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I doubt my little twist will actually work... In fact I'm pretty sure it won't. But it's an important thing to try for character development reasons.

Out of curiosity, how many dosages does "soft breaking" take? I'm thinking three. The idea should be that hard breaking takes longer but is (in every circumstance but this one), more complete, and leads to better servants over all.
I still don't want him to remember it. It should be a memory blackout.

I'm cool with timeskipping, but not the whole 9 days. There's still a few more things I want to play out. The first time Joseph washes Erik for one thing, Erik's slow descent into instinct, emotion, and insanity, and a possible twist that I've decided to do but I'm not sure where I'm going to place it.
I remember that conversation as well... except I remember it being that he would basically take it in his sleep, or while he was too unconscious or delirious to realize what he was doing... and that it would be around the 9th or 10th day.
Fair enough, I'll give the shape of that some more thought as we continue further and I start to understand Alexi a little better.

He literally will never say that he's ready to take it and mean it. Keep that in mind. He truly does believe he'll die first. Buuut, he might say he's ready just to try and draw Alexi close enough to get a few drops directly from his body. The fact that even if he succeeded, he would only be prolonging his own suffering, hasn't crossed his mind enough for him to care. He is basically acting on two instincts, the need for blood, and the knowledge that he cannot get it from the potion.
It's not like the potion is an exact science though. It does essentially link Erik's mind to Alexi's, so it would be logical for there to be some unexpected repercussions with that. Maybe not severe ones, but I think we could work out a few faults in the whole thing, while keeping the main idea. It's less fun if things work perfectly as intended.

Ahh, when he said he wanted to protect Joseph, it made me (and therefore Erik) think that he was going to try and administer it on his own, which would be a hilariously bad idea for Alexi. It's becoming more and more difficult for Erik to see him as a person and not a piece of meat, made worse by the fact that they aren't exactly friends at the moment. The funny thing is, normally Erik is very respectful of humans. He isn't a "Vampire or Magical Supremacist" he just wants everyone to be equal. He worked with abolitionist humans in the rebellion with no problem. But the deprivation of blood does crazy things to a vampire's brain... and again, it doesn't help that he hates Alexi for chaining him up like this and is only even being civil out of practicality.
Sorry, that was really bad. I'm sick at the moment and very sleepy. I'll try and edit into something better if I have time and energy tomorrow. If not, the most important elements are there, it's just lacking the literary spices and more eloquent delivery.

Is there a chance some of Alexi's more possessive and selfish impulses could accidentally have an effect on Erik after he takes the potion? I know the intent is to share memories, but it seems like side effects would be likely. I really don't want his plan to just go off without a hitch, but that's one I wanted to discuss with you since it's a bit complex.
“What part of 'I will not drink the potion, I'll die first,' do you not understand, Alexi?” Erik muttered as the lord of the manor left and ignored him completely. I can't drink anything they give me except water, because even if they said it was normal blood, it could have the potion mixed in without my knowledge. On the other hand... if the human will get close enough to me to feed me the vial, this could work in my favor. Even in this state I am stronger than he is. I could kill him, or at least wound him and get a sip of that delicious blood.

Erik laid down back into the bed and considered the idea before trying to read again. The pain in his head was getting worse, making it even harder to focus on the book, and going to sleep felt impossible for the same reason. Finally he gave up and tried to think, but all he could think about was exactly how to trick the human into thinking he was ready to take the potion. There was a cruel irony in all of this, in the sense that before his capture, Erik had not been a vampire supremacist. He only wanted equality with humans, for magicals to be freed from slavery. He held a lot of respect for humans who did not participate in the slave trade. But gradually the bloodlust was causing his natural instincts to take over, gradually making him much more akin to his bloodthirsty ancestors. It was taking more and more concentration to remember that Alexi was a sentient human being, not a source of food. The fact that he personally hated the human for imprisoning him like this did not help matters in the slightest.

~*~*~

Vampires were not sensitive to light in general, just incredibly sensitive to UV radiation. So, though the curtains were closed, the room was brightened by several tasteful lighting fixtures, some of which Joseph had actually installed himself at the behest of previous masters.

Joseph knocked briefly before entering the room with a large tray containing eggs benedict, assorted fruit, orange juice, and milk. His face was completely impassive as he sat the tray down in front of the human before him and removed the plates and glasses, arranging them carefully on the desk. Then he bowed slightly and stood on the other side of the desk waiting to be addressed or dismissed. He silently dreaded the conversation, terrified that it would go back to more instructions regarding the vampire prisoner, who he would have liked to forget entirely.
Ahh, alright, just checking. I didn't want things to disagree. :-)

If Alexi tries to give him the drug himself, especially two days from now, Erik will absolutely avoid the vial and try and get a drink directly out of his arm. It would be safer for Joseph to do it, because he understands what Erik is going through and knows how to overpower him. Between blood hunger, food hunger, and the draining effect of the chains, Erik is quite weak now, compared to other vampires. But he's still stronger and faster than humans.
In my mind, vampires don't burst into flames upon getting sunlight. They just get bad sunburns after only a few minutes, and within an hour would have second degree burns. Basically they are just extremely sensitive to UV radiation. I'm assuming that point was hyperbole?
Fair enough, see you tomorrow then.
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