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If anyone is interested to introduce their character to the story right now, or post something before the duel with the Shadow Duelist starts, please do ;-)
Otherwise, me and UE will have to start the duel.
The three people following the apparently sleepwalking girl would have usually been a funny sight, but for some reason none of the students that saw the unusual scene felt like laughing.

Maybe, it was the grave expression on the students' faces, or the worried aura that radiated from all of them - even the usually apathetic aid professor Franklin.
The group kept following Freya for a while, as she walked through the corridors of the main campus building, taking turns left and right. Apparently, the criminal was attempting to lose them by taking a lot of turns. Normally, that WOULD have been enough to throw them off, but with Freya guiding them, there was no way he'd be able to get away.

And, true to word, after taking another turn in a small courtyard, they found a hooded figure crouching in the shadows, panting.

"Shh", whispered Akio, "We need to take him by surprise".

The looks on the two girls' faces spoke miles of what they thought of his plan, but Akio just ignored them.
The guy in the corner, though, didn't. Finally noticing them, he turned to the three and muttered: "What the... who the hell are you?"
Well, from my High Chair of Co-GMing, I have to say that while Angelo's bio is awfully short and feels a bit generic, the idea behind his character IS worth exploring. Though, of course, I'd REALLY advise you to improve your punctuation. Anyhow, for me you're in IF you edit your CS a bit. You can contact me or UE (keep in mind that my timezone will likely be different than yours though), so we can work out what kind of character you want Angelo to be, and if there will be any particular subplots centered around him.

So yes. He's in. Contact us, though :P
Akio's first reaction was just to think "what a bother", but the Headmaster looked pretty damn concerned. It took something serious to get the old man so worked up, so he decided to just save his questions for later and follow him. He yelled at the students: "Well, you heard him! Stay close and follow!".
Anna, Michelle, Aislin and Kim followed suit, while everyone else gathered at the other exit, spurred by the Headmaster's indication.
Yup, of course, I read it ;)
It's just that a character doesn't change all of a sudden without good reason. Of course, it's absolutely possible to not make his change of heart depend on a certain event (after all, more often than not in real life people can realize something or change their opinion gradually rather than because of a single, powerful event), but it's a bit less characteristic.
Yup, of course, I read it ;)
It's just that a character doesn't change all of a sudden without good reason. Of course, it's absolutely possible to not make his change of heart depend on a certain event (after all, more often than not in real life people can realize something or change their opinion gradually rather than because of a single, powerful event), but it's a bit less characteristic.
I'm a bit more flexible than UE in that regard, but I should warn you about the criteria we use for the characters' bio and personality. It doesn't have to be something incredibly outlandish (rather, if it is, it's gonna need some GOOD justification, and a nice talk with the GMs before accepting them), and it's perfectly fine to have a character that has some peculiar traits or skills, as well as a character who had a non-conventional life. But everything has to be consistent with the in-universe logic and common sense. For example, Yusei was an orphan adopted by a hostel in the Satellite, and he was a smart kid who joined a gang led by an older, much more "direct" guy. He's not led exactly a comfortable or uneventful life, at least by current Western middle-class standards. And is the only character who didn't go to an actual prestigious school, because of that. He had no reason to, after all: Martha and Kalin pretty much taught him everything he could need. He has his own personality, which is consistent with his actions and backstory, which is detailed by key events.
If you want to write a backstory, you should pinpoint some defining events and characteristics that will make your character memorable - and explain how he got where he did. It's a bit unlikely that a boy from an impoverished family just decided to join Duel Academy. Give us a specific reason as to why and how. For example, he could have met a professor from the academy who liked his duelling style and suggested him to go to the Academy, he felt, after some soul-searching, that learning to duel and maybe getting some much-needed high-school education would actually help him support his family, and worked hard to gather the money to pay for his studies at DA.
Not much of a change from the bio you wrote, but doesn't it feel much more real? Remember: as, like you said, it's pretty much impossible to write something absolutely original (not that YGO was all that keen on that, even :P ), the difference is in HOW you put it. Then yes, maybe it's been done before. But if you tell it in a more believable way, it gets pleasant to read nevertheless.

Try to reflect on this advice. It's been given to me, when the time was right, by a true writer, and well... it's done wonders for me so far.
Kim had lost her match to a spectacular stroke of luck of her opponent, without having the possibility to even use her deck.
Akio didn't have time to think about that, though. His second match was about to start, and his opponent had shown previously to be if not fearsome, at least competent. He would've been, technically, at an advantage as Koa'ki Meirus had powers to counter specifically LIGHT monsters, and Michelle's deck consisted probably only of those.

Or, they would have, except that he still didn't have Drago. Without that one, his possibilities of winning were drastically cut down. Still, he was there to give the Koa'kis a test run in a serious duel, so he had to at least try his best.

The president had already returned to the announcer's seat, he realized, when her voice chimed in from the amplificator: "The last duel of the first quarter was won by Press Dalton. The semifinals are about to begin. For the first match, I ask Akio Muzuki and Michelle Kine to step inside the arena."

Akio got up silently and made his way to the center of the arena, meeting the look of his opponent.
Not much, so far. The tournament is still going, we're after the first quarter.
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