same thing with a different name and 'it's not Madara's jutsu' and that honestly seems like a waste of time for both of us, hence I kept them in. Also, now it takes two slots, shows off his proficiency in ninjutsu as he's meant to be a ninjutsu duelist, where as if I made it into one custom jutsu it'd be exactly the same thing and offer way less exposition because it'd not be an established jutsu. It just feels like, to me, it'd take away a lot of exposition if I made it into, say 'Sakana's fire bomb' or something dumb, ESPECIALLY if it'd be the same thing.

Kinda hard to make fire jutsu more interesting than 'lol fire shoots in ur face xD!' imho. I can change it - I just think it'd be more work both for you and me for relatively little gain.

As for the sealing - I wanted to show off his devotion to fate, which to me could be showed by having a seal that activates upon death - he's gonna die one day according to fate and he'll never know why, but at least with a seal like this, he'd take down someone with him.

And because of that it doesn't really offer much because I'd have to let him die for it to do anything at all and even then it'd be plot related - because nobody is gonna stand there and let their character get sucked up by some random seal.

I figured that with the way seals are relatively unexplained, it could've just been placed on him as Sakana has no knowledge or expertise in sealing techniques. Could've just hired someone to do it or asked a favor from someone. And if the activator is death, he doesn't even need to activate it himself, and thus needs no expertise.

However, that's with sealing techniques being so random and unexplained that we're left to fill it in on our own as opposed to having a relatively clear idea of how they work.


Squints You win this time... THIS TIME.. Accepted.
Reviews!

Imai Hatake- accepted!

Koma Hitsugi - accepted!

Jaakuna - already reviewed you in PM, but did you add that chakra draining jutsu after? Express the parameters on how fast he can drain chakra. Like say Madara launches a huge fireball of death, can Jaakuna absorb the whole thing at once, or what's goin on here? Your vagueness knows no bounds good sir

Date Uchiha - accepted! You beat me to the first Uchiha CS, congratulations
Kyo watched the Hokage closely. During their few interactions he always cautiously studied the leader of their village, adorning his Hokage garb. ~This is the man who leads our village.. the man they say can be in two places at once..~ Kyo's gaze flittered over to Shinko over in the shadows before back to the Hokage. Senna stood a step behind Kyo, absentmindedly staring at the ground. She was only half-present in the room with them, the loss of Mizuki hitting her hard. She still could not feel his presence anywhere, even with her Kekkei Genkai. This loss was significant to her, Mizuki had been through a lot with her and Kyo, and maybe, just maybe, if she wasn't so invested in Kyo than Mizuki wouldn't have stormed off and he would still be there with them.

"..." Kyo could not bring himself to admit failure. He didn't take disappointment well, and it shamed him to return from a mission without a comrade, even if they did complete the mission. "We completed the mission.." he began with a tone of reluctance. "..two of the three bodies of the missing squad were found in the Forest of Death. They were murdered by another Shinobi judging by their wounds, not an animal or an accident. Despite finding them, during the mission one of our squad ran off on his own and before we knew it, he was gone. Our sensory-nin here, Senna, is of the Akizakura clan. Her sensory abilities are beyond measure. And yet, she tells me our comrades chakra just vanished without a trace. There was no trail to follow, Hokage-sama." Kyo explained. He hesitated for a brief moment before finishing his report. "If it were up to me, I would have stayed to find out comrade, however Senna picked up on a killing intent stronger than she had ever felt before... it scared her to the point of paralysis and so I made the call to return her to safety and report back what we learned." The guilt was evident in his next statement. "Hokage-sama... Words do not describe how sorry we are for being unable to successfully bring back our comrade with us.. and so, I will personally offer myself to go and look for him alone. I believe myself more than capable to handle this situation." Kyo's face shifted to a stern resolve. He obviously resented himself for leaving Mizuki out there and had to make amends for that, no matter how foolish it was of a decision.

"No Kyo, you can't!! You didn't feel what I felt! You'll die if you go out there!" Senna broke free from the chains of self pity as she heard the love of her life proclaim his foolish call to arms in order to save their comrade that may or may not even still be breathing. She looked over to Gisho with pleading eyes that begged for mercy. "Hokage-Sama you can't let him go! You can't let anyone in there, not tonight, not tomorrow for the exams, not until you figure out what's in that forest!! It's pure evil, I swear!" She pleaded with him, tears welling in her eyes. The love she had for Kyo was plain and obvious. She just lost a good friend, she knew he was dead, she wouldn't toy with the idea that he survived, not after what she felt. She only hoped the Hokage would listen and call off the Jonin exams and refuse Kyo's offer before someone else fell the same fate as Mizuki.
Reviews!

Renji Kurogama - Abyssal Onyx Mirror, how long does it take to crystallize an acre of land? Like how long does an opponent have to dodge this? Also specify that casting time in seconds or # of posts.

Uragiri Sakana - so he's a 16 year old Chuunin that knows both of Madara's A-ranked fire techniques? I'm not totally against the idea but I'm not totally sold on it either. And like is there a reason why he has an S ranked sealing technique with no other sealing knowledge? Again, I'm not totally against the idea but like sell me on it.

Hime Yuki - I think there were some limitations discussed on Consecutive Ice chains but otherwise accepted.

Ayame Kouken - Accepted, like the char

Ai Kabe - accepted

I'll get to the last two in a bit
This will be the main villain of the First and Second arc


















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