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It is only the second week into this semester and I am bloody tired of it already...
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I am currently working on my literary analysis while watching the Pacquiao vs. Mayweather fight.
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...You bastard Iridious, stop complicating shit for the CIS Navy. Lyzander is not going to like this.
Nariata said
Add some history to the start, i have no idea how he came to become a great naval commander that would warrant such a price from Dooku in the building of an academey for him to teach. Describe a climatic battle where his skills were on display, showing his tactics so i can make sense on how he will fight.You want to be a commander, than so be it. Give me something to work with so i know why the CIS invests heavily in this young guy.And the age is off, this takes place in 14BBY. Says in the OP Five years. :)))


Alright. Will edit later as on phone.
Nariata said
EDIT: reading helps, figured itout.My idea for the balance between Force users and non is to follow the style featured in the trailer for the Star Wars: The Old republic game, in the trailers you see very strong Force powers yet also Republic troopers tackling Sith to the ground and winning in some hand to hand instances. As well those who choose to be very powerful force users should forgo any sort of armor and fall to experienced swordsmen, where as the more skilled blades-men will have less strength with the force yet more durable under fire.


By the way, finished Lander Cs. Wat you think?
Yog Sothoth said
i don't capitalize unless it is for names, for me it takes longer to write a post if i do. also i am trying to keep up so i do it quickly.


You should take every little time to put thought into the post your writing. Writings that are rushed dot give out well for the story in my experience so just take your time. ;)
Slim Shady said
Oh shtz, Neomi is looking for trouble. Or is it Lady Noctis? Which do you prefer Shadow?


Lady Noctis since you dont know its Neomi. I refer to her as Neomi in description since it sound better, for some reason.
gcold said
Is this normally what happens on here?


I guess its going to be apparent for us lol.
“Yes, ready.” Said Kashmir with passion to get on the battlefield.

Noctis gave a nod at Kashmir. She observed the assembly area. Droids and Confederate Sentient troops marching towards the battlefield. Medical tents, barricades, buildings. There were soldiers on the Imperators and surely, the CIS Commanders would be thinking of a failsafe if the Assault on the airfield failed. Watching, Noctis watched as Carriers one through eight landed. The carriers pushed closer to the center of the airfield that she instructed to go into battle she spoke to Kashmir. Then in her mind, the CIS Commanders in the assembly are would need some Dark Jedi if they need a “special” role taken care of. Neomi turned to Kashmir.

“Kashmir, head down to the assembly area and help support the Confederate commander over there. They need someone to assist them on other parts of the airfield!” as the carriers zoomed through the sky. Neomi then pointed to two dark acolytes. “You two, you will be under command of Kashmir. Follow your orders from him” she said coldly.

“Yes, Lady Noctis, will do.” From Kashmir and the two dark acolytes. Neomi saw jump down from flying carrier near a group of soldiers and droids who faltered at the sight of Kashmir. The pilot spoke on the intercom. “We’re getting closer!” The battlefield was stringed with Confederate barricades. The debris of fallen Starcraft were used a makeshift defenses for both sides. Though CIS aircraft ordered to support the Assault on the airfield helped advance ground troops as Droids and Confederate soldiers advanced through a torrent of blaster fire.”

The carriers got close and their gunners began providing support fire against the Clones. Neomi and her units jumped out of her carrier as she activated her light saber in mid-air utilizing “Fallen Avalanche” upon a Clone which sliced him into two. Neomi went into Djem So form and began deflecting blaster fire from Clones. The light saber must have attracted the Clones that “Dark Jedi!” and began focusing their blaster onto Neomi. She pulled out her second light saber to help deflect the Clones blaster rifle. Some of these managed to strike back the Clones.

And then, a torrent of heavy fire came from the Nimbus Commando units wielding laser chain guns who advanced steadily. The Mandalorians were on the rear proving support fire. If they were to use their jetpacks in an open area, they can easily fall form the sky from blaster fire.

As the Confederate soldiers and droids advanced, Neomi came to notice a lone figure holding a red and blue light sabers. It was a Jedi though holding a red light saber. It was Ciale as she remembered on Mustafar, Palpatine telling her of Ciale the “man with Sith blood.” Palpatine instructed Neomi to kill Ciale if she ever saw him on the battlefield. Though Palpatine was dead and she could care less about him. She remembered him also during her time as a Jedi though ignored him but remembered sensing the Dark Side with him. Neomi turned to her Dark Acolytes as they advanced.

“Acolytes leave me to deal with the Jedi standing over there. Support the advancing forces.” The dark acolytes replied. “Yes, Lady Noctis.”

Neomi walked towards Ciale as her Dark acolytes continued on with the advancing forces. Facing him, she spoke. “Hello Ciale.” As Neomi held her ligtsabers. She was in a stance of readiness, awaiting Ciale’s response.
Hillan said
Fender's a brand of guitars, especially electric guitars.<3


I dont know much about guitars. I play the Saxophone.
Hillan said
Fender Unplugged?


I do not get it...
Lyzander Synia CS is finished. I am also going to start writing up a post.
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