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Work is crazy this week so I probably can't post until the weekend. Sorry for holding things up!
"My friend is...shopping... right now. I'm supposed to meet him and I don't want him to worry. Can we, I don't know, talk near the merchant row so we can watch for him? Is it safe?"

It would be riskier to speak out in public. That much was certain. Still, Jatan knew that this may be his only chance to talk to the pair. He didn't want to scare off his only potential allies. "I think I know where your friend may be headed. Most of the shops are closed during the middle of the day, but there's one in particular that's still open." Gesturing forward with his hand, Jatan slowed his pace to walk beside them.

He took the moment to really study the two. An odd pair to say the least. The girl was short, and had a bit of a boyish appearance. She had to be pretty tough to be traveling on her own at her age. The boy towered above her, his eyes darting to and fro, and his hand gripping his club. His hand gripping his club? Calm down, calm down, he's probably just nervous.

Trying to ease the tension, Jatan flashed the pair an awkward smile. "You must not be from around here. I'm Jatan, by the way."
"I have to know more, I think there's something important in what is happening here."

The words rang in the air. The short girl hadn't even spoken particularly loudly. But to Jatan, she may as well have been shouting at the top of her lungs. He had been watching her ever since he ducked by on his way to the hanging. This was his moment, and he intended to take it. He had to. For Edgar, for all the other victims. For Torm.

Weaving through the crowd with practiced ease, he slipped up behind the girl. It seemed she was dismissing her male companion. Make these words count, Jatan told himself as he waited to catch the girl alone. A lot depends on them.

A man dangled from the rope. Like a mouse held aloft by its tail as the grinning cat plays with its desperate victim, this man writhed helplessly in the air. Squirming. Gasping. Kicking. And then, nothing.

Make these words count.

A hand slips from his pocket.

Make these words count.

Fingers uncurl gently over the girl's shoulder to alert her to his presence.

Make these words count.

Leaning in. Closer. Closer.

Make these words count.

Barely more than a whisper.

MAKE THESE WORDS COUNT!

"If you want answers, follow me."

Cutting left, out of the crowd, he moved quickly, but not too quickly, towards the slum.
Ah sorry I've been so out of it. I am reading the posts now and will try to get a new post up tomorrow! My bad!
Jatan knelt on his sleeping bag, crossing his legs which were bent at the knees. His elbows rested on his knees, his hands stretched upward with an open palm. It was difficult to concentrate in his apartment. For one thing, there was a constant buzzing. The flies, mosquitos, and gnats, drawn irresistibly to the stickiness of the humid air, flitted through the small one-bedroom apartment, buzzing and biting as they went. There was also the heat. It was unbearable. Sweat dampened Jatan's robes, streaked down his arms and face, dribbled from his armpits, adding a rancid stench to the air. But worst of all were the memories of Edgar's hanging. Like a shadowy figure in a dark room, they lingered, ready to surge forward at any moment.

Breath in, breath out. Breath in, breath out. The stench and bustle of the city faded as Jatan meditated. He was left with the gentle swish of a breath in, breath out. Breath in, breath out.

BONG, BONG, BONG.

The harsh clanging of the gong roused Jatan. As a native of Loudwater, he had been hearing it for the past month. Like many of the other citizens, it roused in him an apprehensive curiosity. Who would pay the price today? More than anything, though, it reminded him of Edgar's limp body dangling from the rope. Shuddering, Jatan quickly bundled up his sleeping bag, stuffing it in the corner of the small apartment, and scurried outside. The punishment for failing to attend an execution was harsh, but it wasn't what compelled Jatan to go.

Since Edgar's death, Jatan had been vigilant in his attendance, even showing up early on occasion. His eyes wandered throughout the crowd, scanning for potential allies. Turns out he wasn't the only one disgusted by the worship of this mysterious "Shadow" God and the horrific violence incited by his followers. He had tested the waters with a few people that seemed resistant, given away by their comments or facial expressions. So far, he'd had no luck. Just a lot of, "Best of luck to you, really, but I can't put myself or my family at risk like that!" Patience was something he'd learned from Edgar, though. If he waited long enough, an opportunity would present itself, and that's when he'd pounce on it.

And so, a somber Jatan returned to the town square for another execution, picking his way through the crowded streets, weaving between clutters of halflings, a rather skittish looking human girl and half-orc boy who almost seemed lost, and dozens of others to take his spot in the crowd, peering around at the sea of faces that surrounded him. Perhaps today would be his lucky day.
Ah ok, I'll edit my post! Thanks for letting me know!
Name: Jatan (no last name, as he never knew his parents)
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Race: Elf
Class: Monk (Level 0)

What you want to be when you grow up?
Jatan aspires to be a master monk and to one day run his own monastery. He believes it is his duty to set others on a path to spiritual enlightenment, as his master did for him.

Who is your mentor?
When Jatan mysteriously arrived as a baby in Loudwater, his parents could not be found. Lacking a home, the orphan was taken in by the head monk at the local monastery: Edgar Blackheart. Edgar became a mentor and spiritual guide for Jatan. He has earned Jatan's unwavering admiration and loyalty, and Jatan hopes to become a head monk himself one day.

Brief Biography:
Little is known about Jatan's parents. The elven boy was left abandoned on the streets of Loudwater late one night. The local monastery that Jatan, like many orphans, was taken to quickly became his home. Although he is an elf, he adapted quickly to many of the human rituals he encountered. Particularly fascinated by the monastery's patron deity, Torm, Jatan delved into religious and spiritual studies. He strives to promote justice and protect the weak, as any true servant of Torm would. In addition to religious studies, Jatan was also taught basic martial arts. Early morning runs with the other boys, solitary prayer, tumbling and combat practice, and meditation became normalized parts of his daily routine. As an elf, Jatan often felt at odds with the other boys, all of whom were human. Although he was never picked on outright, he would rarely be invited to free hour activities, so he spent a lot of time to himself. Most of this time was used to read poetry, which Jatan views as an avenue through which he can become closer to Torm. Though he will never publicly admit it, Jatan longs to befriend other elves, find his parents, and reconnect to that lost part of his heritage.

Recently, Jatan fled the monastery and has taken to hiding in Loudwater. The forced religion hit the monastery even harder than the rest of the town. Few monks agreed to give up their faith. Locals stormed the monastery, dragging Edgar out and publicly executing him. Edgar became the first of several such executions. Knowing in his heart that he must do what he can to resist this tyranny, Jatan has holed up in a shady part of town where he can continue his worship of Torm in secret and bide his time until an opportunity for justice arises.

What person(s) of interest do you know where you are from? Who all do you have a relationship with?:
Jatan knew his mentor, Edgar, (now deceased). He knows many of the other boys and leaders of the monastery, though he was never particularly close to anyone except Edgar. Moreover, many of the monks have dispersed after Edgar's execution, and Jatan has no way to find them.

Equipment:
- A backpack
- A sleeping mat
- A canteen
- Standard Peasant Garb
- A quarterstaff he took from the monastery before he left (Jatan left his few silver pieces behind to cover the expense, of course).

Class Skills:
- Basic meditation
- Basic unarmed combat training
- Basic tumbling
- Basic quarterstaff training

Life Skills:
- Literate in common (not Elven, as he was orphaned and never learned the language or cultural practices of the Elves)
- Basic knowledge of poetry
- Religious knowledge about Torm
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This looks really fun - I'm interested. What would you like to see in a character sheet?
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