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Are we gonna work some more on the Minecraft building?
Hey, HylianRose? You may have missed my character interaction. Check this post.
Legion020 said
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I can help build.
Puck - Garden

Underneath a large rhododendron bush in the garden, a sleeping black rabbit stirred softly, then awoke coughing. Puck's throat was sore, and his mouth dry.
"I must be getting old," he said aloud, his voice scratching. "The last time I fell asleep on my way somewhere was--five days ago?"
He then noticed the couple seated on a bench across the path.
"Ahhem!." He cleared his throat, a mix between a cough and a gargle. "Sorry to bother you youngsters. I'll just be going now. You just keep--doing whatever it is you're doing."
He hopped out from under the bush, changed back into a human, and started down the path towards the main building. Just before he disappeared around an ancient maple, he turned and asked, "I'm sorry, but could you point me to the cafeteria? I've not been here long."
Puck set his suitcase down on the bed, and exhaled heavily. His luggage appeared small, so anyone watching would assume the young man was out of shape. On the contrary, phookas are very strong for their usually small size, and the diminutive suitcase held more than met the eye. He had acquired it half a century ago, from a magician in London, and it could hold up to 12 times it's outside size. Unlike most extra-storage devices, however, this one doesn't remove any of the weight, making it rather hard to move.
Puck recovered his breath somewhat, and looked around his room. He hadn't seen any sign of his roommate yet, so had taken the liberty of claiming the room by the hall. He enjoyed sleeping late in the morning, and large windows let in too much light. As you enter the room, immediately to your right is a large oak bookcase, empty but for a few textbooks, presumably left by the previous occupant. Nearby, also on the right wall, is a light green couch, serviced by a glass-topped coffee table. A small
dresser/nightstand is at the end of the wall, and adjacent to it, on the back wall, stands the bed. It is covered in a dark red cloth, almost purple, with an abstract pattern of spiderwebs or flowers, Puck wasn't sure. The mattress is thick, and the springs make only a soft creak when depressed. It virtually radiates peace and quiet.
Near the foot of the bed, an indentation leads to a walk-in closet and the shared bathroom, which the phooka urgently needed to use. The bathroom was spacious and bright, even though it lacked windows and an obvious light source, and the beige tiled floor almost shone with cleanliness. Puck assumed this was the brownies at work, and hoped they would stay away while he did his business.
* * *
When he finished unpacking, Puck headed across the grounds in search of something to eat. It had been several hours since his light breakfast, and while he wasn't famished, a small rumble could be heard in his stomach.

Puck is in the garden, on his way towards the main building.
Animelover_princess said
i think your pictures got a little mixed around


The description is below the picture. Some forums have the picture position set up differently.
I've started a design of the rooms as well. This is what I have so far.

A general overview of the place. You should be able to see the floor plan, kitchen and living area to the left, bedrooms to the right.

A bar-type thing separating the kitchen and living area.

Inside view of the windows. Taken from the back bedroom.

Inside the closets.

The outside wall. This is what you'd see when walking in the garden.
HylianRose said
Hah. I'm not making a server. You guys are welcome to though. I'll join. Lol.FOOD. My roommate is waiting on me. Lol.


Unfortunately, whoever gets the room adjacent to the hallway doesn't get any windows.
HylianRose said
While it is a cool power, I'm hesitant. Maybe if you made it so that he has no control over it. He just affects 'luck/fate' almost as a aura ability. Meaning that he never does it intentionally and it's never anything really, really terrible. (Not to player characters anyway.) I'm fine if it's like a broken arm or something like that, but it cannot by any mean kill another character. I think that if he had the ability to control it, power would get to his head, as a character and that's what I'm worried about. So just consider this make the changes both I and NK have suggested and post/PM us again with the page your CS is on and we'll look it over again. If you think of another way to make it better, feel free to do this instead.


Sounds like a good idea. Could you review my post here, and tell me what you think?
With my character, I want to take the focus off of shapeshifting. So, not using it to spy on people, or fight. More like "Something surprised him, and poof! a bunny."

With the fortune power, I'm not sure how to put a limit on something as random as that.
One option could be that since phookas are generally benevolent, Puck has a large conscience. Cranky on the outside, but rather softhearted. He wouldn't want to get in fights, and if he did, wouldn't want to get anyone hurt.

Also, fixed my CS.
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