CoyoteKisses said After this week will be my winter break, which means SAT prep and some RPing
Sep said
Thats better.
Irisity said
So, what's the plan now?
Sep said
Too many and too strong abilities for a Padawan Learner, and you barely explain learning any off them. It's better than it was before, just need to flesh it. The more powers you have the more explanation, the rarer the power also contributes to this.
Sep said
I like the image but uh, lets go away from that for a second.
Korriban: Korriban (Or Moraband in NuCanon but I can roll with either) is a lost deserted world, cept for some pirates that find a habitable world that no-one goes to quite useful.
Age: Jedi in this Era aren't trained unless they are young when taken away from their parents. Anakin was a sole exception to this rule.
Dark Side Power: Learning this ability he'd definitely be discouraged from ever using it again, and while it isn't the most complex off ability I still don't see how he learned how to do it without formal training of any kind.