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Sweeper waited for Summer to make a comment, she turned around and looked at Winterjet. Oh goodness, she looks soooooo adorable like that! thought the alicorn. She put on a big grin.

"You have a beautiful mane, Jet. It shines so wonderfully even without my presence… but you could use a bit of a trim…" she said tilting her head a bit, the sun gleaming off her scalp. "I'm quite the good beautician despite my lack of mane, after all."

All of sudden a rare moment had occurred - Sweeper had a logical thought. Wait… Jet seems more frightened than excited. Uh oh, if I worry her too much, Scroll's girlfriend might break up with him. Quick, I gotta do something!

Sweat had formed on the alicorn's scalp despite an attempt at a joviality. She closed her eyes and rubbed a hoof behind her head. "Ha ha ha, but since we only just met, let's wait on the beauty shop stuff. In fact, when Thea comes back, you can ask her about tips on manestyles. She's much better at that stuff than I would ever be." The alicorn turned back to Summer Winds, and tried to change the topic.

"Oh yes, this -" Sweeper indicated the braid , "- is what happens to anypony who dares to commit sacrilege. The leader of some bandits threatened me - she was lucky I didn't cast a spell to make it permeant."
The pegasus was a bit bewildered by Torrential's response. Dancer had expected something much more… fantastic? She had thought Torrential's action was part of a grand plan to accomplish his divine mission. After seeing the spell that left the Earthborn in a drought, the alicorn's demands seem almost mundane. His demands were nothing complex nor burdensome, but as simple as an apology and safe passage.

She wondered if Torrential was bring humble. Or that he was simply not playing around, straight to the point and as brutal as a sledgehammer. Dancer began to shiver at the thought. Though, It wasn't an like Torrnetial's retribution was unwarranted. Already, the Scholar was angry that anypony would have the gall to commit such sacrilege. If a pony tied to frag me, I'd be furious as well, she thought. But to do it to Torrential?! I would have called for the plague to fall upon them.

"A just punishment, though I do feel for those of innocent Earthborn caught up in this," Dancer said. "But you do speak the truth. A harsh education, yet it may be the only way the Earthborn will learn. And they are a strong folk and can bear much suffering. Perhaps they can survive the pride of Applejack." Despite this, her heart sank a bit. Justified or not, a punishment was not something to be enjoyed.

Dancer's thoughts were interrupted by Torrential's hail. In the distance she saw a white pegasus flying low. But something was wrong. For one thing, the newcomer didn't reply. Second, the flyer's path was rather wobbling. And finally, the traveller landed fast several meters away, collapsing face first in the mud, and continued to slide for another meter or so.

Snow Tail lay in the muck for several moments, eyes spinning, mane soiled, and clearly confused. "Ahhhh, Patty did we have to go on the Tilt-a-whril?" she said.
Charter was shocked when heard the identity of Captain Wave. He was not mere pony, but one of the Lady's kin! All the pieces began to fall into place, the puzzle forming a clear image in his mind. The tidal Wave, the Leviathan, the Sea Ponies, the Blessing… they all indicated the truth of the matter. The Kraken Fleet was no mere armada of pirates - they were the holy army of an alicorn!

"All this time… and I didn't even realize it," said the unicorn, slumping on the deck to take it all in. "Sorry Master Grimwing. My experience with sailors are that they often blend folklore in their lives. My mom told me of the tale of the Rhyme of the Ancient Mare, and the Flying Stallion. Of bad luck to kill an albatross, to spit in the sea for good luck, or tattoos to ward off evil. The crew of the Long Haul used to dump bits into the sea to appease the Sea Lord.

"It was that mythic figure that I thought you meant. But… now what I've seen, I have no doubt that Crashing is an alicorn, probably the origin for the same mythological Master of the Oceans.

He chuckled. "The joke is on me, I suppose… here I was, thinking that I was the only one here to have meet an Alicorn."
I got an entry ready for Grimdark and a reply for kapuchu, but I want to wait for Monochromatic's response before I post anything regarding Sweeper.
kapuchu said
And posted!Sorry for the late reply, guys. Things have been a little busy here, and I didn't quite feel like posting when I had time due to all the other things I was writing :/


That's alright. Best to keep focus on school and/or work first. Loved the entry :)

My brothers are visiting this weekend, so I probably won't be able to post the next bit until tomorrow night.
Bright_Ops said
You know what would be an awesome template to create a cult of laughter character around?Carl.


Loved it :D

Bright_Ops said
That's right ladies and gentleman; Earthborn doesn't want to play with Torrential? Fine. He is taking his ball and going home until they apologize for being rude dicks about it.


Great entry, I did not expect that to happen at all. Dancer's reaction reflects my own surprise in the work, hopefully.

Edit: Sweeper short attention strikes again. Probably for the best, she'd probably just try to interrupt the rather serious conversation that's probably happening between Arcon and Amiferia and Scroll.

Plus, having Scroll on his own makes for better writing.
While Arcon, Scroll, and Amiferia talked, Sweeper figured it was best to let her siblings have some private time. Her High Priest could handle himself, she was confident about her high minion. Whatever Arcon needed from him, they needed to work it out. Winterjet was resting between the Scholar and Amiferia, looking better thanks to their aid.

Instead, her attention was directed at Ami's companion. She trotted over to the Stormwing trooper, and examined her for several moments. It was rather awkward. Then the grey alicorn took out the braided mane from her blanket-satchel. "Check this out! It's a spoil of war!," she said to Summer Winds.
Snow Tail was laying beside some monolithic boulders, which by chance had formed a small dry alcove untouched by the rain. After attempts to make a fire failed, she simply shook off the water and used her wings to help dry herself. The pegasus sighed while resting on the rocks.

"If this keeps up, I'm never going to be able to find either one," she muttered, eyes a bit closed. "Though the rain has lessened at least…" She munched at a biscuit. "..and I don't have to worry about being thirsty." The white pegasus leaned away from the shelter, opened her mouth to drink the rain, and leaned back. Had the weather being normal, she would wishing for this much in the dry land.

"Maybe after this I'll ask the Colonel for a leave, the High Ones know I need one. I haven't seen Patty in a while, and I'm sure he misses me as well." She began to reminiscence of the orange pegasus, and his slightly tufted ears. Peach "Patty" Skimmer's mother was a batpony, though his wings took after his pegasus father. "Drats, and he would have looked so cool with bat wings." she said.

But even her memories of her boyfriend didn't do much about the gloom. The landscape didn't look too bad, but the rain only ampihied how frustrating her mission has become. "I've searched for miles in this deluge, and still nothing! Knowing my luck, I'm just following some freak thunderstorm that has nothing to do with the alicorn. Argggh. You know, if I had just one sign-" She took out her hidden steel claws, turned around, and deflected the knife coming at her. A grey cloaked pony who blended in with the rocks above looked shocked as his weapon flew and hit the muddy ground. He had another knife attached to his hoof, but the assailant was already dead. In a instant, Tail flew and rammed her gauntlet into his chest, the metal claws ending his life.

The mercenary then set the body down, but remained vigilant. After checking the perimeter, she examined the would-be killer, "You don't look like a Cultist, and certainly not a Changeling," she said, poking the body with a stick. "And no bobby traps either." She waited for some time. " I guess you were just another stupid bandit." After searching the remains, she covered the body and dumped it into a nearby dark pit.

"Now that's done, I still need to finish my quest. But it's not like some sign is going to show me-" She then saw a mote of light, flashing in the distance. It was not lighting, for it flowed upwards and beyond the clouds. She frowned at the sight. "Ok, I'll take that," Tail said, and headed towards where the light originated.
Oh good, he's fine, Star Dancer thought when Torrential finally responded. But what did Lord Waters mean by 'make a point'? She faced the direction the alicorn indicated and waited. His smile had a touch of humor, which reassured the pegasus. But she still worried…

Then she saw his spell take affect. Had Torrential not been nearby, she would have tried to fled. But the speed of the spell would have overtaken her in flight. Nothing but the firmament and the sun was left.

Dancer mouth was agape, her pupils constricted from adapting to the mystical light. she collapsed from the awe that she experienced, head still facing the sky. Her thoughts were blank, her mind confused on whether to scream or cry. Something was not right.

But Dancer's will was strong - in seconds she closed her eyelids and mouth, shook her head, took a deep breath, and stood again. When she felt the Alicorn's hat gone, the pegasus opened her eyes. She was calm again, but her heart was pounding.

"Your description is very apt, Lord of the Rain," she said. She took another breath, and then continued. The sun shone over the muddy ground. Her mind recalled the bodies and wingless soldier, guessing that they had tried to attack Torrential. "… I know why you did it. But what do you wish for happen?"
Alright, got my new entries in. Looks like Charter needs to know what is going on now.

EldritchOne said
Can I just say I am really enjoying my time RP with you guys, I never expected this to get so far or even for me to get so involved in it, I haven't been this connected to an RP since 2010-11.


Cool to hear that, I'm enjoying it as well. I can experiment with the writing a bit :) Also, your last entry had very nice imagery, frightening yet majestic.

grimdarkenigma said
Do not underestimate OCD fueled rage. -shudders slightly- Not pretty.


While some things could induce Sweeper to attack an enemy ruthlessly, she has to be very upset to be induced to destroy a whole town. We may see how that would be, if they get into enough trouble.
Her voice is lovely! No wonder the stallion Greenstar swam the sea to meet his singing love! , thought Charter when he heard the Queen. He recalled that song of myth, of the land pony and sea mare. The two endured much dangers, and even confronted the Serpent King himself, before being able to marry. I wonder if they heard the tale?

He stood at Sunpearl's command, and followed the conversation between her and Grimwing. "I thank you, your highness," he said after she was finished. When she was out of sight, his mind began to wonder about the "blessing". And the mention of libraries also brought new light - here was a perfect refuge to establish for the Scholarship! Well protected, the cove could host a new Vault, one that would be safe from the falling of Equestria.Vast, our mission seems to have succeeded beyond any of our drea- He was snapped out of his train of thought by Grimwing, and he followed the crew to help unload the cargo.

"Grimwing," asked the unicorn as they headed back up the ship. "I didn't want to ask too many questions before, but all this…" he waved a leg at the cave and city ", is rather …. fantastic! I would have never imagined that I'd be here now, having meet the most beautiful sea mare, the most beautiful mare on this entire world."

"It's boggles my mind how the Fleet could have made contact with this kingdom. Or pass their defenses, if that roar was any indication. I knew you were… oceanic scavenge experts, and certainly not aligned with the Moon and Stars. But this is certainly beyond the typical I'd imagine even for buccaneers.

"And the Queen also mentioned the Blessing, the mark that all the crew have. I thought it was a tribal identifier that some ships have for their crews. Or some sort of ward for safe travels - I've meet enough sailors to know of some of the customs. But for the Queen to mention it, I can't help but feel that it's more important than that. And you mentioned a Captain Wave, and I assumed he was the commodore of the fleet. But the way the crew speaks of him, they think he was Lord of the Sea himself. What does the Kraken Fleet do? And why is this Captain Wave and the Blessing so important?"
Torrential's hat was rather comical looking on Star Dancer. It was very large, and it partly covered her eyes until she readjusted it. The style almost reminded her of Professor Redgrass, a biologist who lived in the Everfree. He was a rather eccentric Scholar, preferring to wear brown robes and a large hat, if less pointed than Torrential's own. The natives of the wood often considered him a wizard, despite being an Earth Pony who only cared for the animals and plants.

I wonder… did Torrential bring this from the Spiritual Realm, or did he make it here? she thought. And what is he doing? Dancer's question was answered by the alicorn's demonstration. Her eyes widened at the sight, a magic unlike she has ever seen. Sweeper did do wonderful things, but it was often mundane compared to this. The sight conjured a memory from an ancient text, "The Journey to the Sun's Land". In it, great warrior ponies could compress their inner energy, and use those energy balls…

She gasped when Torrential sent the ball of energy into the sky. … to attack! she thought. She shook her head. Don't be silly, mare. That was just a story… I hope. Even when Torrential seemed to need help, she stood still. It was until he was back at her side, she asked with concern, "Master Waters, are you alright? Is there anything I can do?"

In the far distance, a grey clad figure wandered the landscape.
Story Note: With time and retelling, some stories end up changing enough from the original. Sailors often tell of how The Sea Lord (very likely the mythologized Crashing) created the sea ponies from the foamy waters. Of course, the reality is different - Crashing just blessed those ponies who would be the ancestors of the Seafolk.
One year ago…

"You know, I'm still amazed that you still believe in sea ponies."

Vast and Charter were leaving the Startide Tavern, the moon was high in the sky and the streets quiet. The bars were lit dimly as patrons continued to sing songs and drink ale. It was a warm night, which the slaves were thankful for. The port hid the misery of the pens with a large white wall, imprisoning the slaves and keeping the populace blind. But for unicorns, the Moon and Stars was the safest place in Equestria. Crime was less common, and one did not have to worry about the Cult as much. And if one avoid from being too noticeable, they could escape the vigilance of Twilight's Inquisition. For the free, it was a better place to live than anywhere else.

Vast face was red, her lids half closed over flimsy eyes. She swayed sideways, and Charter made sure she didn't fall. She had a bit too much strong cider that night, and her brother always took her home. He never did drink, though she suspected that Charter took after their father and had little tolerance for it. Vast could drink with even the most hardened of Sailors, much like their mother.

She burped and wiped her mouth. "Yeah, that was good stuff. But I always thought you were skeptical of the Sailor's yarns."

Charter smiled, "That's only because seamares love to exaggerate, turning their stories into larger than life spectacles. The reality of sea life is hard and rather mundane mostly, if mom's tales are accurate." He chuckled. "And even then she couldn't resist adding embellishments."

Ever since foalhood, Charter still remembered the many legends of the Sea Ponies. When his mother was back from her voyages, she would stay up all night with her six children. She would engage them with the stories of how the Sea Lord created the Sea Ponies, of the Legend of Greenstar and Waterstone, the Battle of the Two Dragons, and the tragic Hunt of the Leviathan. Now older, the journeystallion surveyor listened with keen ears to any mention of the Ponies of the Depths.

"Ok… but (hip) but no pony has gathered any proof of the sea folk. Most ponies just think they're myth."

"So was said of Nightmare Moon, and there was truth in that. Even if there wasn't any clear photographs or captured specimens, there were still plenty of legends. There has to be some reality backing them. "

"Ha ha. But a fear the reality is going… to be disappointing. Probably just manatees."

"You know, for an artist you're not very romantic." Charter looked at the sea. "Look at it, the oceans of the world. These waters are your namesake, sis. The waters are far reaching, and they cover many abysses. Somewhere, out in those depths, great wonders await for those brave enough to search them."

"Hmmmm… so thinking about finding those Sea Ponies? Ha ha ha, we've never been on a boat, and you want to explore the oceans for a dream," she muttered. "We have far more important things to do than tha-". She leaned to the side and vomited.

Sighing, Charter nodded, helped his sister regain her bearings, and continued over to the Gem's home. Young Shining Gem would be up reading by the fireside. Her mother Shore would have prepared a bed for Vast and rasberry tea for him…

Charter awoke in the middle of the night. Shivering, he placed his hoofs over his head, eyes closed tightly. His body was drenched in sweat, even without a blanket and the windows open to the sea. For many minutes he sat there in the dark, trying to regain his wits.

There's nopony here, other than Vast. And she's a drunken stupor. Don't let your mind fool you he thought. He's not here, that pony is not here, was never here to begin with. He curled up into a ball. Calm down, relax or you'll hyperventilate again. Forget, forget…

But the dream he did not easily forget, and he slept no more that night. He could still see the mocking face, grinning. A jeering voice. The dark underground and the sounds of battle outside. Yet he was alone, alone, alone…

He opened his eyes, and saw Vast laying beside him. She returned to sleep, but she had her head resting on his side. The dread voice and face disappeared. Vast was the refuge he needed, the strong pillar that kept him sane.
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