A few grammatical errors aside it looks alright to me. But I'd point out the international depression was also a thing immediately after the war and would have been a more direct component of the post-war events earlier on than your history seems to imply, with it happening a few years after; as it's also directly related to the massive cut in military expenditures and the industrial demands to keep the first world war rolling. But that may be an issue of presentation of misplacing it in the time-line of events.
I might also comment on the lack of things happening in the interim of the twenties till now, but that may be asking for more than we'd need right now and can certainly be explored later.
And of also proper mention: television wouldn't have been a wide-spread or even notable thing in the 1920's, let alone the late 1920's. At best maybe there'd be newsreel footage dispatched to theaters around the nation for televised mass-media. But the newspapers are just as likely to be able to publish articles on something the day after or in the following days for daily readers; if not then the radio is the biggest contemporary broadcaster. Even if we ignore alternate history implications television only became accessible on a large scale until the fifties or sixties; it should only be experimental now.
I thought that I got the television thing fixed, I guess that I didn't save my edits.
I also explained about France during the war and mentioned the international depression. Is this good enough?
"Liberté, égalité, fraternité"
Nation
France
Leader
President Benito Beaudoin
History
The war had reached all over the world from Europe to Asia, the world felt the impact of The First World War violently. France was the only nation with more damages than any other, even the Britain wasn't damaged as much as France was. The Germans were near Paris as sounds of gunfire and cannons were going on, even some of them hit the city. Thankfully, they were driven away from Paris and back to the front lines as the fighting was getting more serious and longer.
The people were tired of fighting the war as it was getting more costly to fight the war and the whole eastern side of France was a war zone. But, the war ended in victory and peace. Massive cuts in military expenditures and the increased industrial demands were the cost of gaining victory. Days after the war, the world was facing an depression unlike any other.
A month right after the war, things got worst as people were now waiting in line for bread and the soldiers for the war were getting tired of it. It was getting worse that the women and the elderly had to work for poor wages as the casualties were high. People were disliking the government every week as they tried to make the country stable before the war. But, the Great War changed people as they never saw a war going on for years and with the high amount of casualties never seen before in any war.
When the announcement that the arts programs in schools were getting cut in late 1926, a group of prominent poets and musicians took over the administration building at Nanterre University. They held a meeting about class discrimination in French society and the political bureaucracy that controlled the university's funding. The university's administration soon called the police and demanded that the students get out of the building. As soon as the meeting ended, the students left the building without any trouble. This caused students to distrust the police and the administration at the university. After months of conflicts between students and authorities, the university was finally closed in January 3rd, 1927.
After hearing about the closing of Nanterre, students at the Sorbonne University met to protest against the closure. With the help for The Union Nationale des Étudiants de France (UNEF), the number of protesters grew to 20,000 as the police arrived. The high school student unions, then joined the protesters at the famous Arc de Triomphe to demand three things happen after the protest:
1) All criminal charges against arrested students, teachers, and supporters be dropped,
2) The police leave the universities,
3) And the authorities reopen them.
Government officials didn't like the list that much; but, a 'leak report' that the government reopened the universities surfaced. The students ended the protesting and returned to their schools five weeks after it closed. But, students at the universities were shocked that police were still there. When students tried to enter the universities, they were sent back by police forces and some were even arrested. They now had a near revolutionary fervor.
After the false reports surfaced, a massive protest was held at Rive Gauche. When the police again blocked them from crossing the river, the crowd threw up barricades and said that they weren't leaving the bridge. After hours of negotiations, the police attacked the crowd at 2:15 in the morning. The confrontation, which produced hundreds of arrests and injuries, lasted until dawn of the following day. The events were broadcast on radio as they occurred and the aftermath was shown on newsreels and newspapers the following days. Many people were upset at the police force for treating the people harshly.
The government's heavy-handed reaction brought on a wave of sympathy for the strikers as mainstream singers and poets joined after the heavy-handed police brutality came to light. Artists all over the word also began voicing support of the strikers. The major left union federations, the Confédération Générale du Travail (CGT) and the Force Ouvrière (CGT-FO), called a one-day general strike and demonstration. Then, over a million people marched through Paris on that day; the police stayed largely out of sight. The Prime Minister personally announced the release of the prisoners and the reopening of the university in May 20th, 1927, months after it closed.
After the university reopened, students occupied it and declared it an autonomous "people's university". Public opinion supported the students' actions at the university. The police couldn't do anything without upsetting the people more, so the police was put on hold until they could retake the university.
While the students were protesting, the factory workers were tired of not getting enough money for their work. On May 30th, a group of workers decided to do a sit-down strike at the Sud Aviation plant, the first factory to start the protest. This was the start as workers had occupied roughly fifty factories on the first day, and 200,000 were on strike by the next. That figure snowballed to two million workers on strike the following day and then ten million, or roughly two-thirds of the French workforce, on strike the following week.
The police tried to contain this spontaneous outbreak of militancy by channeling it into a struggle for higher wages and other economic demands. Workers put forward a broader, more political and more radical agenda, demanding the ousting of the government and the president attempting, in some cases, to run their factories. But, the demands were changed to fit the The Ministry of Social Affairs' deal, which increased the minimum wage by 25% and the average salaries by 10% to the workers. The deal was rejected, and the strike went on as the working class and top intellectuals were joining in solidarity for a major change in workers' rights.
With the massive numbers, a meeting of the UNEF, the most outstanding of the events, proceeded and gathered 30,000 to 50,000 people in the Stade Sebastien Charlety. The meeting was extremely militant with speakers demanding the government be overthrown and elections held. The parties demanded it as well, start with the Federation of the Democratic and Socialist Left declared that "there is no more state" and stated that they were ready to form a new government. A day after the meeting, the president suddenly disappears from the public eye. He had gone to Germany in order to get somewhere safe from his family, if the government was overthrown. As soon as his disappearance made headlines, the people were declaring that the president had left the country and declaring that July 1st would be a day to celebrate. Crowds were formed to celebrated the news and fireworks could be heard in Paris.
During the time of celebration, the government was in panic mode as they were removing classified information or planning out their escape. During that time, the Prime Minister took over and acted like the government during the chaos moments. He demanded that the military find the President and bring him to safely as he was afraid that he was kidnapped or worse. As soon as the President heard the news, he returned to France and told the people that he was in Germany doing something 'personal'. The people believed that he was planning his escape route if the revolution did break out.
After the President's speech, 400,000 to 500,000 protesters (many more than the 50,000 the police were expecting) led by the CGT met and marched through Paris on July 23, chanting that the President must leave. The head of the Paris' police force told the officers to not use force; however, his word didn't mean anything. The protest was largely centered around the Paris metropolitan area, and not elsewhere. Soon, they started to occupy a key public building in the heart of Paris: Les Invalides. They weren't doing anything harmful, but the government used military troops to force them out. Soon, it turned bloody as a soldier shot at one of them. Claiming that he was running towards him with something on his hand, even known people claimed that he just shot him for no reason. After the shot was fired, a couple more soldiers fired into the crowd out of fear until they were told to stop. Five died and three were wounded for gunshots at Les Invalides on the same day.
After the shooting, the people were getting ready to force the government to change in both a peaceful and harmful way. The revolution had begun due to the resulting casualties in the streets of Paris. The Socialist Party and French Communist Party gains public support quickly as the revolution starts in Paris and spreads all over France. The government and military are confused by the revolution as officials left the country or captured by the rebels. Two months of fighting between police and military forces and the people turned France into another war zone as towns were damaged and Paris was on fire.
This revolution would end with the president's death as he and his family were caught escaping a month and a half after the revolution started. The family was killed in the car, that they were escaping in, and the President was taken to an unknown location. Days later, camera filmed the execution of the President as a man waited for the President's last words to be said and then fired three bullets to the head. The revolution had ended on October 5th, 1927. The parties had done well gaining the support needed for the elections in the coming months.
After the people voted, they founded out that the Socialist Party won the election as their president's name was called. The Communist Party was such that they would gain the next election; but, due to leadership changes and the fears of Communism later on would lower them. After the president was elected to office, he introduced several reforms and programs over his term and tried to improve his country. France would be improved until the Great Depression started, which almost caused France to enter another revolution. But, the government was able to fix them before the fire could spread.
During the early fifties, France improved relations by helping Britain restore their monarchy as they realized that their king was in France. After sending supplies to them, they became close friends and still are to this day. However, they had to give up almost all of their colonies in order to force back at home. Lost to rebellions or sold them to other countries, France was such to rebuild themselves and become once more a powerful nation in this world.
Not before losing the democratic socialism party to The Republicans, a centre-right political party.
