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Noble Arms - The ASEAN War [Moved to New Thread]

@Senhara Approval 3/3, clear for Char tab

Noble Arms - The ASEAN War [Moved to New Thread]

@MagusDream Approval 2/3

Noble Arms - The ASEAN War [Moved to New Thread]

Hannie and Carroman Mini-RP

^{Discord dialogue between Sniblet as Hannie and Manperor as Carroman from "#Sison Auditorium Barracks (Present)"}

Hannie

More than one mistake is made in quick sequence.
The first was Carroman's; startling an Arms Master awake from striking distance is very rarely wise. Hannie is particularly volatile at this moment, given she is in the middle of, firstly, a nightmare about her least favorite thing in the world, and secondly, the second worst day of her life.

The second mistake is Hannie's. Hers is doing exactly what you should expect her to do in these conditions.
Her movement is fast and clumsy, reflexive and half-awake. With a yelp and a soft pop of suddenly declining air pressure, the frosty dagger that had just crossed Carroman's mind is instantly between them, in Hannie's hand as she raises them up to cover her face - quickly bringing the blade toward the underside of Carroman's right arm as he finishes with that first mistake.

We all make mistakes. Sometimes those mistakes get our forearms slashed, or almost slashed, by a 14-year-old girl. This time, hopefully it's "almost": even Arms Masters don't quite brush off frostbite.

Carroman

Carroman moved back as he saw the blade flash before his eyes, sighing as he did. The dragon headed cane shone with a warm, brilliant glow, though his expression was anything but.

"Well, well, sorry about that, did I startle you?" Carroman shook his head, putting one hand on his back as it ached somewhat. "What are you... eh, doing up here?"

Hannie

Hannie blinks. She glances to her weapon, then to Carroman. She flinches and drops the dagger, and it blinks out of being just short of landing in her lap.
"I'm sorry," she says, "I'm so sorry, ah... am- am I not supposed to be here? I can sleep somewhere else..."
If it weren't for Dragonstaff's reflected glow, there would be no light at all in Hannie's eyes.

Carroman

Carroman could see it. Hannie had those dead eyes, belonging to someone who wasn't allowed to grow up properly. A child that was forced to grow up too fast, and then exposed to the horrors of war. He'd know. If combat could mentally scar even hardy veterans, how much more would it do to literal kids?

"I guess the others didn't bother to bring you along to the beach," Carroman answered, sitting down. "Not that kids of your age should be going out to war. The fact that you're out here and not with, I don't know, your families, is a failure of epic proportions. Though I guess the existence of war is a failure in every way. Anyway, I just want to know. Why do you, you know, always doze off?"

Hannie

"...always... doze off?"
Has she been sleeping a lot? Even if he didn't catch her going to the beach with the rest, maybe this man's been paying more attention to her in some ways than she has to herself?
She did sleep for most of the truck ride. And for a little while after they got settled in the barracks. But if she's still sleeping now, isn't that just because Kirvella's drained her?

"Well, I guess I... don't really... wanna be awake?"
That's not quite what she was planning to say. It feels bad, like a confession. She looks down into her lap, trying to sort out her own meaning.
"Sorry," she says, to be safe. "You're... um... mister Caravan?"

Carroman

"Carroman," the chaplain corrected, before nodding. "Well, it might not be wise to not be awake now, when the mountains themselves are shaking. Apparently we got some A classes attacking."

Hannie

"Carroman. Yeah."
The energy Hannie woke up with has slipped away again. Again her gaze falls from his face, and slowly trails down to somewhere around his left knee. She sits unmoving, hands folded in her lap.
"I... saw."

Carroman

The chaplain nodded his head, visibly concerned. The exact reason why Hannie slept so much still eluded him. Was she anemic? Did her Noble Arm drain so much energy that it forces her to a sleepy state? Or was she just like that?

"Well... ah, damn. They're calling for healing. I have to go. Are you absolutely sure that you want to stay here? Instead of... you know, the barracks."

Hannie

The numb expression on her face could indeed just be sleepiness, but a man who's been doing what Carroman's been doing has seen a lot of expressions like it recently. The charred holes in her jacket, the bullet wound-shaped icy circles in her shoulders, together seem to indicate that she's already been to the beach.
"I prefer the quiet up here," she says, softly.

And then, outside, a mountain uproots itself, and it is no longer quiet.

The Maids Guide to Demon Hunting

I don't think I'm enjoying this enough to warrant keeping up with the pace, even as forgiving as it is. I'm dropping out. I say either melt Astreya to raise the stakes, or just have her get called home after this.

Noble Arms - The ASEAN War [Moved to New Thread]

@Landaus Five-One I forgot that reviews on this weren't moving
I think Ayahime is in a good enough place for me now, approval 1/3

The Maids Guide to Demon Hunting

First kill! Astreya hurries back for her gun-
wait, so demons can be killed?-
Anyway, she goes back for her gun and reassesses her list of problems. There's the dead demon, the other dead demons, and this demon that's not dead. Right! Point the gun at it! Aaaand- a tank falls on it.
Well. Hey, that'll keep it still. She points and holds the trigger.

She can't hear Leoniya over the sound of her gun, but her disappointed searching speaks clearly enough. She kind of tries to gesture at it with her eyes. She mouths, "Это под тобой."

The Maids Guide to Demon Hunting

Astreya drops her gun as she falls over. It goes off with a wild shot blasted in some direction she doesn't bother to check up on, preferring to quickly crawl out of the Greater Beast's vicinity. If it's a pain even to touch, who would want to be anywhere close to-
As she gets up, Astreya reaches for her war-slash-smithing-hammer.
The hair on one side of her face is visibly smoldering, but she doesn't seem to notice. Even the smell is pretty well covered up by everything else.

Combat Observations Log #002 - its leg fell off I think

It bleeds! Wow, it bleeds a lot! And is it slowing down? Does it suffer from exsanguination? Or is that hypothermia?
Okay, reassessment:

• The arms are tough.
• The legs are not as tough.
• Tearing pieces off of it does it some sort of significant harm.
• Touching it really hurts. Its blood probably isn't much better.
• I want to whack it.

Conclusion: I should whack it.

She rotates the hammer in her grip, figuring the flat end isn't going to do much good to bleed the monster, and instead presenting the wedge on the opposite side of its head for imminent use. With its back gushing lava and her uniform featuring fire-resistant shoes rather than fire-resistant boots, she decides to go for its flank. She doesn't really want to get close to its arms.
She swings hard overhead, hoping to embed the spike and tear open a new wound.

Noble Arms - The ASEAN War [Moved to New Thread]

@The Man Emperor
I mean like this

Noble Arm Rank:

C

Power: B
Speed: E
Range: C-B
Persistence: C
Precision: B
Potential: E

Provided you do that,
Approval 2/4

Noble Arms - The ASEAN War [Moved to New Thread]

@The Man Emperor
Approval 0/4

Firstly I'm gonna draw a line at three whole un-hider-ed sheets, please stop making me scrollllll
Doesn't matter what you call it, as long as it's easy for me to guess who the hider's for.

Carroman Fisch Montenegro/CFM/The Chaplain/Support Main

[sheet go here]

Second:

Power: C (3)
+Speed: E (1)
+Range: C-B (3-4)
+Persistence: C (3)
+Precision: B (4)
+Potential: C (3)
= 16-17
/6
= 2.66-2.833
Overall rank = D

Where the hider says "insert NA rank here," you put your overall rank decided by this calculation. If you feel like he warrants a higher or lower rank than the math says, you can make him a C or an E accordingly.

With that said, third:

Are these grades reflective of what you're trying to do?
Power C is iffy for easily piercing tank armor. That might be a B. Given that, a divine shield that's stronger than tank armor is definitely a B.

Speed doesn't reflect the Master's movement speed, it reflects the responsiveness of the NA.

E-Rank: Comparative to walking underwater. Notable ramp-up/charge time. Abilities take a disadvantageously long time to fully "stick". Recommended against using them in the open or in sight of any hostile, at least initially.

#Power Classification System

I don't see any notes about charge-up or ramp-up in any of Carroman's abilities. If you are using Speed in the sense dictated above, specify the charge-up times/mechanisms/etc. If you misunderstood what Speed meant, reassess.

Noble Arms - The ASEAN War [Moved to New Thread]

Having reviewed Samuel Aggregate in advance up to his posting, I've already approved his current version
Approval 1/3 @SirStriker

(he's not in the game yet, just posted in the wrong tab by mistake)