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Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of the Void

Lugia said
Apparently, his browser's blocked for the next two hours, or something. At least, that's what he told me.

Hm. Weird. Why?

Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of the Void

KaBling said
I still need to:
-Post in several roleplays
-Check an application
-Moderate
-Make a joke

Well, then get going on that.

Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of the Void

Something can't stop me from smiling at Kamina's reaction to Celes using draining kiss on that void eevee. Was it a void eevee? It was grey, according to Lugia's post.

Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of the Void

-William-
As we beat up the muk, one runs off and the other two sink into the ground, and I transform back into a smeargle again. Suddenly, I hear a shrill shriek, and by the sound of it, someone was trying to protect something. Suddenly, a nidoqueen approaches. "I am the protector of the light orb, one of the four orbs of balance! Now, intruders, tell me why you're trying to steal it and I MAY let you go," she says. Suddenly, Bonnie screams at the nidoqueen, and I look at both of them with wide eyes, thinking that Bonnie just doomed us. I tap my fingers together as I say "Um... w-we're just adventurers, our friend Wooper--" and then Wooper cuts in. "My name's John." "Oh, um... our friend John here said he found this place and he wanted to go as deep as possible into it, so we came here and that 'orb' thing caught our eyes. It's really hard not to miss, if you are protecting it, you should conceal it rather than having it in plain view," I say. John says "We're sorry, we weren't trying to take it," and Samuel was nowhere to be seen. "Where'd he go?" I ask, and John asks "Who?" as I look around. The Nidoqueen, not paying attention to John and I, says "Oh... well... in that case, I suppose you can leave, sorry about that." I look at her and ask "What is the orb, and what does it do?" Nidoqueen doesn't answer as she stares at us. "Go, or I shall hurt you," she growls, and I take out my badge. "I've seen enough," John says and I press the button as it turns green, sending all of us back to the guild.

"Whew! What a trip, huh?" he says. "Uh... so, I have six Oran Berries and three gummis, so shall I split them up between the three of you?" he asks, and I nod, taking my two berries and one gummi, and eating the gummi. "Mmm..." I say, the white gummi being bland... but, strangely, I liked it that way. The boring, normal flavor danced on my tongue. I get a few looks from the other guild members, and I sniff the air. We still smelled like Sludgy Swamp... at least, I did, since I was a muk right before we left pretty much. Tini's move didn't work after he used it, and after I had saved him.

Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of the Void

-William-
It was quite the fight. Without Wooper, we probably would have been dead, some corpses to be dissolved by the putrid silt that has been contaminated by the toxic pokemon that claim Sludgy Swamp as a home. After... maybe, thirty seconds of tossing a pebble at a muk, my nose began to smell what was around me, taking in the semi-noxious fumes. I was about to morph back into Wooper, when there was a sudden minty smell. The muks dreaded it, as they were beings of odor and sewage manifested into a living, breathing pokemon, and they tried to attack the person who made the smell; Tini. I rushed in front of Tini, so that he possibly wouldn't get hurt as much when they unleashed their sea of poison on us. Right as they did so, I morphed into one of them, so that I wouldn't immediately faint as well, and I take in more of the sludge, eventually getting larger than the huge muk, and I force them to the ground and let everyone lay waste unto them. I also used a few other moves on them as they were down as they struggled to push my 'arms' off of themselves. I then kick the big muk away as I grab the small one and hurl him at a surprising amount of sinkholes. As he charged back at us, he lost his balance and tumbled into one of the sinkholes. I smile, and then suddenly get hit right in the face by the larger muk, knocking me out and forcing me to change back. I woke up in less than a minute, though, but I felt dizzy from the blow, and I couldn't change into anyone. I grab some more rocks and toss them at him as he chases me, the little pebbles affecting him slightly.

Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of the Void

Balmung1100 said . After regaining consciousness, Lamar attempted to re-enter the cave that he was raised in only to be denied by the very rescue team that had saved him. Lamar felt that this was a challenge to what little dignity he had left and attempted to fight his former saviors only to be defeated and taken back to Allure town where he came to the conclusion that he was simply not strong enough. He decided to train himself and one day return to his home to reclaim his pride. His way of training had not truly changed from when he was younger and he still challenged many of the more powerful residents only to be defeated over and over...until one day he realized that the majority of the pokemon that he had been facing were part of the very guild that the rescue team that had saved and defeated him were affiliated with.

I really have no say in this, but I sort of can predict whether or not something would get accepted. The biggest problem is this paragraph. I know it's hard to avoid the 'i must train' cliche, but instead, make him think he's strong enough just to go to the guild and then maybe in an IC post he can find out he needs to train. Just find out some way to edit that paragraph. If you do that, you'll probably get accepted.

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Balmung1100 said
(Hoping it's still possible to join)Name: LamarSpecies: LarvitarGender: MaleAppearance: Standard Larvitar appearance aside from the left side of his tail being gone due to an incident with a Tyranitar.Level: 10Moves:-Bite-Leer-Chip Away-ScreechAbility: GutsBio: Lamar was raised within a deep cave with a clan of Tyranitar. Unfortunately, his tendency to challenge others that he perceived as powerful caused him to constantly fight many of the other members of this colony. This was not very wise for a creature of Lamar's size. One day, he challenged one of the alphas, a massive Tyranitar named Rex, the majority of the fight was Lamar being thrown around and blasted. He did manage to scratch Rex, but nothing significant enough to say he put up a fight. As he clung to consciousness he looked at his opponent for any sign of recognition but received only a scoff as Rex led the clan from the cavern. Lamar was beaten so badly that the others simply left him in the cavern for dead. Luckily, a rescue team found his unconscious form and brought him to the surface for medical treatment. After regaining consciousness, Lamar attempted to re-enter the cave that he was raised in only to be denied by the very rescue team that had saved him. Lamar felt that this was a challenge to what little dignity he had left and attempted to fight his former saviors only to be defeated and taken back to Allure town where he came to the conclusion that he was simply not strong enough. He decided to train himself and one day return to his home to reclaim his pride. His way of training had not truly changed from when he was younger and he still challenged many of the more powerful residents only to be defeated over and over...until one day he realized that the majority of the pokemon that he had been facing were part of the very guild that the rescue team that had saved and defeated him were affiliated with. He went to the guild to find this team in an attempt to join them. He was quickly denied as the team claimed that his reason for joining was idiotic. He had simply told them that he would one day try to go back to the caves in order to challenge the Tyranitar that had beaten and disrespected him. They of course made an attempt to convince him that revenge wasn't the answer and that he would be blindly repeating the actions that had cost him the left half of his tail. His response was to bite the leader's arm as he attempted to direct Lamar back into town. The rest of the team quickly subdued him out and brought him back forcibly. After being brought back to town it was made clear that he needed a change in direction. After reflecting on the past day's events, Lamar decided that he would still join a rescue team. While he still wanted to fight Rex, he knew that attempting that now would be unwise. He thought that maybe there was more out there for him. He would try to prove that he was above petty revenge by helping others...or at least that was what he told the guildmaster when he joined.

Hm... it's longer, but it still is the same in some aspects, mainly the first two paragraphs. It seems too cliche, and the third and fourth paragraphs don't do much to support the story, and in fact make it harder for him to even get his own team if he bit a guildmaster's arm (even though it would barely do any damage) because both guilds would see him as possibly dangerous to his team or to members of the guild.

Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of the Void

Balmung1100 said
(Hoping it's still possible to join)Name: LamarSpecies: LarvitarGender: MaleAppearance: Standard Larvitar appearance aside from the left side of his tail being gone due to an incident with a Tyranitar.Level: 10Moves:-Bite-Leer-Chip Away-ScreechAbility: GutsBio: Lamar was raised within a deep cave with a clan of Tyranitar. Unfortunately, his tendency to challenge others that he perceived as powerful caused him to constantly fight many of the other members of this colony. This was not very wise for a creature of Lamar's size. One day, he challenged one of the alphas, a massive Tyranitar named Rex, and was beaten so badly that the others simply left him in the cavern for dead. Luckily, a rescue team found his unconscious form and brought him to the surface for medical treatment. After regaining consciousness, Lamar attempted to re-enter the cave that he was raised in only to be denied by the very rescue team that had saved him. Lamar felt that this was a challenge to what little dignity he had left and attempted to fight his former saviors only to be defeated and taken back to Allure town where he came to the conclusion that he was simply not strong enough. He decided to train himself and one day return to his home to reclaim his pride. His way of training had not truly changed from when he was younger and he still challenged many of the more powerful residents only to be defeated over and over...until one day he realized that the majority of the pokemon that he had been facing were part of the very guild that the rescue team that had saved and defeated him were affiliated with. He foolishly decided that the guild had to be the reason for their strength and resolved himself to join.

Yes, you can always join. Forever. No matter what (unless you are banned from the rp)

I'm not a moderator but the bio will need some work (im not strong enough so i must train hard is a common bio) and it's also a bit short.

Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of the Void

-William-
I see three muk loom over Bonnie. "Watch out!" I say. Oddly, I hear "Let them kill her! She's no use to you anyways!" and I look behind me. "What?" I ask. I turn back, and run in front of Bonnie, pushing her out of the way, but the muks had already made a triangle around us. I say "Stop!" as I stretch into one of the muks. I use Sludge, and then push down the muk that was about to use Sludge Wave on Bonnie. I suddenly get hit by Gunk Shot, and I say "Eugh!" as I change into Wooper, and use Ice Punch on the biggest muk. I feel much stronger as I hit him, but he didn't look too hurt. The real Wooper comes in and we gang up on one of the smaller muks, using Ice Punch as it uses Mud Bomb on us. Samuel was helping distract the big muk so that Bonnie didn't instantly get knocked out. He was actually helping out with both of them, to be honest. Pretty soon, I get way too tired to continue my Wooper facade, and I see Samuel getting tired as well. Wooper was still attacking the muk, and he was looking sharp and ready to continue, whilst the muk was quite the opposite. It actually begins running, and Wooper just begins beating up the other one. I rest and regain some energy as Samuel was running in a panic with the big muk right behind him. I grab a stone, and throw it at the big muk, and it lands near Samuel, whilst the muk turns back and charges at me. For a while, we both continue throwing rocks at it and diverting its attention. "May be the brawniest, but he sure isn't the brightest," I mutter.

Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of the Void

-William-
I climb out of the sinkhole I was in, and transform into a... well, a grimer, because Bonnie told me to, and I sorta looked like the grimer, but the shape wasn't exactly right and the face wasn't, either. I use Sludge on the enemy grimer. Not too much happened... in fact, it almost looked like I healed it, almost. I look at Wooper and try to use Transform, and then I become him, letting me gain the moves Ice Punch, Water Gun, Mud Bomb, and Slam. I use Ice Punch on the grimer, which was my taking any heat on the top of my head away from it, and sort of 'punching' the grimer with my forehead, and then Water gun, and it looks nearly fainted. The actual Wooper uses slam on the grimer, making it faint. "Well, that was fun, wasn't it?" I ask, transforming back into a smeargle. "Um... let's continue," I say, walking carefully around sludge pools and sinkholes and things like that. I continue walking deeper into Sludgy Swamp, the smell getting worse and the amount of sludge pools increasing. I eventually throw up, and transform back into a ditto, just so I could fit in, and also so that I wouldn't have a nose. Because dittos were common, I blended in a bit and didn't get attacked... as much.