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I'm adding in a cool new bandit character for my next post. I hope you are all ready to try and deal with them.
An armored knight in solid plate had been cleaved in half like paper in front of the captain. The beast of a king, Jeremiah, unphased by the numbers against him. A cold shudder spread down the doctors spine but he stubbornly refused to let it go. He was needed.


Sorry doc! There's no cure for 'cut in half' :P
@Zebanamana

Maybe, I dunno. Any other ideas?


She could have gone along with Eadwig or one of the other flanks and commanded the shield wall
Sweet deal, we're arrow wound buddies
@Zebanamana

Elaborate?


Just a suggestion. If she is off setting another trap (forgive me I haven't read your last post in a few days so I can't remember) you could have her stumble upon Jeremiah from behind or she could still be outside the camp catching any bandits that are fleeing
@Zebanamana

Tarrya's the one who took a couple dozen troops off to set up an ambush - since she's quite possibly one of the most experienced tactical commanders in the group. Not sure whether or not to have her hit them from the rear immediately or wait until they're faltering to deliver a finishing blow.


She inadvertently ended up behind Jeremiah and she is getting ready to wreck him from behind. Or she is with the reserves hunting down any of the bandits that have fled
Honestly, looking at the characters so far, I'd definitely say the greatest threat is ourselves.


Not ourselves, but the environment. Those medieval diets just aren't the best for long term survival. Balanced diets guys


@Zebanamana I can't see the picture D:


My bad I did it Through mobile
When @zelosse enters the bandit camp

I don't think I'll post again tonight unfortunately. I have some class work I need to finish up.
Alright! Super cheesy and "Big Hero Trope" moment, but that was all I could think of! I hope y'all enjoy reading and react accordingly!


I liked the post. You got down the internal dialogue and emotions a lot better than I have in my posts. It had a good trajectory and didn't really feel like a list of events like mine have felt, so good job I really liked it
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