Avatar of shivershiver
  • Last Seen: 6 yrs ago
  • Old Guild Username: Shivershiver
  • Joined: 11 yrs ago
  • Posts: 231 (0.06 / day)
  • VMs: 0
  • Username history
    1. shivershiver 11 yrs ago

Status

User has no status, yet

Bio

User has no bio, yet

Most Recent Posts

ImportantNobody said
It's not too late. I thought it had died, but it can still be revitalized if enough people show up.As for every man's dream, we can have a lot of in character debate on the subject matter as characters try to figure out good and bad, right and wrong, and all that stuff.Yes...but you will fail. Mwahahahahahahahahahahaha! jk...or am I? No spoiling the plot. It can go in any way, including many unexpected scenarios. Everyone's input could also push the plot a way I never thought of as well.


Sadly, this is probably a "be careful what you wish for" scenario and I would definitely have my character behave as such, if a male character would be permitted :P But anyway, this idea definitely has potential, lemme know if you need help fleshing out ideas or anything!
Huzzah! Also, you're not the one at fault, it was really just everyone else who failed to post (like me!)
One month later and I post :P
The captain’s voice echoing through Cargo Bay A brought a cloaked figure out of his deep slumber and back to life. The man had set up a makeshift hammock out of cargo netting between two massive crates in the bay, for there was little room elsewhere in the ship that allowed some sense of privacy. The rugged warrior stood from his bed and carefully slipped into his form-fitting bodyglove, fused to which was a mismatched set of rusted durasteel armor. One shoulder pauldron, two scarred vambraces, a chest plate cracked in half at a 45-degree angle, ragged greaves all gave the set an extremely makeshift and worn appearance. He then covered the unoccupied slots between armor plates with tan rags, ensuring none of the scarred tan skin beneath was exposed, before finally strapping his bandolier on. The luxury of privacy was one the tusken missed. In his tribe, each member was assigned their own tent to live in with their mate, and the punishment for seeing anyone else unrobed was death. Strangely, on this ship the crew were herded together like bantha in the same confined rooms. Even now, the raider had difficulties exposing his face to others, the old habits and rituals refusing to die within him. He did miss the desert planet and all its harshness. The two burning suns drilling into his robes, banthas trotting through the sweeping sands and dunes. Even the constant threat of krayt dragons would be welcome over the cold vacuum of space. Mrak couldn’t help but ask himself why he was in this cramped, alien ship.

Sre'vkk'lak heard another voice over the intercom as he checked his weapons, a feminine one he knew all too well that reminded him of why he was aboard the Krayt Mother. Her name was Serana, a zeltron who saved his life in quite possibly the most embarrassing manner possibly, especially for a warrior such as Mrak. The tusken had just arrived in the lower, very undesirable levels of Coruscant searching for work, but instead stumbled upon a crew of Chiss eying what few possessions he had and speaking in a language foreign to him. The ignorant raider believed them to be asking for a worker right up to the point where they pressed a blaster to his forehead. In a flash of pink, the Chiss were blinded by what looked to be glittering confetti. Mrak’s new scantily-clad companion managed to ward off his assailants, and if he were not demanded to repay the woman by Tusken law with a life debt, he surely would have killed himself in shame. Now, indebted to this zeltron, Mrak was obligated to pledge his life to protecting and looking after his savior, even if it meant sacrificing his own life. The tusken’s quest to find his place in the universe was momentarily on hold, to say the least.

At the mere mention of confetti, the warrior cringed. He finished gathering his belongings and tied a slender tan cloth over his ruined right eye that was permanently shut. Mrak ran a gloved hand across the wound and asked himself whether the prize was worth it, but feeling the Krayt pearl in his pocket, he knew it was. Mrak left Cargo Hold A and walked down the stairwell to the center deck, where the bridge was located. Passing a few bounty hunters, the raider made his way to the cockpit, where Captain Thalen Carin stood, along with Serana. Despite their label as smugglers, bounty hunters, or whatever other unsavory name bestowed upon them, Mrak knew they were not bad people. While his Force capabilities weren’t the greatest, he was capable of reaching out and sensing other’s intentions, and he could tell that neither of them were inherently evil, but simply people trying to get by. If he sensed otherwise, Mrak would have refused to serve aboard the ship. While he stopped between the two crew members, the raider almost protectively stood closer to Serana similar to how a bodyguard would behave. “I don’t see why not,” he replied roughly to the captain’s question, though it was asked quite awhile ago. The tusken shivered and crossed his arms, his body still not acclimated to the cool temperature of the ship. He was never one for words, even by silent tusken standards.
This is every man's dream, including mine. Consider me interested, hopefully it isn't too late!
Yes. Yessssssss. This should be a mandatory read for all guild members when creating characters.
I'm down to play as an ODST later in the story! In the meantime, I'd be totally okay with just reading the story. Halo is definitely one of my favorite universes, and even if I don't end up taking part I'll still keep my eye on this RP.
Okay, now I posted! Good writing all round guys and gals, looking forward to a long and successful RP with you!
But why would Stage 1 infected, also known as "Runners" be slower than Stage 2 infected, "Walkers"? Is it like some cruel Greenland/Iceland joke? :P
The Cathedral never changed much. The noise never faded, crowds neither swelled nor dwindled, artificial light constantly illuminating the five massive arms. The lack of a day and night rotation caused this persistent restlessness of the Cathedral. There was no set sleep cycle, business hours were 24/7, and the economy as always booming on the ancient city because of this. Ships buzzed in and out out the massive ports, carrying people, cargo, and occasionally, dangerous criminals like former Captain Werner “Drake” Coetzee.

His chestnut hair, interrupted only by a few premature silver strands, was long, much longer than the average military soldier. It hung in ragged locks down to his shoulders, hiding his much of his face from curious eyes, the rest covered by a three month unkempt beard. The ex-pirate stood proud though, with shoulders back and head up despite the metal links that dug into the leathery flesh of his wrist and ankles. A tight fitting dark jumpsuit clung to his deep chest and broad shoulders, doing little to conceal the hard, dangerous lines of his limbs. Perhaps the strangest feature of this roguish figure was his arm, rather a lack of. In its place, a prosthetic hung, gradually weaving into his shoulder in a symbiotic relationship with Werner. The exterior synthetic material resembled a rugged kevlar in texture, which weaved together exactly like human muscle. The grafted arm was obviously of Geth origin, though the five-fingered hand suggested the limb was fitted for a human rather than the machines who resembled their creators. Behind the criminal stood two fully armed Alliance soldiers, one with a heavy duffel bag, and both with their weapons half raised at the man between them. Their battle-scarred armor attested for their experience in combat, as well as the ranking insignias on their shoulders, but to Werner the former proved much more.

The sterile white airlock of the Shadow of Intent hissed as white gas pressurized the small chamber. A soft mechanical whirring in the hydraulics could be reverberated through the room before the gate lowered and hit the ground of the Cathedral. Werner, his usually long stride restricted by shackles, shuffled out of the ship, carefully followed by his two guards. The spaceport was just as he remembered three years ago, and he was relatively indifferent with the reunion. The artificial environment of the ship might suffice for the residents who lived there since birth, but to a native of Earth, and more recently Rannoch, fake trees, recycled air, and unnatural white light all seemed like a poor imitation of a true planet. Ironically, Werner didn’t mind the same environment when crammed onto a ship with several others, but a frigate was a second home to the ex-pirate. He stopped at the end of the ramp and took a sweeping look of the ship yard. Cargo ships, Alliance cruisers, passenger transport, they all hummed in and out of the docking bay. Three years ago, Werner would have pulled one of the greatest acts of piracy ever known in this bay, his name forever branded in history as the man who held the entire galaxy hostage with only a pistol. His shadowy eyes met the very location where he reunited with the very woman who stopped him. Werner swallowed and turned to his captors.

As one man uncuffed his wrists and ankles, the other tossed the massive duffel bag to his feet. “Remember, you’re going straight to The Palamecia. We’ll be watching,” The guard said ominously as his partner finished. Werner rubbed his human wrist and nodded before picking up the bag and leaving. He did respect the men. They did their job perfectly, and above all treated him fairly, which he didn’t exactly deserve. How many of their friends had he killed? In fact, he didn’t even deserve this opportunity at all, a shot for redemption. If he were on the council that decided his fate, Werner knew that only a swift execution would be fitting, and even that would be too merciful. Still, his skill in combat and extensive knowledge of asymmetric warfare evidently made him a prime candidate for this elite squad. Perhaps he would simply be used as cannon fodder. Werner shook his head and began walking through the shipyard, scanning for the Palencia. He’d been told that it was unlike any ship he’d ever seen, the rogue almost scoffed. In his years of pirating, Werner saw almost every single ship in existence, and yet when he laid his eyes on the sleek vessel, the ex-pirate knew it was a majestic work of craftsmanship to behold. It was obviously modeled after the SSV Normandy, and yet, like his arm structured after the Geth, there were obvious improvements. The hull was seamless and smooth, unmarred by the trials of time and battle. Points seemed to be nonexistent in the frame, every single point perfectly curved for maximum aerodynamics and structural integrity. The massive weapons interested him more than anything. Obviously, the engineers knew what they were doing, and this extensive designing no doubt extended to the weapon system.

Once again, Werner found himself in another white metal room, but this time, he was greeted by a voice as cool as the floor beneath his boots. A small electric blue hologram materialized in the previously empty space before him and spoke. ”Greetings human, I am Sira. As per instructed by the commanding officer, please verify your identification. A word of caution. Forgers will be quickly disposed of." Werner couldn’t help but chuckle at the last bit. Leave it to the military to kill anyone mistakenly stumbling upon their ship. Yet, the simple statement testified to the secrecy of the squad, sending a chill through his body.

“Hello, I’m Werner Coetzee, or Drake. I’m from South Africa, and…” He fumbled for his datapad in the duffel bag before continuing,”ID is F34-21540.” Werner’s informal tone showed just how little he cared for formal military language. Even then, he didn’t like how people addressed AI like they were simply computer programs. Many artificial intelligence units were more sentient than many people he knew. With this in mind, Werner silently hoped the ID was right and the chamber wouldn’t fill with toxic gas.

“Identification Verified. Please follow the schematics on your holo-pad to the briefing room, the mission briefing will begin shortly.”

Werner breathed a sigh of relief as the door opened and he walked into the ship, where he was met by a human who handed him a uniform directed him to the bathrooms. The frigate, he realized, was almost an exact interior replica to the SSV Normandy. He studied the schematics as a child and almost committed them to memory, so navigating through the Palamecia was like coming home. The long row of computers crammed with sailors, the massive galaxy map, even the elevator was in the same position. Werner was almost like a child again, though he kept his composure, but barely. He made his way to the bathrooms and quickly changed into his uniform, and was surprised by the perfect fit. Even the left sleeve was absent, hemmed at the perfect length where synthetic met organic. He hefted up his bag and prepared to leave, but caught a glance of his reflection in the mirror. Werner’s hair hung down like a dog, and though he was unfamiliar with military regulations, he knew it was far too ragged. The pirate reached into his bag and went to work on the mess, emerging as a fairly presentable figure. With the hair now gone, his sharp, angular face was now revealed, though slightly distorted by a light stubble, and the two deep gouges in his cheek visible. From memory, Werner walked to the briefing room, greeted by two geth and an asari. The presence of the machines caught him off guard, but their presence was comforting. Geth, by his experience on Rannoch, were the most honest and trustful beings he ever encountered in his life contrary to many stereotypes. Perhaps he admired the machines since, one could argue, he was almost part of them due to his prosthetic. The asari, on the other hand, caused his muscles to lock as he instinctively prepared for a fight at the sight of gleaming armor. Amazonian warriors, as the asari were commonly referred to among pirates. They were fierce in battle, especially with their advanced biotic powers, and never an adversary to overlook. He relaxed after a second and nodded to his crewmates before seating himself next to the geth with a box in hand and looked for their commander.
© 2007-2024
BBCode Cheatsheet