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On what Avery said: Max, for one wouldn't get on with Yorudan, which could create a lot of tension within the group. It could make for some very interesting character interactions.
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I had intended for him to wear a hood and mask to cover his face for that exact reason...for one he will look cool and it will keep suspicions of others away from him(save for those who know him(
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Hey everyone. Sorry for the absence. I recently quit my job so I've been busy trying to find employment again. I know I promised that I'd put up more stuff but I haven't been able to get into a good Rping mindset lately. I feel terrible about that since you guys deserve so much better from a GM. In any case, I'll try to post some updates in the next few days. I've had a few characters that I wanted to post, but it's been a bit difficult putting the finishing touches on them.

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Your character is pretty interesting, and I think he'd fit really well with the others as far as storytelling goes. I know you and the others discussed the whole "killing inquisitors" thing and have agreed on changing it to him wounding them instead, but I still feel that him wounding inquisitors and still being allowed within the Church is a bit much. Basically, I'm trying to maintain a certain power structure within the world, and the inquisitors occupy a level on that power structure that's pretty high, so whenever one of them is killed, let alone, wounded, it should be treated with the necessary gravitas that it deserves. So yeah, I don't think your character wounding them, even if he does possess some secret power, and then being accepted by the Church would fit. They'd most likely proclaim you as some kind of horrible demon-possessed abomination and execute you for what you did.

I do have another idea that could possible solve things though. What if your character was found by a group of Varyan soldiers instead? They wouldn't be the highest-level soldiers of the Varyan military but instead a group of blood-thirsty veterans who had a low-level priest with them to act as a healer or something. Your character kills the soldiers after they threaten him, save for one (their leader, who could pop up later on as an antagonist). Their leader is a vicious warrior who's seen quite a lot of battles, and he wounds your character somehow. He's about to kill you when the low-level priest, who recognizes the potential of your ability, interrupts and forbids him from finishing you off. The low-level priest heals your wounds and brings you to the Red Seminary, informing the masters that he's found a boy with untapped power. They then accept you and so the story continues.

I think this would be a good compromise as it opens up quite a lot of possibilities for your character. You'd have a crazy soldier out there who remembers what you did to his men, and your character will also have a dark reputation among the military-- which could lead to some interesting interactions with the support brigade who are going to be joining us on the journey to El.

What do you think?
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That doesn't sound like a bad idea...the only reason that Ichose the Inquisitors instead of soldiers was the fact I wanted him to suffer through the Demon Year, but this seems like an equally interesting plot. When I get to a computer with internet I will make these changes...other than that would I be accepted. Also would it be far fetched to have him wear a hood and mask so as to hide the fact he's Omestrian?
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Well, he could wear a hood and mask if he wanted to, but I don't think the Church would care that he's Omestri, as long as they have no reason to think that he's harboring "heretical" thoughts when it comes to his devotion to Varya. In fact, I think they would actually consider it a victory and a source of pride that they were able to "break" an Omestri slave into "loving" Lord Varya. Like every other child who enters the Seminary, your character has been brainwashed into worshipping the Ravenous Lord, and the Church believes they succeeded in that, But deep down, your character will feel what he feels and believes what he believes. It depends on how crafty he is, but he would probably never let his inward feelings show to anyone else, as it could possibly mean death. The only people he would probably share his true feelings with are those who share the same, but only in like, super secret situations.

As far as him hiding being an Omestri because of the hatred and disgust that Varyans feel for that race-- it would depend on what kind of person he is. Would he want to hide his origins to avoid unwanted attention, or would he have a proud and fuck-you-guys-i-am-what-i-am attitude towards it? It really depends on that, I think.
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Well the way I intended to play him was like a samurai with katanas and everything so I guess I'll run him accordingly so I'll keep the hood and lose the mask
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Take a look at Avery's character, Motya. Motya's proud and lives to his heritage without any sort of shame. I like the compromise, myself, makes for a very interesting plot. Kassandra likely wouldn't care whether he was Omestri or not. She would relate, as she still worhships as a Lanostran before she does a s a Varyan, but it's secret. However, she's also a cold-blooded Inquisitor at the same time. Most of our generation's Inquisitors will be more sentimental than those in the past, making the Church think it has gained an even better control, when in reality it's facing a rather volatile power in their passion. Kassandra isn't so much, but she's still slightly more human than others, not caring whether the Omestri are slaves. She doesn't care if there's oppression or unfairness, as the world has always been and will continue to be so.

Good to have you aboard. Can't wait to see your stuff, LJ.
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Here's the background that Avery created for Omestris. I've also accepted Zephyr's Muraad background, so that should be up soon as well.

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What I like most about Motya is that he doesn't even know he is half Omestri. He has grown thinking he was a Varyan whose family had been sentenced to slavery, the only people that know of his Omestri blood would be Mother Oksana (if she put two and two together when she liberated hum from the mines) and the Inner Circle. I like knowing that it can become something that he has to deal with as a character. He already has an affinity to freeing slaves and liberating the commoner and detesting slavery so how much further could that go if he were to find out about the Omestri half.

It is likely Motya would Identify with your character Arch because of the common slavery background but it might be an odd relationship because unlikely your character Motya is outright gregarious, boisterous, and extroverted.
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I've been thinking that I might make him an extrovert just not a loud one. I haven't decided because there seems to be an equal amount of intros and extros...any thoughts
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I know Kass is a bit of an semi-introverted character but pairs up well with Motya's stupidly extroverted personality. Zeph's character (if I remember right) is kinda mid-line between the two and generally angry. I remember Night's character being very disciplined but not really introverted. Mal, when Orion returns, was a very extroverted character, Hansa's Nasir seemed to be the wall flower type, and Hank's character seemed to be a very dark introvert.

I would say go with whatever you are comfortable writing. The dynamic of the group doesn't have to be perfectly balanced and it is often that imbalance that creates good interaction. I think at the two extreme poles you have Motya as the extrovert paragon and Hank (I may be wrong) as the Introvert Paragon.

Fall somewhere in there as long as you can write it out easily enough and it "seems" right for the character you have in mind.

My two cents anyway
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I'll have to write and see what comes out...one thing I know I'm going to play out is Yorudans seething hatred for varya and his people (excluding those from the Seminary that he grew up with)
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Awesome. Can't wait to hash out character relationships again. Getting really pumped for this again.
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Update: I've made my changes to Yorudan's back story, any thoughts or comments would be greatly appreciated.
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I like it. The open-endedness of your characters powers and his unresolved personal troubles should make for interesting development.
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Now I want to work out relationships
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Heh, feel free to shoot me a PM, Arch. I've got work in a little while, but I'll be around now and then.

For the record, this next week or two is very busy. On Friday I officially move from my mom's house and in with a couple of friends. My room isn't fully packed up yet, but I'm on the job hunt after that - I need to work full time. ^^" Or make a bit more per hour.
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I hope that the memorial day weekend finds all of you well.
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Two questions: One) did Yorudan get accepted and Two) when can we start lol
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Hey, Avery, in the spirit of Memorial Day - thank you for your service. ^^

On a related note, I'm very happy to get paid for 4 hours of work on Monday, but not have to go. Yay for being a state employee!!
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