Tyler

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The edited version has been posted.

@Lord Wraith

*still can't tell what has changed*

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Okay so everything was moving at a glacial pace last night and I had some bad decisions to make, so my schedule was significantly skewed yesterday.

Can't wait to dig into that post Nemi!

Also--and this is my fault-- I'm going to throw edits for that collab post before I put up another GM post.

@Stein

Yes, daddy. Tell me what to do. I love it when you take control. UNHhhh.

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If he's not actively trying to enhance them, then yes.

@Lord Wraith

This is going to get real interesting, real quick.

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Lol I actually meant the "scrying" ability where she can sense and locate people.

But okay, the rest of that sounds fine!

@Stein

Oh, sure, no problem. I can work with that.

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So, I never gave this official work-up and I suppose I should do that, huh.

So anywhore, still accepted. Duh.

Now that I've read the CS again, I like and a lot of the potential she has.

On the note of her powers: with her last ability, I'd feel more comfortable if she developed that a little later. You're giving her a lot to work against and this ability doesn't seem to enhance her much at this stage. Would you consider making this something she gets a little later down the line (still early on, but not right now)? If you'll do that, I can even work it into a plot aspect.....the wheels are already turning.

(Also, she and Miles will get along so well. Well....Miles gets along with almost anyone really)

I like the backstory but it does leave her a lot to deal with? Are you comfortable with all you've kinda put into place?

@Stein

I'm kind-of cool about holding off on the telekinesis. But I also low-key feel like combat scenarios are gonna be pretty lame for me as a writer until she develops it.

Regarding her backstory, I don't particularly have any plans for her to actually reconnect with her adoptive mother any time soon. It's a part of her backstory purely because Eve is shaped mainly by her history, and it's the drive to find her mom that gives a worthless street rat like her a sense of purpose. It might be all she dreams about, but not all dreams come true.

I'm unsure as to whether Del will crop up, either. Evelyn is in a position where she finds herself running away from one part of her past, whilst trying to track down another. I'm just gonna let her narrative evolve naturally and can't predict where the road will take her. I ain't some kind of psychic.

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Yaaaaaasssss! Shoot me a PM with the first bit of a collab when you're ready, Stein. We'll work that way since it'll likely be difficult to match our schedules up.

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[insert generic Stein fabulosity]

@Stein

I'm game for whatever you throw at us, hunty. If there's someone I trust to execute cool shit, it's you.

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I'm working until 2:00pm tomorrow and then I have two days off.

Can you believe it?

Two. Whole. Days.

I'd like to get an Evelyn post out during that time if possible. But whatever works best overall is good with me.

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Motha has arrived!

I was going to chuck up a post today, but after reading through the IC I think it's best to wait for a more opportune moment. I kind of just wanna get Eve out of the ward and with the rest of you. Hopefully Stein can throw me a bone in his next post.

Also, welcome back Wraith. Let's do this.