TheMusketMan

Blackheart 1x1 Industrial Age/Fantasy RP

Alright posted, man, I sure am loving this rp.

Blackheart 1x1 Industrial Age/Fantasy RP

He shook his head and plopped down on the ground across from her, throwing his cigar into a dirty puddle. "Tell you what. I'll offer you a job. How does my personal assistant sound, hm? Cuz that's the only damn job you're getting from me. You'll get paid well....well, well enough. How'd you like to go help those smart men in the tunnels look for treasure!? You may even get a cut if we find any." He leaned up against the wall across from her, studying her irritatingly stubborn face. And finally he leaned forward and said "I'm your only friend in this city. And I'm offering you a job that will give you more money than you've ever seen in your little, irritating, bitchy, stubborn life." He leaned back up against the wall. "But hey it's your choice. Oh, and if you accept, we're gonna get you a meal in ya and new clothes. Because you ain't working in that and you can barely hold empty buckets, Honey." He put emphasis on the last word.

Blackheart 1x1 Industrial Age/Fantasy RP

Lol, he would likely storm off but for the sake of the rp he'll offer her a job. And a lot of lip with it.

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Only popping on briefly. Had a meeting to deal with some probation at my school. Turns out it's for financial aid and not academics like I feared so hey sort of good news, but I still have a lot to do in terms of paperwork to ensure this quarter is paid for and let's me sign up soon for hopefully one less class than the four I'm taking. Working on my rewrite, this weekend I have to work on 2 essays plus a group project. I have a dentist appointment which may take out my time Friday afternoon, depending on how I feel. So in other words, I have a list of stuff to do, I still should be able to monitor things here. @TheMusketMan It looks ok, though for the "Ghost Rider Mode" do you mean just the use of his bike or the added flaming? His obsession with it might be a little excessive, possibly to the point where if a hacker notes a Corrector's love for it, it might make it easier for them to find out who he really is. If you did want to just use the guy with the bike rather than the first picture you had, that would be fine. Though I'd still need to know about the guns and how long bullets would take to be reloaded/materialized. I mean, if it's too prompt it defeats the purpose of having a limit of rounds in the first place, which I think is needed.

@Genkai

I was hoping for him to have the bike all the time, just in ghost rider mode he goes all flamey. It wouldn't change any of his abilities except make him look cool. Also, he flips out the cylinder and spins it and the bullets materialize in the holes. To reload both guns it would take 15 seconds.

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Alright boss, its updated.

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@TheMusketMan Whitehead is a really weird last name...not sure I'll be able to think about your guy without thinking about some kind of weird Indian or guy with weird acne (whitehead to blackhead idk). Erm moving on... Personality is hard to read mostly because out that blurb I get: +Charismatic and outgoing and then -blunt. The background about the personality just muddles it for me, you should probably just stick to the curt style everyone else is doing because some of the details like him smoking or liking Western culture don't really have anything to do with actual personality traits. To me, those are more quirks or mannerisms. I need to know his bare bones personality, not necessarily that he's a biker. You could then approach it by answering: What does being a biker say about him personally? He is free spirited, like freedom ('murica!?), etc? You do give us more in the history like him being friendly and positive but really those are synonyms and end up being redundant, rather than informative. Maybe cite HOW he was friendly briefly? I'm tempted to say military would be obsolete due to "world peace" being established and everyone pretty much staying in "line" with everything, but it isn't a huge deal, just be aware any military would be significantly downsized and used for more basic things like say helping communities make repairs after natural disasters or something like that. Has he ever been to America, if his dad is from there, and he's totally into it, I'd assume he'd have gone at least once right? You may want to specify his residence as well since it should be Tokyo or nearby the city. And the online appearance, I'll need to say would not start off with a flaming head. I assume after an upgrade after say, him finishing his third and final year of "training" he would have gotten the accessory of fake flames. And I also want to know more about his weapon. I'm under the assumption (correct me if I'm wrong here) that he can reload pretty quickly, materialize new bullets. Do they do anything or are the old fashioned simple bullets? And the bicycle thing is okay...I guess, just try not to use it too much since some of the group might not have that kind of transport and I assume that maybe his most recent upgrade...since with the flaming head and TWO guns and bike, it is getting excessive. Does he have zero defense and close combat skills? Just trying to weigh your guy's pros/cons and see if I have everything straight. And you keep calling him "collector" which isn't right, it's "Corrector" as in correcting the issues in the DgtWld, they're not collecting anything except maybe boatloads of cash.

@Genkai

Ok. Whitehead is the surname of a friend of mine. It's English in origin. It's because people of that lineage tend to get white hair faster than others, hence "Whitehead". Also I dunno why I kept calling it collector, guess I was just derping out. And you're right about the guns, old fashioned bullets, but it fires fast and bullets materialize. And it makes sense that he'd visit America, so I'll add that. Also I know the personality is a bit...bad? I'll use the format the others used and revise it. On the Ghost Rider thing, I meant to portray him as recently finishing training and had gotten the upgrade but if its too over the top I can downsize it like...his transformations in the DgtWld are powered by emotion or..something along those lines. I'll work it out.

Blackheart 1x1 Industrial Age/Fantasy RP

"You know when someone offers you help, you accept, especially if you can barely stand." He said, lighting the cigar. He could see her anger was about to turn physical, but that didn't worry him. He needed to teach this girl a lesson. "You think you are the only person who's in a tight situation? That you don't need anyone?" he asked, walking in front of her, puffing on his cigar. Water dripped from under the bridge. A drop landed on the bridge of his hat. "You think you got it sooo bad, that the world hates you, but when the world presents you with a friend that's willing to help, you don't want it." As he talked, his own temper flared, he started to pace in front of her. "I get, that if you were seen with help, you'd get fired. I knew you would." He blew smoke into the air and looked at her. "But I took care of it. But no it was good enough, because your too FUCKING proud, even though your hungry and weak and feel like the world is against. Isn't that it? Little Miss, Raggedy Princess doesn't need anyone!" He exhaled a cloud of smoke and stopped pacing. "So, you want a meal or should I just leave you to wallow in self-pity?"

Blackheart 1x1 Industrial Age/Fantasy RP

Sorry I didn't right more, I was exhausted yesterday, I'll get working on a post now.

Blackheart 1x1 Industrial Age/Fantasy RP

Kurt placed his hand on Rhett's shoulder as she left in an angry storm. "Some people." he muttered. Rhett hurried after her, pushing his way through the crowd. She sure was fast, he'd give her that. He looked for tracks in the mud leading away from the camp. He frowned and followed them. He heard a familiar huffiness under a bridge and made his way over to it. He saw her sitting there, being miserable by herself. "You know, I have never met such a selfish person." he said, pulling out a cigar.

Blackheart 1x1 Industrial Age/Fantasy RP

I was just thinking that he should offer her a job as an assistant XD, it's pretty late here as well and I have finals tomorrow. So great. I'll post tomorrow for sure.