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Doivid said
I was thinking it was you when I first clicked on this thread.


Pfft, I would never do such a thing if I had her login information.
It said the collab sheet is not available
Shy said
Alright so the post is done but my internet is glitching hardcore. This is what my screen looks like right now:(haha I can't even get the picture)And it keeps cutting in and out. Sorry about the delay.


My disappointment in your locked screen not there is almost as bad as your post not up.
Ergh, I was going to make a character sheet for boyd's wife, but I don't want to write about her all the time in the IC
I think Myyt went on her account.
public lynch. wat.
Yee I'm excited!

and I like your character.

I like everyone's pretty much.
PhoenixEye9 said
Name: Milo CashAge: 15Height: 5'11Build: LightAppearance: Family: All family dead (3, Mom, Dad, Sister)Personality: Loyalty to the death, caring sociopath (gives zero shits except for a few people)Occupation Before: Criminal (Thief)Notable skills: Stealth, Lockpick, Climbing. Sucks: ShootingBio: TBR (If you need a story tell me, Im also doing a project right now so I wanted to avoid that if I could)Disability/Fear: Arachnophobia /0-0\Weapon of Choice: x2 Hook Swords Equipment: x2 Climbing Pickx1 Medium Camel Packx 1 Duffel for when moving full campx1 Eureka Solitaire Single Man Tentx1 Serrated partially knifex10 Day Rations (no specific just ten days ration)x1 2 Gallon Camel Backx9 Bottles of water


Okay I'll help tear here.

First off, We would all like to have you write a bio/story about him because without it... we are confused. Well at least I am and I read every character and take notes on them. If you have a project to work on that is wanting you to avoid writing.... then I don't think a role-playing website is what you should be spending your time on.

But here are some things to consider;
Why does he have hookswords? How did he get them? Is he any good at them? Take these questions and answer them somewhere in your CS.
You HAVE to be specific on your rations. You can't just say 10X rations. As far as we know, that could be anything from a single bean to a cheeseburger.
Also, like what tear has everyone on their toes about: How much water can your nine water bottles hold? Also is your 2 gallon pack used for water? Probably, but do you know how much water weighs especially if you are trying to run away from zombies and/or humans trying to kill you?
How or why is this person afraid of spiders or other arachnids?
Go in way more depth into your personality too. He is a caring sociopath yes? Explain.

And on top of all this, It is VERY unlikely that a fifteen year old is going to be surviving in the zombie-apocalypse. If you even read throughout the other characters or the actual OOC in general, you'd know that this character will not be accepted. I think you are trying to make a BA character in a world where there is no such thing.

Look, I would be pleased to have you join. I'm saving you from the wrath that Tear will bring upon reading your character.
Tearstone said
Oh, I know. Its a pretty similar skillset, and right now I'm trying to avoid duplicity.


Oh well in that case I said it for everyone to know lol
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