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On the topic of hints for writing stories, some time ago I ran into something simply called as the Eight Rules for Writing Fiction made by Kurt Vonnegut.

1: Use the time of a total stranger in such a way that he or she will not feel the time was wasted.

2: Give the reader at least one character he or she can root for.

3: Every character should want something, even if it is only a glass of water.

4: Every sentence must do one of two things — reveal character or advance the action.

5: Start as close to the end as possible.

6: Be a sadist. Now matter how sweet and innocent your leading characters, make awful things happen to them — in order that the reader may see what they are made of.

7: Write to please just one person. If you open a window and make love to the world, so to speak, your story will get pneumonia.

8: Give your readers as much information as possible as soon as possible. To heck with suspense. Readers should have such complete understanding of what is going on, where and why, that they could finish the story themselves, should cockroaches eat the last few pages.

Some of them support what Kho summarized, while the last one opposes it. Balance is always best In my opinion and, quite frankly, writing a story is not like a cake recipe. You can write something good while disregarding said to be important things or rules and you can also write something bad while following them, but these rules can certainly help.
Generate some activity then.


I just did. And I'm still working on my post.
This place has been pretty quiet lately.
As for London, I did visit a couple times when things were better. Everything's really orderly, I loved it. Especially how the buses are always on time. How the heck do they manage to time everything so well??


From what I heard the clocks at the stops are linked to the proximity of the bus. If the bus is late the clock slows down and if it's ahead of time the clock speeds up to compensate.

Also, best of luck on your situation. I know you'll need it.
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Helvana lives in a small apartment building with Lloyd and Gwyn.

She spends all day doing nothing at home while Gwyn goes to school and Lloyd goes to work as the breadwinner of the house.

Helvana also has a pen for crows in the rooftops. The landlord got pissed when he found out, but she "convinced" him to keep the pens there with no extra charge. The neighbors are afraid of talking to her because of this.

Sometimes goes out to buy groceries and does household chores if she feels like it, but most of the time Lloyd has to tell her to do them.

Goes on trips with the brothers on the weekends.

Since the apartment is small they only have one bedroom, so they have to share the bed.
Ohh, this could be nice. I'm in.
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My super hero name is The Fartso


Let me guess, you eat a lot of garlic and attack by farting. You can do that to fly around too, right?
@Frettzo All that bad stuff going on in your end and can still find time to work on a post. You must be a part-time super hero.
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