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Im so sorry the correct cs should be up now, sorry again feeling pretty stupid right now T_T
This was your list with the fixes I already had implemented. Your female image isn't working Changed the picture comes up when I last checked. What's the adverse effects of not munching on hearts? "Has a limited supply of energy for magic off campus, up to a week of casting as an average caster, and each use there after without replenishment giving up some sentience and becoming more like a feral fox, and if denied a source of will revert to being stuck in fox form." Leeching off magic locales is... eh. Seems kinda like it's trying to dodge the weakness of dealing with organ eating. But like, sentient beings are anything that can perceive or feel. Just eat livestock liver. Got rid of the leeching thing as well as throwing some flavor why livestock organs were less preferable. Your illusions should be only single target. There was never any mention of illusions to begin with. Nix the pocket dimension for your orb, it negates your weakness. Got rid of this What kind of fire spells? -_- I had put some spells on this but apparently it didn't go through when I edited my cs, will rewrite them again. The electric collar is hardly a restriction, considering she can just shapeshift out of it. Make it an anti-power collar. The anti power thing doesn't work because she would simply physically attack people, but I did add that it changes to adjust to her shapeshifting.Although I did state this earlier before asking to be considered again. Aside from the fire spells which im about to put back on, the rest of this list has been adressed, did you maybe look at the wrong cs or something Edit: OH MY GOD just realized I never posted the edited version of my cs it's just on my wordpad. .. I feel so stupid right now fixing this
Pay no attention.
I'm guessing there's going to be like a gauntlet or sparring match or some sort of test so our characters have something to base their picks on, rather than just going " I don't know what it was but I was drawn to so and so."
All right I think I covered everything that was asked about, is my CS up to snuff now?
Geez I started rping about a month after I had been on what was my first forum, okamiworld I think if was, during a time when I was obsessed with the game, that would have been about...7 or 6 years ago I think. I can still remember my first Gary Stu, he was a descendent of a main character with a super powerful evil side, I shudder at the memory, never GM'd but never wanted to, I'm an actor not a director.
Ah before I forget, I meant to ask for a point of reference, what kind of fire spells would a fairly novice caster have available to them, since I'm a bit unaware to what I should limit Amon to when it comes to that area.
  • Your female image isn't working
  • What's the adverse effects of not munching on hearts?
  • Leeching off magic locales is... eh. Seems kinda like it's trying to dodge the weakness of dealing with organ eating. But like, sentient beings are anything that can perceive or feel. Just eat livestock liver.
  • Your illusions should be only single target.
  • Nix the pocket dimension for your orb, it negates your weakness.
  • What kind of fire spells?
  • The electric collar is hardly a restriction, considering she can just shapeshift out of it. Make it an anti-power collar.
No problem with most of that, the only one I want to ask about is the choker was so I can have something physically try to stop her from killing someone just for food. If it's just an antimagic collar, not really anything stopping her from attacking someone unawares physically. Other than that I can see the reasoning behind, I'd imagine the choker would adjust to fit if she shapeshifted. Although I never said it could so I see part of the problem there. Edit: also Amon doesn't have any illusion, I never put that in the cs, opting to play into the vampire-ish nature to let Amon be able to give out her energy to others, no matter how rare that may happen due to her selfish streak. The magic leeching would only be viable in areas rich in magic, such as sacred areas and the school, if only for how many practitioners gather there. But if you want the leeching taken out, I'm fine with that.
All right I think that covers everything, tell me if you see anything that needs to be changed.
Full Name Byeondeog Fake Name Amon Amrath Nickname(s) Abomantion unto the gods, walking blasphmey, etc. etc. Gender N/A Age 1024, looks to be 19-25 (first 1000 years were spent as a feral fox) Year 1st Birthday March 31 Astrological Sign Ares Species Nine tailed (G/K)umiho, a slightly spiritually vampiric many tailed fox race, normally eating the hearts and livers of sentient creatures to increase and maintain their power, although the organs of non-intelligent creatures give only about a tenth of the energy. They are inherently a possessive race when it comes to information about themselves, and rarely even give out their names, often making up completely false l backgrounds even when unnecessary. All kumihos start as feral foxes, gaining longevity after having eaten the heart and liver of a sentient race, and gaining sentience and magical ability after living a thousand years. Class Enchanter, a shapeshifter with the ability to muddle the minds of Amon's targets, able to induce feelings of familiarity, kinship, lust, and fear among others, although can be fairly easy to resist if they are aware that it is occurring, and often breaks when Amon is suddenly surprised. Weapon Fox orb- object which houses all a kumiho's stolen energy, must be available to channel spells more complex than cantrips. Can be controlled with a telekinesis limited to the orb up to about 7 foot radius away, and makes a fairly adequate bludgeoning tool. All of Amon's mana is stored in this orb, often holding about a week's worth of mana, which she uses in rations every day, recharging when she feeds. Normally this store is accessible to Amon alone, however it is possible for her to open this flow to others should she be willing to share. The recipient must be touching the orb to gain the mana, and once it is open they are free to take as much mana as they wish, which leaves the possibility of amon being totally drained and reverting to her primal state. If forced into fighting physically, Amon will shift into her Fox form, preferring to attack with fang and claw. World Lucis Short Biography Kumihos, as a naturally antagonistic species, are often hunted down early in their lives when located, and as such are a dwindling occurrence. In such conditions, Amon was hard pressed to find a kumiho's preferred food choice, namely the hearts and livers of a sentient race, the signs of kumihos well known by now in Lucis, and would be soon chased from villages and towns after two or three meals. As sources of meals became more and more scarce, Amon heard there was indeed a completely new world even that would be ripe of unsuspecting meals. She found transportation easily enough after killing and taking the guise of a passenger scheduled to go to earth to start business talks, the death realized only after he failed to arrive at the meetings. Amon began cautiously feeding in the new world, a body in one town, a few homeless go missing in another, but soon became arrogant after no seeming retaliation, and soon began feeding with a passion. Soon she had been penned as the new Jack the Ripper, with bodies piling up with missing only their hearts and livers. Unbeknownst to Amon, a task force was put together to apprehend her, using undercover police as bait, and soon captured Amon. Unfortunately, due to her obviously being from Lucis, they were forced to alert the authorities on that side of the veil as to what had been captured. Amon happened to be the first kumiho to be captured in centuries due to most being killed when caught in Lucis. As such the academy saw what was a chance to, while under heavy restrictions, to see if it may be possible to tame such a species known only so far for leaving a trail of mauled bodies, and thus Amon, under the only offer of execution, has agreed to wear a leash, though is looking for a chance to break free. For a leash, no matter how long the chain, is simply an open air prison. Personality Amon is very confident, very rarely second guessing a decision. Will make all attempts to make "friends" in a new setting, well aware of the use such allies can be when things go south, but same as a Fox will chew off a leg that's been trapped, Amon will always cast aside what is needed for survival. Hates to give anything away for free, and is very possessive and protective of anything she has. This can extend to allies or "friends", which some interpret as loyalty, a notion she does nothing to dissuade. Partner Have a few characters in mind, but I'll wait to see how it plays out. Fear(s)/Weakness(es)/Limit(s) Extreme fear of dogs, gets tense when the same room and will immediately try to leave, and can be reduced to a panicking mess if unable to get away. Has a limited supply of energy for magic off campus, up to a week of casting as an average caster, and each use there after without replenishment giving up some sentience and becoming more like a feral fox, and if denied a source of will revert to being stuck in fox form. If the Fox orb is taken away, energy steadily ekes out, reducing the time to two days, one if using magic. Must have Fox orb out to use magic stronger than cantrips Strange Attributes/Abilities/Traits Is able to shape shift at will between Amon's default forms, as well as take on the form of others Amon has studied fairly well, although there is usually a trait that gives Amon away,either the ears or a tail staying. Tends to think like a predator, making Amon well versed in chasing down a fleeing target, aided by enhanced hearing and scent. Has a small affinity for fire spells, due more to Amon's species then actual practice, though with a little effort who knows what may come of it. At the moment her range is severely limited to shooting embers at nearby targets, and with little control of the fire afterwards. One exception being she can set her orb ablaze, although this drains mana rather quickly due to a lack of control. Another useful trick used when often glossing persuerers is to release a bright flash to blinding those nearby. She learned it after trying to imitate fireworks she had seen before, though often comes away with a few burns after using it. As a condition of Amon's release from execution, she has been shackled with an enchanted collar with a powerful slumber spell, made to knock out Amon should any predatory acts be attempted outside of missions, training, and classes, as well as a tracking spell the schools security can follow if she attempts to escape Can choose to gain the memories and mannerisms of those whose hearts and livers she eats, allowing her to better blend in when shapeshifted as them. Her mind magic is often a subtle act working best on those not expecting it at all, with a mix of pheromone release and mind manipulation, Amon inserts herself in the place of memories someone has strong feelings for, the person being chosen to fit the type of emotion she's going for. It takes a minimal effort of mana if the victim was caught unawares, but uncharacteristic acts can break the spell. However Amon can force her will on the other person, exerting more mana allowing her to override a person's ideas, when the pheromones trigger the appropriate responses. This will place her in a battle of wills though, determined by the other persons ability to see through the ruse. Is very agile and flexible, able to dislocate joints and such to squeeze through and out of things that may restrain her. She also has excellent balance, almost impossible to knock of her center of gravity due to having nine appendages ready to equilibrilize her center of gravity. Having been chased for most of her life after outstaying her welcome, Amon has become fairly adept at hiding, wether it be in shadows or in plain sight, easily making herself just another face in the crowd, and having the patience and willpower to stay cramped, uncomfortable, and still for hours on end. Other Can only eat meats. She can stand spices and very small portions of vegetables, but will grow sick if forced to eat them regularly. While she can survive on the hearts and livers of animals, it's a lot like being hooked up on an IV,it gives her what she needs but does not stop the cravings One of the first thing Amon saw when she became a completed kumiho was a fireworks show, and has been fascinated with the festive explosions ever since.
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