TwilightDragon

Fire Emblem: Toil of Transgression

Morning guys.

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Alright. ^^

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I still feel as if people left or something.

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@hatakekuro I think that's better.

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@Innsert Those pictures are fantastic! High quality as well. The Shaman one looks gorgeous. You can definitely use any one you wish.

I have a feeling you'd like Zerochan and Pinterest as well. You should totally check them out when you have a chance.

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@Innsert Oooh, Shamans are awesome. I haven't seen them played before. But you can make both a bard and a shaman, if you'd like.

And what do you mean? Do you mean that you like how a certain person's OC looks like and want to use them? Either way, I see no major problem with it as long as you give them credit.

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@Bornlucky Alright, take your time. ^^

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@Bornlucky I think it's alright now. Ipads are a pain in the ass to type on. While I really don't see any issue with his history (and I see that you added in the part of him joining the volunteers), I'm going to have Sol look at it one more time.

For a second I thought Terrance didn't agree with the rebellion, and I was about to call you out on that, but I reread and noticed he didn't agree with the Emperor. XD

Nice horse picture by the way. :o Does it have a name? Or did Terrance not name it yet?

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@Innsert Basically we picked and edited the promotion trees and classes to make a little bit more sense. Why would a Sage suddenly have a dagger? It would make more sense for a Sage to have a staff than to suddenly get a weapon like a dagger or sword. I don't know why we left out crossbows, though. Maybe Sol decided that bows would be enough.

We purposely left out many (if not all) of the Awakening classes because they make the least sense to us, at least. Why would a skilled Thief or Assassin suddenly be able to use a staff? How could a Cleric, who doesn't have a lot of strength, suddenly be able to haul around an ax? As for the Griffon Rider, Dark Flier, and Dark Knight, I think we have enough mounted units on the list, so we've left them out.

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I hope no one minds a double post. This is to avoid my previous post from being cluttered.

@hatakekuro Like @Solace said with my troubadour, your character has to have a kindred heart in order to use light magic. Andre can be sassy and all, but he has to have some sort of holiness to him in order for him to properly use magic. To me he seems like an overly aggressive person-- maybe you can add a separate paragraph stating the "good" in him?

Okay, time for his biography. Personally, I'm not fond of bios that are long, but I'm not fond of those that are that short, either. I have no issue with the monks taking him in (as the church is bound to do that), and while it does seem cliche, I'm not going to reject it. Though Sol has continuously asked us to add in how the characters have joined the volunteers or why they have not joined them yet. Maybe add another paragraph in, and you can explain that at the same time. :)

@Bornlucky I see no major issues in your character sheet other than the fact that there are some grammatical errors. I don't have time to list them all, but putting your sheet in a word document might point them out. I see no reason not to accept your character though.