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The Desert Vampire - The Maximum Security Ward

Azar watched, shrouded in the shadows by the one of the doorways as some of the most vile criminal offenders known to man briefly began to disperse. Seeing Sarin take the lead toward Sonja, he quickly weighed his options. Hand to hand combat was obviously out. In dealing with psychopathic monsters, such as these, it seemed foolish to attempt further negotiations. Self-sacrifice seemed wholly unnecessary and a distraction would likely only result in madness. So, he decided he'd have to do what he could. Given the slightest chance, Sarin himself could kill them both.

Not seeing a good tactical option, he sheathed his scimitar and unholstered one of his pistols, taking aim. Careful to not put Sonja in the line of fire, he snapped his trigger finger three times, waving his hand after the first shot, which had been aimed for Sarin's skull. With luck, perhaps some of the others would catch a bullet in their bodies. But before anyone would have a chance to crush him like a saltine under a can of soup, he withered himself into a mass of sand.

While he was still standing, a breeze, weaker than usual, spread him across the room, roughly three yards away from the spot he'd been standing, and brushed into a corner like dust on the floor.
I don't really like the idea of having Johnson in the role. It could be good if he used a different style than what I know him to perform, but I don't really see him being someone who'd inspire. Fear

My illusory Constantine seems to be changing into a mystically knowledgable Rorschach.
Edited. Good points. Should I run my ideas for Rogues by you via PM first before putting anything in here?

And no. He's not psychic. I elaborated on his abilities a bit
Wow. Slow day.
Hate to bug you, I'll totally ditch the elemental thing if this doesn't work. But hoq is the new power? It doesn't replace anything existing and it sets concrete limits on what he can generate.
Maxx said
Swamp Fox, you just ripped off Dr.Manhattan. Prepare to die. (You also ripped off Sky High, but that's not my favorite super hero, so I'll let it slide).


I actually took more of my ideas from the Legion of Superheroes' Chemical Kid, but it did end up looking that way. I definitely get why you say that.

It didn't take as long to edit my sheets as I thought it would, I'm ready for a reeval.
Yeah. I did, didn't I? Just be glad I didn't decide to use Warren Piece. It's ironic that Todd got the nerd's power from Sky High,

I'm ready for the reevaluation, sooner than I thought.
Ill alter my sheets soon. It's not that much of a problem if not, but if I altered Jerry's original CS to include a psyvhic block that prevents him from altering living things, would that be alright? I'll let you know when they're ready for reevaluation. I don't expect you to guess when I'm done.
Mr Allen J said
Hmmmm... Todd needs his appearance expanded a bit. Also, the island is artificial, so his magma manipulation and tectonic plate control are basically useless - Unless they have a ridiculous range, which I do not approve us. Jerry also needs his appearance expanded. Jerry's power needs a different power, because I don't like the power and he can pretty much just control everything (He can one shot someone by taking them apart atomically).


Fair enough on both counts. Will do.
I've got one more CS in the works for now. Lemme know what you think of those.
Academy 218 CS
Basic Information


Name: Jerry Thompson
Nickname/Alias/Etc: Labcoat, Alchemist
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Height: 5'5"
Weight: 163
Status: New Student

Appearance

Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Green
Ethnicity: Asian-American, Peach toned
Physical Appearance: He has a boxy face with a bronze skin tone. His eyebrows are thin and very close to his green eyes, which are set well within his skull. He has hair as black as the night itself with long bangs and short cut sides. He has a rounded nose, though not the sort with a ball hanging at it's tip. He is somewhat slender, though not to an embarrassing degree. He isn't particularly well-muscled, though he is definitely fit. He has the physique of a runner, with a more muscular lower body than upper.
Attire: Typically he'll be found in a white, knee-length labcoat that calls the image of a doctor to mind. He wears black sneakers, usually green T-shirts, and a pair of neon-green tinted sunglasses. He keeps a set of rubber gloves in his pockets at all times as well as a surgical mask hanging around his neck.

Personality

Outward & Innate Personality: Though he plays tough around his family and their friends, he is very compassionate and prefers to avoid confrontation, but is not opposed to defending himself. He would give the shirt off his back to help someone in need and he enjoys being by himself. He is very calculating in his behavior, but not in an icy cold way, just cautious. He is always looking for a friendship or relationship. He is slightly socially awkward, but not to the point where he isn't easily likable, he's just a bit shy. He enjoys learning and is very inquisitive.

Hobbies/Interests: Reading, Learning, Video Games
Skills/Talents: In general he is good at anything with a definite recipe, whether it is cooking or synthesizing chemicals. He is fantastic at games that require combo attacks and he is adept at following instructions. He is not so good at things such as poetry, but is quite comfortable with molding clay or more hands on sorts of art.
Prized Possession: His labcoat.
Quote(s): "Umm... guys? I think I just killed the teacher.."
Family:
John Thompson - Uncle/Legal Guardian - Mob Boss
James Thompson - Father - Former Mob Enforcer - Deceased
Min Tsukuba - Mother - Deceased
Todd 'Stoner' Thompson - Cousin - Returning Student


Relationships
Todd Thompson | Not Good | Cousin & Social Anchor |
"He's a nice guy right, he's like my older brother, except he's not. Actually.. why do I hang out with him? Oh yeah, Uncle John would be pissed otherwise, and you don't piss off Uncle John." |


Abilities

Power Class: Elemental 5, Chemical 5
Power: Elemental Generation
Aerosol Generation: Jerry can generate any substance he has come into physical contact with in the form of an aerosol, which then would be released from his wrist in a mist. After a moment, the aerosol would dry and consolidate if a significant amount were able to gather. The substances are created by a special gland in his wrist that can generate chemicals nanoseconds before releasing them through a special orifice in his wrist.

In the future, opportunities for developing this power include being able to shoot liquids or fast drying solids, being able to quickly rotate between multiple substances, being able to aim liquid releases, and being able to electrify his substances. He is pretty far off from being able to launch Spider-Man style webs or using his wrist to launch bullets.


Weaknesses/Limitations/Drawbacks: If he releases a metal into the air, it would be extremely hot and touching it would be deadly to himself. Breathing in toxins would be as dangerous to him as it would anyone else. All of his aerosols are flammable. He has to have touched a substance to emit it. He cannot store substances for more than a couple seconds, otherwise his wrist would burst open.

Other:
Theme Song: American Gigolo - Weezer
Favorite Genre: Dubstep/Electronic Rock
Favorite Franchises: Star Wars, Star Trek, Mass Effect, Legion of Superheroes
Favorite School Subject: Chemistry
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