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Which part?
The deuteragonist setting things up to make the main character look good. Maybe it's intentional? And act of love perhaps?
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Which part?
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It’s like everything he does is a setup to make the main character look good. He never solves the main problem himself. The formula is getting boring.
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He’s a little too helpless, and the buildup for his love interest with the protagonist is far too obvious. She’s a much more interesting character.
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*Turns the page*
It’s not bad. I don’t like the deuteragonist very much, though.
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*Sits by the roaring fireplace, reading a book*
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Alright,
*leaves a small hand-held device on a table near you*
This is how you’ll be able to reach me when you are ready.
*waves and Rhoan and I blip away*
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Great! See you later.
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Sure. Anything else you need from me?
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Great. We should get this over with ASAP.