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Not thing to knit pick, but there's a dew things wrong with that post that cause issues with the already established Exoria world:

1. Nobody aside from Rectja, Audra and one guard know that Maarcuu is a GLIP agent, they just know there's a bounty out for the Beastman with the specific design.

2. You just threatened a majorly powerful crime lord in a room full of his friends. He doesn't care if the G.L.I.P. shows up or even if its revealed that he hired the Enimorg to destroy the Ulysses. It'll only further his reputation of his fearsome nature and ruthlessness.

3. Seeing as how Norrux Mirugal is as far away from the G.L.I.P. and Agerna as possible, nobody would know the identity of Audra except Rectja and the main group of people, but specifically Maarcuu, Vash, and Ana.

4. I should have mentioned this, so its no fault of yours, but I prefer having the NPC I created (Rectja) being played by me when it comes to posts concerning his involvement. I have a specific idea for how he acts, but you basically described him as an official Jabba the Hutt ripoff.

5. Another thing concerning Rectja: he would have Joker shot on sight if he even mentioned betraying him or trying to blackmail him. He is insanely powerful, so it would be like throwing a pea at a dragon and hoping it would work. All you do is piss off the dragon and get your ass handed to you in the insuing fight.
Yeah, as said I'll tweak it more tomorrow when I'm not busy or extremely tired XD

Anyways, glad I could make Rectja into the biggest asshole imaginable xD. He started off as a Jabba ripoff, but he's sort of turning into his own character, like a mix of the two. Sure he's disgusting, but he's smart as hell, is extremely devious, and has just the right amount of the "I'm powerful and rich so I can do whatever I want" mind set.


A Galaxy on the Verge of Corruption...

RULES:

1. No GMing. We don't want any Mary-Sues or Gary-Sues
2. Maximum of 3 Active Characters per person. Any more needs approval by a GM
3. Characters can and WILL die, but please ASK somebody before you attempt to kill their character rather then just say "Your guy is dead."
4. Keep it PG-13!! Romance and Lovey-Dovey stuff is fine, as well as the occasional innuendo, but take smut scenes to PM, please. Also, violence is allowed, but please don't rip out a guys entrails and hold them above his head while he slowly dies. We're not monsters (:3)
5. Some scenes will be time skipped if they drag on too long/get too boring, but most of the time we will RP things through.
6. Each member of the RP will eventually become a member of the small group of adventurers who save the galaxy :3
7. Your character cannot have any GM abilities.
8. Post at least a paragraph each time (more is fantastic)
9. GM posts will be announced (these include plot movers, special events or even the death/introduction of a new character)
10. If you got this far, here's a cookie *hands cookie*
11. Please make PvP combat fair. It really sucks when somebody unleashes their ultimate power and freezes the other person's foot to the floor, then proceed to just punch the crap out of their immobile opponent. In addition, GM moves will NOT be allowed inside PvP combat unless approved/announced in a GM event.
12. Enjoy the RP to the best of your ability!![/rules]

~ Previously On Exoria.. ~

The Spaceship Ulysses was attacked by the Enimorg, a group of rouge Androids for hire, on the day of Princess Audra's wedding. A group of heroes consisting of Maarcuu, a Beastman Royal Pilot and his utility droid HK-55, Ana, a cyborg business woman, and Vashando, a warrior with an A.I named "Alice", attempted to rescue the princess and escape to a nearby Galactic League of Interplanetary Prorecion (G.L.I.P.) friendly planet. Instead, the Enimorg captured Audra and shot down the escape pod, which landed on a criminal planet known as Norrux Mirugal. Upon their arrival, the heroes met with Zuzen, a cyborg vigilante, Tal, an orphaned theif living off the streets, Sura and Noki, two mysterious aliens and Oradis, a Queronian with a multiple personality disorder. Unknown, Princess Audra was taken by a crime lord known as Rectja Tyrr, who had a certain something for collecting rare prizes. He made the fair Princess his slave girl and forced her to entertain the gangsters within his palace. There, Audra met two thugs, Æðelþryð and Una, and a robot named FX-83ES-Model Number: 825690, all of whom had personal issues towards Rectja. After establishing themselves on Norrux Mirugal, the heroes were taken in by Zuzen. When Maarcuu was labeled as a potential threat towards Rectja, the gangster put a bounty on the beatman's head, fearing that he had brought G.L.I.P. forces to Norrux Mirugal with him. The heroes knew they required credits to get off the planet, but knew they had none. Soon, they would discover that a massive underground Speeder Racing tournament was being held. The winners would receive a massive credit prize, as well as a starship.

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Where we last left off on "Norrux Mirugal"...



Under City: Level 5 of 7. Currently under the Territorial Control of crime lord, Rectja Tyrr.



"Maarcuu still believes that the situation at hand is out of control. Maarcuu thinks that as soon as possible, we get out of Norrux Mirugal and send for backup from G.L.I.P." The Beastman explained, his arm crossed and his helmet removed. He still wore the bounty hunter's armour he had stolen from a man who tried to claim his life earlier that day. As it would seem, there was a bounty placed upon the Beastman's fuzzy head by none other then Rectja Tyrr, a revered and feared Borregelian crime lord who owned more then half of the 7 city levels. Apparently, the gangster had discovered that Maarcuu worked for G.L.I.P. and saw him as a threat that needed to be eliminated. Maarcuu couldn't fully grasp the reasoning, but little did he realize the full picture. All he knew was that the gangster wanted him dead for reasons unknown, aside from being associated with G.L.I.P. through the Agerna Royal Pilots League. Rememering the league and Agerna itself, his mind raced back to the events before now.

It was a special day. The day that Princess Audra Strathmore of the planet Agerna was to wed the 6-armed, green skinned, bug-eyed Prince Thall of Raximotoriphalupagorious. The wedding was held aboard King Ridley-Scott II's starcruiser, the USS Ulysses and everything seemed to be going perfectly alright. Then, just before saying "I do", a ear-piercing screech sound began emitting from a half human-half droid being that was slowly paralyzing the passengers. Quickly, the noise was halted by HK-55's electrical work, but then things really began to pick up. The ship was fired upon by a Morg Battleship, which quickly introduced the Enimorg as the culprits behind the attack. The Enimorg, a rouge group of sentient androids who worked as bounty hunters and thugs for hire against the G.L.I.P., had been hired to capture Princess Audra. With much help from two passengers, Vashando Sykes and Ana Cassius, Maarcuu and HK-55 managed to recover the Princess and evacuate the other passengers. However, Audra turned herself into the Enimorg before anybody in the group could stop her. Without anything left to do but evacuate the slowly burning ship, Maarcuu, HK-55, Vash and Ana took the royal escape pod and jettisoned themselves. The trio watched the ship explode, not knowing if Audra had survived. Without warning, the group was suddenly assaulted by the Morg Battleship and were forced to make an emergency landing. Thanks to Maarcuu's flying skills, they managed to land safely, but the escape pod was trashed upon impact.

Through a series of interesting meet ups, conversations and many hours of walking, the trio quickly became a larger group upon their crash landing. Joined by Zuzen, a cyborg vigilante, Tal, an orphaned theif living off the streets, Sura and Noki, two mysterious aliens and Oradis, a Queronian with a multiple personality disorder, Maarcuu and friends found that they were not the only ones who wanted to get off the hunk of shit criminal Haven planet known as "Norrux Mirugal". Many more events followed after they met, such as being taken into Zuzen's apartment rather then live off the streets, gaining the trust of each other, and even chasing down a criminal who was spying on the group. It all seemed like such a blur to Maarcuu, because the entire day seemed to just keep going on and on without ever ending. Thankfully, the lanterns around the under city had changed to a dark blue colour, signalling that night was fast approaching. An extreme sense of exhaustion had overcome the Beastman from the long and tiring day he had gone through. He knew that the others felt the same way as well, but he did his best to stay awake. Besides, the adrenaline from almost being killed moments before really helped him keep his eyes open.

Then, without warning, his thoughts were interrupted as a woman who looked very strange entered the apartment. Zuzen apparently seemed to know her, so that was something.. But he felt somewhat uncomfortable when she turned her attention to Ana. It seemed like they knew each other once long ago, but Maarcuu showed no signs of being interested. Instead, his thoughts drifted off into more personal matters such as his current state of mind. Ever since they landed, he had been concerned. Not entirely for himself, or Ana and Vash, or the others he had learned to call "Partners" and "Friends", but mostly for the Princess. He knew that Audra was more then capable of taking care of herself (in fact, he had personally witnessed her taking down 16 thugs on Yeppu after a conference discussing the spice trading with Agerna was interrupted because they wanted to rob the rich folk), but his mind kept replaying the horrifying image of the Ulysses exploding. He had no idea if the Princess was still onboard, but he prayed she had made it off safely, even if it was with the Enimorg. At least if she was captured, then the chances to save her would be greater then if she was dead. One of the many tasks assigned to Maarcuu as a Royal Pilot was to ensure the safety of the Agerna royal family. He had successfully managed to evacuate the king and his wife from the wreckage.. But he failed to save Audra.

With a look of curiosity, Maarcuu turned his head to Zuzen and leaned against the wall of the apartment. By his side, HK-55 had seemingly been calculating data on the interface that the cyborg vigilante had set up to spy on Norrux Mirugal. The little droid booped and whizzed, shaking back and forth as it apparently discovered something. However, with an extreme lack of people who spoke Mechan-Ese (the language of the robots), the little droid's exclamations seemed to go unnoticed. "Zuzen, does Zuzen know if there is a way to acquire a ship, or some form of transport off of Norrux Mirugal? Preferably something that could be achieved within the time line of a week or so." Maarcuu stated, his choppy Galactic Standard coming out as strangely as it usually did.

~~ Meanwhile, at Rectja's Palace ~~



"Moska pudaa, chowbassa! Panwa oto choppa garbo! Dopo moulee-rah grabbo-pawap machacheesa pago buttmalias? Tee-tocky aaya Audra hugga chugga bugga oh hola ivy abba iggaa utga wana bolla...." Bring her to me! Provide me with my new dancing girl! What use is there to having slave girls if I do not force them to dance? Bring me Audra and the other girls, then tell the band to start playing... commanded with a wicked smile. The two Raximotoriphalupagorians nodded at their Borregelian master and marched off towards the holding cells where the slave girls were kept. Rectja had taken a certain fondness to his new dancing girl, Princess Audra of Agerna. She was a graceful and seductive dancer, but what pleased him the most was knowing exactly who she was: royalty. Rectja knew that eventually the G.L.I.P. would try to find her and may even track down her location, which was why he ordered the total destruction of the Ulysses and any ships that may have tried to escape. The Enimorg were lethal and knew exactly how to kill every last person aboard the starcruiser. Rectja always preferred hiring the rouge androids as opposed to his goons when it came to jobs like that because he knew the Enimorg wouldn't leave a single trace if evidence behind. The ships that had managed to escape had already been tracked down and were reported "missing" hours ago. The only shuttle remaining untouched was the one belonging to King Ridley-Scott and his Queen, for Rectja dared not to kill royalty. Kidnapping the princess for his own sick desire and pleasure, however, worked better in his mind.

As the palace band began to start up the song, which was a low and smooth beat, the guards brought up at least 7 of the 12 slave girls Rectja owned, including Audra herself. With a look of absolute sick desire, the disgusting Borregelian licked his lips and adjusted himself on the throne he was seated upon. With a wave of his massive, oversized, muscly hand, the group of girls nodded and began to dance, hopefully with Audra along side them. Rectja didn't mind if the girls were used and abused by his palace residents, but Audra was one who he couldn't allow such harm to come to, not that she'd allow it without a fight. He admired her strong will, but knew that he would break her before the week was out. He always did. Whenever his thugs would ask or talk about doing the things they did with the other girls, Rectja would agree. However, the group quickly learned to shut up after asking to do the same things to Audra resulted in a guy being disemboweled before the group by Rectja's "pet". As the girls danced, he grabbed the chain around Audra's neck and yanked it hard, pulling the girl towards him. "Je killya, um pasa doe beeska wumpa. Keel-ee calleya ku kah. Da beesga coo, palyeeya pityee bo tenya go kaka juju hoopa!" My dear, you seen like you aren't enjoying yourself. Feel free, become enveloped in the rhythm. If you do not dance like I wish for you to, then you can expect a fate worse then your average disobedience beating. Rectja grumbled in his deep booming voice as his rage-filled eyes stared into hers. There was a major sense of intimidation about him. Everything he did was almost petrifying, but that was all part of who he was. When he finished speaking to Audra, his forked, snake-like tongue extended from his lips and gently licked the young woman's cheek in a disturbing way, giving her an idea of what would happen next if she failed to impress him once again with her dance skills.
XD its fine, I've already included the fact that since nobody knows how to speak Mechan-ese, HK-55 is gonna get the typical ignore treatment while the Doc explains.

Oh, and the IC's up incase anybody cares.
Yeah, seeing as how its the first post in the RP (again), we should lay off the larger collabs for a little while. If its two people just chatting, then by all means go for it. But if its a major plot mover consisting of 3 or more people, then I'd say lay off them until we've re-established ourselves into the RP setting.

And I'll try my best to cover everything, all I can remember happening is Scarlett walked in and HK-55 wouldn't shut up because it knows how to make a lot of money, via the race.
The first post will be up tomorrow, I double pinkie swear it ^^
Vash said
Pirate pad, pirate pad, pirate pad, pirate PAD!!!


No, no, no, NO!! Pirate Pad is only for collabs and I already admitted my disinterest in the site after we went Collab crazy. Nobody is allowed using it for a while without approval of me. Not trying to be a hard ass, but its just not something I'd like to see happen again.
Cool. And don't worry folks, the IC should be up in the next hour, assuming all goes well. I tried to piece together where we left of to the best of my ability, but if it has any continuity errors, then fuck you for finding them and don't bother mentioning them. Do I look like I give a shit if the continuity is fucked with?

Kidding, I love you all :3

I'll also probably set up a Skype (or some other kind of thing) group tomorrow or something so we can stay in touch off-site in case the site goes down again. If I do set it up, I'll let you guys know and any personal stuff like usernames I'll just ask for in PM.
I'd be up.
Kyelin said
lol, it's a classic.Really bummed out about missing the Xmas carol though :L


Oh? Well, have I got a treat for YOU!

"A Fairytale of Exoria: A Sing-Along"

(Listen to this and sing along ^^! Sorry if I forgot anybody, I'll make another if I did!)

Audra: "Its Christmas Eve, you know. At Rectja's Palace. I'm beaten everyday, with extreme malice.

But I can't shed no tears. These pigs will eat it up. All I can do is hope, that my friends will show up.

Oh where's that boy-girl thing? With cat-like ears so big? And the soldier in a suit? Oh, and Ana too?

Somebody hear my plea. It'll be a gift for me. Please Santa give them word. So I can be set free.."

~~

Maarcuu: "We'll search high and low for Princess Audra, right Vash?"

Vash: "You got it Maarcuu now move your fuzzy ass!!"

Ana: "You two are such dorks, can't believe what I hear. For this search I think that I need another beer."

Zuzen: "Onward then, to go save the day. We'll grab our Christmas Shopping while we're on our way."

Tal: "Hooray, hooray!! It'll be the best Christmas Day, cause I'll get gifts that actually cost mon-eh.".

All: "Well the boys of the Norrux Mirugal Choir, were singing "Team G.L.I.P", hooray!! So know that we'll save Audra, for Christmas Day!!"

~~

Æðelþryð and Una: "We know there's tons of thugs at the Palace Gates

Noki: "I'll cause a diversion, you kill them with these Ice Skates."

Oradis: "For the mood, I feel that this song seems quite improper"

HK-55: *whips out lamp-post junk, then* "Beep-Boop, Mother Fucker."

All: "Well the boys of the Norrux Mirugal Choir, were singing "Team G.L.I.P", hooray!! But we might not save Audra, by Christmas Day!!"

~~

Rectja: "Underagiha loyal hutt!! Ad ihgsga Bhutan?!"The Princess is my maiden!! As my slave, to me she's bound!!

FX-83ES-Model Number: 825690: "RECTJA TYRR HAS BEEN FOUND: PREPARE FOR EXTERMINATION!!"

Sura: "There's thugs coming at us."

Alice: "Thanks, Captain Obvious!!"

BOOOM POW KAABOOOSH UUUUUURTTAAAAAAAAH!!!

...

Maarcuu: "Now that we've saved Audra, lets all go out and get drunk!!"

All: "YEAH!!

Well the boys of Rectja's Palace Choir, were singing "Team G.L.I.P", hooray!! We got back Princess Audra, on Christmas Day!!"
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