Derpestein said
dat lack of grammar doe.
Really? I wonder what's wrong with my grammar? Can you please tell me? i don't mind as long I will learn and might improve my grammar
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Really? I wonder what's wrong with my grammar? Can you please tell me? i don't mind as long I will learn and might improve my grammar
Name: Tristan Carter
Username: Breeze
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Personality: Tristan acts like a cold person to everybody but he will befriend you if you befriend him.He is very shy to approach anyone in real life even in game so plays alone but parties with somebody when you partied so in real life he will bond with you if you bond with him.When you knew him more deeper, he is very talkative and has a strange cheerful side that might made you laugh.He secretly likes dogs and has a lot of pet dogs in his apartment and you can see him but rarely feeding dogs in the street.He also like food,spicy foods to be specific and he can eat a lot of spicy food when he is very hungry.However on the other side, he can be very aggressive when you made him an enemy and he will ignore like forever! If you attempt to approach him, you will get a beating.
History: Tristan Carter was born in a normal family.He was the adopted son of the family because the previous son of the family died when he was born.Tristan was lucky to be adopted by loving stepmother and stepfather.He lost his parents when he was 5 in a murder incident and he managed to survive the incident but unfortunately his parents died from protecting him.He was traumatized but recovered after 3 months and got adopted.However, he still doesn't remember anything about himself and he was named "Tristan",the name was supposed to go their baby boy but since he died, the name goes to this boy.He was very emotionless but smart boy in school.He wasn't the top student but he didn't failed a single subject.He doesn't like to socialize because he thought the kids outside are mean and aggressive so he spent his childhood in his house only interacting with his parents and other relatives.
He then moved in to a dorm studying in a university when he was 18.He was studying as a medical student on that university and currently got a job as a cashier in a gaming store and there he discovered the new Neuro-Sync where you can play virutal games and also the VRMMORPG called "Digital Soul Online".So he will gave this game a try for a while since he never played any video games so he must try this one and led to his incident.
Appearance:
Race: Human
Weapon:
Stats:
-STR: 4
-END: 5
-AGI: 5
-INT: 9
-WIL: 7
Favored Skills:
Alchemy
Enchanting
Alteration
Taming
Meditation
Medium Armor
Evocation
Perks:
Ice Master - He has a boost for ice-based magic skills
Username: Breeze
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Personality: Tristan acts like a cold person to everybody but he will befriend you if you befriend him.He is very shy to approach anyone in real life even in game so plays alone but parties with somebody when you partied so in real life he will bond with you if you bond with him.When you knew him more deeper, he is very talkative and has a strange cheerful side that might made you laugh.He secretly likes dogs and has a lot of pet dogs in his apartment and you can see him but rarely feeding dogs in the street.He also like food,spicy foods to be specific and he can eat a lot of spicy food when he is very hungry.However on the other side, he can be very aggressive when you made him an enemy and he will ignore like forever! If you attempt to approach him, you will get a beating.
History: Tristan Carter was born in a normal family.He was the adopted son of the family because the previous son of the family died when he was born.Tristan was lucky to be adopted by loving stepmother and stepfather.He lost his parents when he was 5 in a murder incident and he managed to survive the incident but unfortunately his parents died from protecting him.He was traumatized but recovered after 3 months and got adopted.However, he still doesn't remember anything about himself and he was named "Tristan",the name was supposed to go their baby boy but since he died, the name goes to this boy.He was very emotionless but smart boy in school.He wasn't the top student but he didn't failed a single subject.He doesn't like to socialize because he thought the kids outside are mean and aggressive so he spent his childhood in his house only interacting with his parents and other relatives.
He then moved in to a dorm studying in a university when he was 18.He was studying as a medical student on that university and currently got a job as a cashier in a gaming store and there he discovered the new Neuro-Sync where you can play virutal games and also the VRMMORPG called "Digital Soul Online".So he will gave this game a try for a while since he never played any video games so he must try this one and led to his incident.
Appearance:
Race: Human
Weapon:
Stats:
-STR: 4
-END: 5
-AGI: 5
-INT: 9
-WIL: 7
Favored Skills:
Alchemy
Enchanting
Alteration
Taming
Meditation
Medium Armor
Evocation
Perks:
Ice Master - He has a boost for ice-based magic skills
The rabbit said that we're going on the Bastion.What is that? and is it safe there? The same question pops out on Kouichi's mind just like Cronic's.He really hoped that it is safe there.He then catches up with the rabbit and the girl "Alice" to the forest.As I was running through the forest trying to catch up with the two,something does not feel right.This is not an ordinary forest.The mushrooms are gigantic and the trees were skyscraper high.Is this some kind fairytale? I asked myself.I saw the two talking to each other while walking and it was a relief to see them.I thought I was lost.As I catched up on them I asked the rabbit a question.
"So about this Bastion,What are we gonna do there?" he asked
"So about this Bastion,What are we gonna do there?" he asked
(Oh it was my turn to post XDDD)
All the paper monster were destroyed for the strange creature that we can call as "Personas".They must be your inner power because they represent you but I am not alone.There are others too that summons their own persona."I am sorry." the woman voice I heard spoke again
"I am Fuuka Yamagishi, I am sorry I could not have talked to you before this happened. But you must trust me." she spoke again but this time the mysterious female voice introduced herself and was revealed to be Fuuka Yamagishi.The name is not familiar but it seems that this Fuuka girl knows the situation so I have to trust her.So I stayed silence listening to Fuuka.
This place is another person's mind. Their own dream and nightmare. You have to find them. Help them overcome that, and you will wake up. But spend too long here and you will be eaten by the shadows you are destroying." So she really knows the situation.There is no reason to fear the shadow creatures for now because I got my Persona when I needed her and I will use it if I have to! "I wish I could be there to help you fully but I cannot enter the mind like you. I can only shove my consciousness so far... that... No don't push me ..." the voice was almost fading.She is really trying hard to communicate with us and before the voice fades she said "She is pushing me from her consciousness. You need to get to the center of the Maze. And hurry, time is running out!"
A rush of adrenaline goes through my blood all of a sudden and shouted "Let's go!" to the others and ran."We have to trust her! So let's go!" I shouted again at the others while running.We have to hurry...We have to trust this Fukka girl...We have to get to the center before time runs out! I hope we can get there! I am not gonna die now.
All the paper monster were destroyed for the strange creature that we can call as "Personas".They must be your inner power because they represent you but I am not alone.There are others too that summons their own persona."I am sorry." the woman voice I heard spoke again
"I am Fuuka Yamagishi, I am sorry I could not have talked to you before this happened. But you must trust me." she spoke again but this time the mysterious female voice introduced herself and was revealed to be Fuuka Yamagishi.The name is not familiar but it seems that this Fuuka girl knows the situation so I have to trust her.So I stayed silence listening to Fuuka.
This place is another person's mind. Their own dream and nightmare. You have to find them. Help them overcome that, and you will wake up. But spend too long here and you will be eaten by the shadows you are destroying." So she really knows the situation.There is no reason to fear the shadow creatures for now because I got my Persona when I needed her and I will use it if I have to! "I wish I could be there to help you fully but I cannot enter the mind like you. I can only shove my consciousness so far... that... No don't push me ..." the voice was almost fading.She is really trying hard to communicate with us and before the voice fades she said "She is pushing me from her consciousness. You need to get to the center of the Maze. And hurry, time is running out!"
A rush of adrenaline goes through my blood all of a sudden and shouted "Let's go!" to the others and ran."We have to trust her! So let's go!" I shouted again at the others while running.We have to hurry...We have to trust this Fukka girl...We have to get to the center before time runs out! I hope we can get there! I am not gonna die now.
Real Name
Hiro Kageyama
Alias
Mr.Tactician
Gender
Male
Age
18
Weapon
Glock 19
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Arcana
Emperor Arcana
Persona
Lugh
Mask
a giant spider.it has 6 legs like hands of course and 5 of them equips a giant needle.The mask is also deaf and its physical attacks are very powerful..Its body is black but the heads is a yellow masquarade mask that was being held by the last hand.The Mask does not speak but if it does, it will make a creepy voice.It usually screech that can make someone deaf temporarily due to the decibel of the sound.
Attire
Occupation
A Student at Military School
Personality
Hiro has a calm composure when making decisions and deciding on actions while fighting the mysterious invaders. He has great leadership abilities, is smart, decisive and effective, but lacks common sense about “unnecessary” things that his parental figures never taught him about. He is also very unyielding in his views. He can say cruel things and make harsh decisions without feeling remorse because he has no concept of compassion taught to him. Due to his upbringing, he views the worth of individual's value from their achievement rather than artificial concept like money and power and developed the belief that there is no future for the weak, so the ones deemed strong must take the lead. He has pride in his family name and cannot accept the current state of the world as he views it as being unworthy of his family's protection.
Weaknesses/Fears
-He is not really in to hand-to-hand combat although it is a lesson in military school, so he is very defenseless without a melee weapon or ranged weapon.
-He is scared of spiders
-He is deaf but he wears hearing aids though
Special Abilities / Traits / Attributes / Quirks
-Since he is a student from a military school, he is very professional at using guns
-He doesn't have a sense of humor,he is always serious
-He is very fast at thinking especially when there is a need of plans or he is being asked a question
Themesong
Other
NOTHING
Sill active and i'll be cool with skipping corp's posting turn
Reserve the emperor arcana.please
Is this still open for new characters?
Tokiko was still hesitating whether to shoot or not to shoot.She was about to pull the trigger but she stopped and puts down the gun.It's hopeless, the monsters are getting near and the gun she had is futile.Tokiko just waited for the monsters to come calmly accepting her death but then a mysterious woman from nowhere said something.
"They are used to bring out your potential. They are the only way to destroy the monsters! You must shoot yourself with the evoker."
"The guns are not real! They are used to bring out your potential. They are the only way to destroy the monsters! You must shoot yourself with the evoker!"
Tokiko's eyes opened wide and looked at the gun then picked it up.She looked at it carefully.
"So that is only way huh?" she said still looking at the gun then she stands looking at the girl who does not believe at the mysterious woman.She approached the girl and tapped her shoulder.
"You wanna die?" she asked her.
"if not we have to do what she said" she added aiming the gun or evoker on her head.
"Let's do this!" she said
"Pe...r...so...na..." she said slowly then she pulled the trigger.
"They are used to bring out your potential. They are the only way to destroy the monsters! You must shoot yourself with the evoker."
"The guns are not real! They are used to bring out your potential. They are the only way to destroy the monsters! You must shoot yourself with the evoker!"
Tokiko's eyes opened wide and looked at the gun then picked it up.She looked at it carefully.
"So that is only way huh?" she said still looking at the gun then she stands looking at the girl who does not believe at the mysterious woman.She approached the girl and tapped her shoulder.
"You wanna die?" she asked her.
"if not we have to do what she said" she added aiming the gun or evoker on her head.
"Let's do this!" she said
"Pe...r...so...na..." she said slowly then she pulled the trigger.
"I'm ok" he responded to the cat "Cheshire" and the rabbit started to took of his arm and stabbed it to his chest.
"Ooohh that's gonna hurt" he commented closing his eyes
The rabbit did it 14 times and it turns out to be a golden watch but he called this little babies "evoker".Kouichi picked one of those golden watch or what he call as "evokers".He looked at his evoker carefully but still had no idea why is this a weapon? Does it magically turn into a weapon? Or go back in time because it is a watch.
"This is our weapons? What does it do?" He asked the rabbit still looking at the golden watch but he ended up pocketing it afterwards
"Ooohh that's gonna hurt" he commented closing his eyes
The rabbit did it 14 times and it turns out to be a golden watch but he called this little babies "evoker".Kouichi picked one of those golden watch or what he call as "evokers".He looked at his evoker carefully but still had no idea why is this a weapon? Does it magically turn into a weapon? Or go back in time because it is a watch.
"This is our weapons? What does it do?" He asked the rabbit still looking at the golden watch but he ended up pocketing it afterwards
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