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    1. thesagaofluke 9 yrs ago

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Finn watched Ved tie his shoelaces, "You were pretty badass out there." Ved just grunted. Finn shook his head, amazed at his 'guardian angel.' "Where'd you learn that stuff?" He also knelt down and picked up his knife.

"Everything okay here?" Finn swivelled round to find a girl pointing a bow right at his face. He instantly dropped his knife again.

"Woah. Ok..." Finn examined the girl more, "Now you, you look like a guardian angel."
Finn, stood with his mouth open, staring at the one many army standing in front of him, as he snapped the neck of the final zombie. The man then turned to look at Finn. He instantly put his hands up. After a second, Finn glanced at his knife, and then dropped it, keeping his hands up.

"When I asked for guardian angel, I was not expecting you..."
Finn opened the main door to the Walmart, and it slammed behind him. He grimaced, in almost physical pain. He slowly looked up to find at least 20 undead staring at him.

"Oh crap..." Finn said under his breathe. The first of the undead ran towards him and lunged. Finn managed to duck, but the second zombie grabbed him around the neck. The rotting human tried to embed it's teeth into his right side of his neck, but he was able to shove his knife into it's face before it could make a move.

The zombie fell off of him, and temporarily to the floor, but Finn had no time to celebrate, as the other undead started to close in on him. The only reason they hadn't already, is they were stuffed into the isles, and tripping over each other as they savagely tried to charge at him, like wild animals. Slowly though, they were getting closer. Finn turned back towards the door, but the two undead he'd just faced were in his path.

"If there's any kinda guardian angel looking out for me," Finn shouted to no one, "Now would be a good time to do some guarding!" Finn raised his knife, preparing for the end.
May I just ask how full we're saying the Wal-Mart is? Like in terms of how many undead are in it.
Finn opened another can of beans. His last can... He'd have to make another soon. He stuck the can in the microwave, using the the energy he had saved.

As the beans slowly rotated, Finn turned back to his work. He had two test tubes set up. One with a sample of his blood in, the other with some rather old blood from his father. He looked back down his microscope again. Both him and his father had strange bacteria like organisms swimming around in them.

The microwave dinged as it finished. Finn shook his head as he stood up from the table. He was no scientist, and had no idea what he was looking at. He ate his beans quickly, thinking about what he would pick up on his next trip. Once he finished, he grab his rucksack, a kitchen knife, and his filled water bottle, and quietly slipped out of the house.

The journey was a simple one. He only ran into two zombies, who he easily snuck past. He breathed in deeply before stepping inside Wal-Mart. This is my last trip, my last trip...
@Teal Oh sorry. I was under the impression that we had to put how Mr. Cheshire recruited our character. I'll remove that part.
@tatszico just read your CS. I'm imagining how great the tension between our characters would be. Some really interesting storylines could come out of it.
@thesagaofluke, that came out of nowhere.

I think your sheet meets my standards with the exception of two things that are bugging me;

1. I'm assuming the old man you're talking about is Mr. Cheshire, right? Well, Mr. Cheshire's recruitment method in your character's bio contradicts the recruitment method that I was thinking of. He isn't the type of guy who'd meet his pawns face to face early in on the game. Not to say you mentioned "he smiled", while I stated in his bio that he wears a mask when meeting new people. Best way to go about this is completely scratch it off.

2. Second one isn't that big of a deal honestly, but leaving an arrowhead behind seems too flashy for a professional hitman. This is supposed to be a fairly realistic RP, and leaving your mark in a crime scene seems like something out of a superhero comic book. You can keep it if you want, but I can't allow your character to drop possibly compromising clues like that in the RP (if he makes it, of course)

Overall, your guy seems good. I will not give you my seal of approval yet. I'll wait and see the other sheets too. If I get more than six, I'll leave out the ones I don't like and approve the ones I do. I hope that's cool with you.


So I've made a few alteration's to my sheet, that hopefully fix those things up. If there's anything else out of order, I can change it.
Full Name: Daniel Archer

Alias: The Bowman

Sex: Male (Pretty Often)

Age: 29

Nationality: Australia.

Appearance:

Height: 6' 1"
Weight: 170

Personality: Daniel is a very calm headed person, allowing him to keep a clear mind while under pressure. Because of this skill, he’s notorious for going off plan, and improvising, even if it means risking the entire mission. But with great risk, comes great reward, and his track record shows it. While on mission, he usually makes witty remarks to any team mates that he is with, which many find annoying. Outside of missions, he’s very passive, and stays out of any unneeded conflict. His main character flaw is how he overestimates his skills, and the skills of his team mates, causing him to be overly optimistic. His speciality is breaking into places many would say are impossible to break into.

Background: Having grown up in a normal family for his all of his childhood, while at school and collage he studied and got his bachelor degree in criminal justice, and at the age of 21 started his years of work experience as a police officer, with moving up to detective as the end goal. At 23, he was promoted to Detective, with his speciality being elaborate break in murders. He was a great asset to the force, but because of corruption in it (suspected to be The Network), his paycheque was cut majorly. In a tight spot, Archer decided to employ some of the break in methods that he had studied, and broke into a celebrities mansion, and stole $75,000 in jewellery. Even though he had said, it was a one off, he soon found himself stealing from other frequently. While on one of his heist, he was interrupted by the celebrity in question. Doing what he thought he had to do, he struck them down with the screwdriver he had. Having never killed before, this broke him, and he turned himself in. While in prison, he toughened up his demeanour, but his wittiness stuck with him. Once he had served his time, he had trouble finding work that used his extensive qualifications to their fullest. Until one day, he was approached by a organisation who knew about his crime, and offered him a job that would put his abilities to use. When he found out it was assassinations he refused strongly, but after finding no other work he tentatively accepted. He soon became notorious for his break in assassinations, in which he would enter the targets house, and murder them in their homes. At each crime scene, the police would find a small arrowhead, the signature, of the bowman.
@Robo27 so I'm guessing more like TWD zombies, rather then WWZ ones. Good to know.
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