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Bec Bonacci
[ 22 || Italian || Male ]
APPEARANCE & PERSONALITY
APPEARANCE
PERSONALITY TRAITS
BACKSTORY & MOTIVATION
Bec stands at 1,88 metres. He's a slim Caucasian young adult with sharp facial features which are covered by a mess of straight light hair and a stubble. A half-way unbuttoned black shirt displays his physique which, while impressive for a normal human, is underdeveloped by Nomad's standards. His ripped skinny grey pants are held up by a large buckled belt and meet a pair of fine black leather boots at their end. While not fighting he often wears a dark overcoat with a furred collar. A dark hat with a purple band tops off his looks. His body lacks any type of marks or scars save for the fingertips of his left hand which are as black as coal.
PERSONALITY TRAITS
-Insufferable
-Brilliant
-Snarky
-Full of himself
-Lazy
-Bohemic
-Excentric
-Arrogant
-Brilliant
-Snarky
-Full of himself
-Lazy
-Bohemic
-Excentric
-Arrogant
BACKSTORY & MOTIVATION
Giorgio Battista was born to a poor italian couple on a large metropolitan city. His mother was worked as a house maid while his father ran a dying grocers. When not fighting, his parents were either drinking their problems away or lamenting how their life turned out, barely acknowledging their son's existence. In the middle of all of this, no one expected little Giorgio to do anything with himself. Out of some divine intervention or joke, the little boy did start to show some proficiency with ki but his physical feats were still barely worth mentioning. For some time, both adults and other kids saw him as a nobody from the ghetto that would amount to nothing.
As the years started to pile on, something incredulous began to happen. His ki readings began to grow exponentially but the curious thing was that he was still physically relatively undeveloped. While public school's teachers and educators tried to convince him to grow his ki by physical training and meditation, like most users do, Giorgio found another way to grow his dormant power. He began to focus on exercising his mind and gaining knowledge in areas such as mathematics, physics and even competitive games and puzzles. In this way he used his ki to cultivate his IQ instead of his physical attributes, although his energy projection skills were above average for his level. Not to say that he was a pushover. He soon found creative ways to employ his ki blasts at first as a way of defending himself from the thugs that ruled his neighbourhood and later to entertain himself when he came across the city's ruthless criminals.
The rate at which his intellect grew was unprecedented and, at age 14, Giorgio would solve complex equations and study theoretical physics with little trouble. In fact, at one point he gave up training altogether, feeling that his superior ki-powered mind was above everyone else's. At 17 he published a paper that proposed a new prototype engine to be used on space rockets. While initially dismissed as a joke, he kept developing the early stages of his theories in the coming months. His discoverings were solid and he soon sold his findings to the European Space Institute, which had caught eye of his abilities.
Giorgio was offered a full scholarship in engineering with the option of joining the space program after graduation. He turned down this offer as, in his eyes, he was already well above his teachers and peers. Giorgio grew up feeling superior to those around him and, thus, unworthy of his respect. He left his deadbeat parents, taking the name Bec Bonacci in order to distance himself from his original town. He has since been living as a Nomad. He takes pride in taking on and playing with some of the world's best as a way of showing that he is a peerless wonder.
As the years started to pile on, something incredulous began to happen. His ki readings began to grow exponentially but the curious thing was that he was still physically relatively undeveloped. While public school's teachers and educators tried to convince him to grow his ki by physical training and meditation, like most users do, Giorgio found another way to grow his dormant power. He began to focus on exercising his mind and gaining knowledge in areas such as mathematics, physics and even competitive games and puzzles. In this way he used his ki to cultivate his IQ instead of his physical attributes, although his energy projection skills were above average for his level. Not to say that he was a pushover. He soon found creative ways to employ his ki blasts at first as a way of defending himself from the thugs that ruled his neighbourhood and later to entertain himself when he came across the city's ruthless criminals.
The rate at which his intellect grew was unprecedented and, at age 14, Giorgio would solve complex equations and study theoretical physics with little trouble. In fact, at one point he gave up training altogether, feeling that his superior ki-powered mind was above everyone else's. At 17 he published a paper that proposed a new prototype engine to be used on space rockets. While initially dismissed as a joke, he kept developing the early stages of his theories in the coming months. His discoverings were solid and he soon sold his findings to the European Space Institute, which had caught eye of his abilities.
Giorgio was offered a full scholarship in engineering with the option of joining the space program after graduation. He turned down this offer as, in his eyes, he was already well above his teachers and peers. Giorgio grew up feeling superior to those around him and, thus, unworthy of his respect. He left his deadbeat parents, taking the name Bec Bonacci in order to distance himself from his original town. He has since been living as a Nomad. He takes pride in taking on and playing with some of the world's best as a way of showing that he is a peerless wonder.
FIGHTING STYLE & ABILITIES
FIGHTING STYLE
SPECIAL MOVES & TECHNIQUES
SUPER MOVES
WEAKNESSES & LIMITS
Bec's fighting style heavily revolves around projecting and manipulating ki. He will use ki blasts in order to overpower and outmanoeuvre his opponents. With no proper fighting or martial arts training, he sees battle as a puzzle that he must solve in order to subdue his opponent. He's more comfortable fighting between medium to long range and will start to employ counter-measures if he starts to lose his footing.
He will use his rather flexible array of ki beams in order to mix-up his opponents and set up his offence as well as his defence. If all of his plans and counter-measures fail he will however resort to desperate tactics in order to win, going as far as injuring himself if pushed hard enough.
He will use his rather flexible array of ki beams in order to mix-up his opponents and set up his offence as well as his defence. If all of his plans and counter-measures fail he will however resort to desperate tactics in order to win, going as far as injuring himself if pushed hard enough.
SPECIAL MOVES & TECHNIQUES
¦ Eureka
A triple fireball shot. One of the shots flies straight ahead while the other two will be angled into opposite direction to the sides.
¦ Exponential Logarythms
Ki will flow through Bec's chosen limb and travel shortly in front of it, temporarily extending his melee range.
¦ Tesla Coil
An horizontal line will travel a short distance in front of Bec and come back in the same direction. Bec can be damaged by this attack.
¦ Accelerating Mass
A relatively large, slow moving shot that picks up speed as it travels.
¦ Fourier Transposition
Bec will teleport up to 2 metres in whichever direction he wants. Needs 3.5 seconds to recharge.
¦ Factoring Nulls
A shockwave is released from Beck. This shockwave won't hurt his enemies but instead will make any active ki blasts explode where they stand
¦ Exaohm
An orb will float in front of the ground at Bec's melee range. This orb will follow Bec until he manually releases it at which point it will behave like a normal projectile.
¦ Falling Apple
After tapping his heel into the ground, a shockwave will travel through the floor and explode a short distance in front of Bec.
¦ Beyond Infinity
If he starts running low on ki energy, Bec will tap more deeply into his vast ki reserves. This also reduces his cooldowns while raising the maximum number of allowed active ki powers. Due to the lack of proper technique he will injure his body while doing so.
¦ Root of -1
Bec takes hold of his opponent and fires a ki blast at point blank range, blasting himself and his opponent away from each other. Since he doesn't train for battle, he also sustains damage from the sloppy explosion.
¦ Generating Force
Active ki blasts will pick up speed but lose damage.
¦ Settling Atrophy
Active ki blasts become more damaging but lose speed.
SUPER MOVES
¦ [Fibonnaci's Sequence]
Fibonacci's Sequence exists more like a character mechanic for Bec. His ki-infused brain reads and processes information faster than the average person. He naturally functions at level 4 out of 7. His "level" increases as he gets more excited and invested in the subject at hand while it decreases if he becomes flustered or nervous. At level 7 he will read his opponents moves with pinpoint precision. At level 1 he's similar to a child throwing a tantrum.
¦ [Newton's Dynamic]
Bec solidifies a body-wide barrier that slowly moves towards whichever direction he wants. If an opponent comes into contact with this barrier he will be continuously shocked and his ki will slowly dissipate.
¦ [Becquerel's Radiation
This move lays down a trap that will go invisible after 3 seconds. When an opponent comes into contact with this trap a pillar of energy will erupt from it, damaging and temporarily paralyzing it's victim. Only 2 can be active at the same time.
¦ [Curie's Ray]
Bec quickly recalls every active energy projection (including Newton's and Becquerel's) and fires a thin concentrated beam from his palm. The strength of this move is exponentiated by the amount of ki collected.
¦ [Oppenheimer's Fission (Limit Break)]
This is his desperation move and the reason why his left hand is permanently marked. Bec concentrates every portion of his ki into his index finger. In order to unleash this attack, he will get as close as possible to his opponent and split the atoms of this miniature energy ball. The resulting force is strong enough to permanently injure Bec's body and will leave him defenceless for several days. While this attack is sure to put his enemy out of commission, the side-effects are obviously severe and Bec will only resort to it in times of absolute despair or mind-numbing rage.
WEAKNESSES & LIMITS
Bec can't take much punishment and is physically weaker than most opponents. He's a versatile and mobile fighter but his stamina is somewhat lacking which makes him more of a glass cannon. His biggest flaw though is his ego. If you manage to rattle and upset him enough he will steadily lose focus until he abandons strategy altogether. In this tantrum state, he will lose access to all of his techniques save for the more basic ones. The trade-off is that if you do push him too far but aren't quick enough to finish the job he will be more likely to, in his rage, unleash Oppenheimer's Fission.
OTHER
-An avid player of cards and billiards. He keeps himself fed by money matching other players and counting cards.
-He dresses ike a common thug but that's more a result of his modest upbringing. He kept that look because he found it easier to impress women.
-Bec dismisses videogames for not providing a decent challenge for him but he's secretly a huge fan of Street Fighter III (he mains Chun-li, of course)
-He dresses ike a common thug but that's more a result of his modest upbringing. He kept that look because he found it easier to impress women.
-Bec dismisses videogames for not providing a decent challenge for him but he's secretly a huge fan of Street Fighter III (he mains Chun-li, of course)