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@Brand: I'll work on those edits. As for how she was a slave anyway, would it be okay for me to come up with a material native to the lands where she hails from that can block a mage's access to magic when worn? That issue you brought up won't just go away because the bio changes.
This is in no way official, but I see them being sort of dedicated to the Restos branch of magic rather than having a unique form of magical energy. Those are just my two cents. :D
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Okay, I revised the profile. I know it's probably a bit more than was necessary, but I like it a little more this way. :3 Let me know if I need to change anything.
Hi all. I just wanted to let everyone know that I'm not dead and that I'm still working on revising my first character. It's taking a while due to my workload, but that's easing up, so I should have it done tonight or tomorrow.

Also, thanks vietmyke and Feisty-Pants for your service! :D
May I ask about naval technology? I'm assuming that gunpowder isn't a thing in this world, so are ships outfitted with ballistae instead of cannons? I'm just wondering because I was thinking of having my second character be of a seafaring profession. :3

Oh, and I'm EST if that helps figure out sort of what my hours of operation are.
Brand said The only problem i'm seeing with your CS is the age. I'm having a hard time accepting a 13 or 14 year old girl is capable of rising to the rank of a knight, your character is too young for the accomplishments you've listed. Not to mention that a girl that young who relied on the sword in a fight would probably be demolished sheerly out of lack of muscle development (even if your shade is very knowledgeable in swordplay). You're welcomed to play a character that young if you think you could pull it off, as it would be an interesting perspective to have a little girl in the group, one with the mind of an adult and literally not scared of death (I see some interesting dialogue here), but a 14 year old girl with a longsword would be pretty useless in a fight.

If you want to go this route tune down the accomplishments and consider a different weapon (one more suitable to a person of smaller size). Otherwise make your character older (at the very least 18)

Ferros, by the way, doesn't really recognize the Knight class and isn't big on chivalry. You're more than welcome to say some people have adopted chivalry and knighthood akin to the western nations, but adopting chivalry will somewhat distance your character from your countrymen culturally.

Like I said, you're definitely taking some interesting angels with your character here, but the age and list of accomplishments you've given don't match.


That's my bad then. I was under the assumption that Shades were supernaturally strong regardless of what they possessed, which is why I figured the size of the body itself didn't matter. To clarify one thing, however, she isn't 13 or 14. If the girl wouldn't have died from fever, she'd be around 20 or so, but the body itself doesn't age while possessed, so it stopped growing. I also misread the tab on Ferros as them being the only nation that cared about knighthood and chivalry any longer, so that's why I went with that route. Don't worry, though. I'll get it all fixed eventually.


Here is my first character at least, and I'm working on getting pictures. I was thinking about altering her to be more of a ranger, what with all the guardians, but I do like this version the best.

Hopefully I'll be able to finish my second one by Wednesday. Tomorrow's going to be a little rough, but it should ease off after that. :3
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I will try to get my character(s) up by the middle of the week. I have one just about done, so I'll definitely be able to get them up, but my college workload suddenly increased, so my second might have to wait for a little bit. Sorry for the delay.
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