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@Thecrash20 Wouldn't that just heat up the clay and harden his skin? Making him more easier to kill?

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I don't necessarily see a problem with a religious character or a philosopher pirate. The character could work with the right execution though I would think that it's a bit tricky. Philosophy wise, there would be plenty of time traveling on a ship and laying low from the law so I expect most characters would have hobbies to occupy them during such times, why not philosophy?

Skill wise I do agree that there should be something.

@Sophrus

Well it would kinda be hard for him to be religious when he doesn't know that much about the religion he's practicing or even understand it's language.

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@Sierra It's pretty good, hopefully someone will try to ask if they can ride her drone into battle or if she does.

@KatKook No you leave with your 2A pictures, I'm joking your in. Sorry if I seemed unclear

@Thecrash20 Wait what? "Depending on the heat of the Weapons his Plasma cannon will actually begin to melt his skin, Liquid's skin is exactly that, Liquid." What? How do you burn liquid?

@GingerBoi123 Yeah man it's cool

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But Idk what I could suggest, maybe dropping the religiousness, I don't mean to be rude towards it if it's your actual faith, but I think it would be kinda strange to have that in a pirate, I'm sorry.

I would suggest adding some experience with handling a rifle in his history or personality because you don't have anything there for sniping or any skills in it.

I just personally feel as if they are a peaceful character or a non-violent person among people who would be annoyed by his faith or useless in a fight, I don't mean to call your cs useless but I feel as if your char just doesn't fit when we have someone like Hadovich who's all rip and tear and feel as if he'd go against us or want to leave us for the crimes we might cause, do you see where I'm going? I don't mean to be rude I really don't, but like I said I'd suggest dropping the religious part of your cs, I'm sorry but I don't think it will work here.

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@bloonewb Well I'd like to remind not just you, but everyone that we're space pirates as well as people fighting against the big bad space billionares. It's more of bad vs evil.

I feel your char simply wouldn't fit from his personality, He seems more of a religious type journeying with space pirates, it seems kinda strange that a man of the faith would be journeying with us also he doesn't really know the religion that he's trying to preach to others who may or may not want to hear it from him, also he's a sniper who's mainly quiet on a team of people, when snipers work within teams they can't exactly be silent for large amounts of time from what I know. Then there's the fact you want him to be a philosopher with a group of pirates.

Plus on the other side you haven't really given him any real training or experience with a rifle, just that he was enraptured by a religion that he doesn't fully know.

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@Sophrus I think you should add a bit more to the personality, besides that you seem okay really, I would suggest a smaller fighter image but I think our ship can hold it, I'd also suggest a primary but if you don't exactly want one it's cool too.

@MonachromeX2 Looks good, don't really know what else I could say about him but he looks okay.

@bloonewb Um, I don't know if your character would fit in this group honestly, I think you should edit the personality and history to give him some experience or training of some sort to be a sniper really, but I mostly feel as if your char wouldn't really fit in with the rest of the group and think you should make edits.

@Dark Light When you're finished it mention me, I'm not sure what to think of them yet.

@KatKook Interesting, I hope you can keep up with the android machine act when you post, looks okay.

@Zelosse He seems edgy, I will allow him.

@Thecrash20 I'm sorry but I feel that is a bit much.

@GingerBoi123 So Rambo first blood in space, I don't think much is wrong with him besides all the edgy names, but it seems okay.

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Vertex

Vertex

Age:
50

Gender:
Female

Class:
Commando

Race:
Part Draken part human

Draken

Name:
Draken

Home planet:
Drogohime

Enviroment:
The planet ranges from several different biomes, ranging from Volcanic to long grassy plains and barren deserts

Physical look:
Draken are large reptilian humanoids, standing larger and heavier than normal humans on average at times with only in some rare cases for them to be shorter than humans and other races. Draken have shield shaped scales on their limbs stopping just before their torso, a sole line of scales trail up their spine and outline their faces, each Draken has a pair of curling horns growing from their brow, and slitted reptilian eyes with bright yellow irises. have sinuous tails growing from just over their behinds, fully prehensile and tapered to a fine point. Draken Their tails are covered with small, soft scales, and are smooth from tip to base. Draken tails help with balance and for ones that are born with wings they use their wings for balance during flight and can be controlled precisely enough to operate tools and assist in other activities.

Racial traits:
The most notable of their traits are their curved horns and colored scales, while they do have supple soft skin they have incredibly tough scales that depend on their environment they were raised in lastly is their scaled hands with sharp almost pointed nails as sharp as their teeth that could be used as weapons and are cold blooded creatures.

Life span:
For Full blooded Draken the longest they can live is 450 years, while for half blooded Draken their life span will be dwarfed to a 150 years, their adulthood is reached at the age of 20.

Diet:
Draken are largely carnivorous creatures eating only meat of beings they consider lesser beings or prey, as long as it's made of meat and not poisonous towards them they will gorge themselves on it.

Home world:
None

Appearance:
Vertex stands at the height of 6'5, her face is human in shape and structure, with smooth, fair skin, and scales on her cheeks; her face was beautiful once, now it's scarred with her left eye blinded. Like most Draken her right eye is a bright yellow with a vertical slit, long dark hair cascades down her back with only a couple dark locks of raven colored hair flowing in front of her face.

Down the back of her neck and around her shoulders house sturdy shield like black scales to protect her body from damage, the scales travel down her muscular arms and wraps around her wrist and claw like hands; around her belly and sizable chest her body is more skin than scales, and due to her human side her skin is softer than full blooded members of her kind.

From the waist down black scales coat Vertex's legs, with feet ending in supple, smooth leathery soles; jutting from her back side is a foot long dark scaled tail that moves to and fro at her command, due to being part human she lacks the wings other members of her race would have.

When on the ship, Vertex will wear a simple wide neck white blouse with short sleeves to show off her scaled arms, around her waist she will have a belt that wraps around her solid waist and keeps her jeans from falling to her ankles, while she may wear pants and a shirt she will forgo wearing shoes on her own ship letting her reptilian like feet be free. While Raiding or on a mission she wears a heavy set of metal armor matching the dark color of her scales, the armor is almost akin to a knight's armor with metal covering most of the body and leaving little openings, due to it's weight and shape it's only useful to Vertex herself.

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Former Profession: Mercenary

Personality:
On the outside Vertex can be a brooding, cold, gruff and sometimes cynical, when it comes to her crew Vertex demands strength and loyalty from them all, she doesn't accept weakness among her crew and is quick to remind the others of it whenever she feels it needs to be brought up, while she expects the best from her own crew she isn't unfair but tries to be strict towards them.

When it comes down to combat Vertex isn't a stranger, choosing to prefer doing things she claims are the "easy way" when it comes to their missions before rethinking the strategy and remember that she has allies to think of, while she's not forgetting about her crew she'd just rather gun down her enemies with several magazines of ammo and enjoying the feeling in the moment before running out of ammunition or needing to retreat.

Despite the above, Vertex isn't without heart, while she may not show it or give the crew much praise she cares deeply for each member and know that each time they take a step off the ship it's a chance they could end up dead or at anytime all of them could be slaughtered and chooses to be the protective wall that stops them from being killed.

History:

Captain Vertex's past is filled with more violence than most would ever want in their life time; when she was young Vertex attempted to join a military to fight for a cause to find something that would give her a drive, but once she joined and passed the training to fight with heavy armor she shot her commanding officer in the face after an ambush wiped out half of her squad and they lost an outpost they needed to continue their campaign instead of being arrested by the everyone in the base, Vertex and the last remaining members of the squad held out against the rest of the base's soldiers, stole a number of it's weapons then escaped in the dead of night on a ship.

Once the squad was out of danger they all voted on a leader and at first it wasn't Vertex, instead of being simple criminals, they were first Mercenaries fighting for money under different names and with a different ship. They hid their identities behind mask while people paid them to fight their battles, kill dangerous aliens or beast, or sometimes simply deliver something illegal or too dangerous for others to transport. During one of the of their missions on a hostile world, a grenade blew up their leader and once the lasers, bullets, and plasma stopped being fired they had to vote for another leader, and once again it wasn't Vertex, but she didn't want to be the leader.

As the years began to climb on, Vertex watched as her allies fell down beside her one by one every couple years, some in her arms slowly without her being able to stop it, while some died almost instantly, once it was simply her left Vertex decided that she was gonna make her own crew with the ship now that it simply was just her by herself, she was no long going to be a Mercenary, and figured that she could make more credits being a pirate.

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• Primary:PKR Light Machine gun with grenade launcher
• Secondary:Uroboros custom
• Melee: Fist or the buttstock of her PKR
• Equipment:
  Mobile shield projector
  incendiary grenade rounds
  EMP grenade rounds
  Acid grenade rounds

Other:

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Robert "Guerrila" Hadovich

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@MonachromeX2 can you do me a solid and reread your appearance and change the to next to legs to two it kinda confused me when I first read it. And do you have a melee weapon as a secondary?