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I'm a bit of a writer myself. Love dragons.

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Amber placed the still-fresh rat body she had collected on a nearby rock. Hopefully someone who was hungry would know to at least have that as a snack. She glared at the pathetic sight. She set out on a hunt and found a rat. She remembered the elk scent they had detected early in the hunt. Perhaps that would be the solution. She'd have to investigate later. Amber turned to glance at Klondike. She looked just in time to see him dart off and chase after a rabbit. He wrestled with the little thing then eventually killed it. "Good job!" She cheered for him. She smiled at his enthusiasm. She turned away and lay down on the ground. She yawned and rolled on her back. Perhaps she'd let Klondike into her little idea.
Didn't get much of a chance to post today, apologies. I'll try to get something in tomorrow.
I'm off. G'night everyone.
Amber sighed and, tightly holding onto the rat she had, followed instructions and started making her way back to their den. "Come on, Klondike," She mumbled dejectedly. There had to be something they could do. Humans were the top predators, sure, but they lost their power. They were weak now. She just knew if the pack coordinated, they would be able to easily defeat the human survivors. Amber tilted her head. She was getting ahead of herself. She wasn't even allowed to go with the others yet. She was being told to return to the den like a cub. She lifted her lip angrily but made no noise as she headed back to the clearing.
Amber quietly picked up one of the dead rats that hadn't been eaten yet. Humans... Once the top predators, but they were still extremely dangerous. She shivered at the thought of the pack being found. She greatly regretted that the whole pack might only eat rats for the next few days. In fact, it might be much longer than that. Perhaps just maybe she'd be able to find something bigger later if Ian and Jackie didn't. "Hey," Amber spoke up, "Alkah's still around isn't he? Does he know?"
Amber cheerfully started chasing the rats as well. She definitely felt like a cub again, but she didn't mind. It felt wonderful to have fun like this once in a while. She grabbed one of the fatter ones and tossed it up in the air. She stood on her rear legs and smoothly caught the rat in her jaws and crushed its skull. She landed back on all fours lightly and finished devouring the rat. "I thought I said to stay put," She heard Lila's voice. Amber cringed. Her ears flattened and her tail tucked between her legs. She had not expected Lila back so soon. They must have spent a lot more time chasing rats than she had expected. She slowly turned around and faced Lila. "Sorry..." She mumbled, blood messily dribbling out of her mouth. She sat back and decided to let Klondike talk to her.
Amber kept her head low and followed Alkah's trail. It wasn't long before a second scent started appearing. She recognized it; the rats were nearby. The smell got stronger and stronger until—She stared at the rat that was only a few feet away. They stared each other down for approximately ten seconds before Amber lunged. She charged after the rat who squeaked in fear and ran. The rat nearly made it to a hole in the ground, but Amber's larger size was too big of an advantage. She caught up to it quickly and clamped down her jaws on the rat. Amber turned and faced Klondike happily. She cheerfully said something past the rat in her mouth. She then tightened her jaw and immediately killed the rat by breaking its spine. She turned away and wandered around the tiny clearing she had wandered into. She examined the ground, looking for the rest of the rat dens while she chewed and gnawed at the rat still held in her jaw.
Amber stopped when she felt Klondike following her. She turned around and looked at him curiously. "Are you going to hunt rats with me?" She asked, half jokingly. She looked back at the direction Alkah had come from and continued walking. "We'd better try to be quick about it. Don't want Lila coming back before we're done."
"Oh, no. That's fine," Amber mumbled. "She's fine. She should be back any moment now." She paused for a while, staring intently at seemingly nothing. She was thinking hard in reality. She wasn't sure if she should go after the rat dens or wait for Lila first. After a while, she made up her mind. It would only take a minute, and it shouldn't be too far away, right? "I'm getting a snack," Amber announced suddenly. She walked past Alkah and started following his scent back to the rat den.
I'll try but after Valkyr's post I am lost. He's like controlling your character. Idk if she is running or standing or what? Furthermore he decided to ignore my character completely. He threw a knife at a guard that was chasing the lady, and asked why your character just watched. Also in one post you say he got down, and in another that he is on the rooftop? I am completely lost. If you are wondering where my char came out from, read from the beginning. Thx~
Please read the posts more carefully. The Slenderman mentioned in the previous post that Celaena was running towards her guild. My post simply repeated that. Dallas never jumped down from the rooftop, he simply considered it. My post ignoring yours was a genuine mistake. I will make sure to keep your posts in mind later. I'd also like to point out a couple of strange sentences I found in your previous post.
Instead he held a dagger to the lady's throat. Chris threw a knife at the man aiming for the guard.
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This is mainly what confused me in your post last time. I can't tell if you were just purposely writing an exaggeration or you misread my post. Dallas simply held his knife, he never was close enough to hold a knife to her throat. Also, I was confused at how you punctuated the second sentence. It took me a while to understand that you had attacked a random guard and not Dallas.
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