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Monsters?

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This story is going to be set up a bit differently from most. This is going to be kinda like a “Choose your own scare” book. Instead of having a set of players, anyone on the site can “Play” at any time. And instead of writing up posts, you will make 1-5 sentence posts about what you would like to see happen next, and I will write out the idea into a coherent paragraph or more, depending on how far the idea takes me. Each idea will get at last one paragraph in the next post and in essence create it's own time line, making many separate branches to the story.

But, to avoid making this too branchy, this is gonna work like this. Let's say I get three submissions/suggestions, I will then write for each one. The next round each player must state which paragraph/s they are making the next submission/s for before each submission so I know which line of events to build on for each suggestion, and make suggestion/s from there. This will make more sense as we go along :P If only two of the prior suggestions are chosen to continue from, the one left out is now a dead branch. Like this:



Simple ne?

Anyways, “You” are Sasha, or more specifically, Sasha's astral projection, at the moment. Feel free to throw in as many suggestions as you like and go wild! Note, the story can go on even if you decide to kill Sasha, just letting you know. So, 2 days after the first suggestion is posted (giving people time to read up) I'll close suggestion time and write the paragraphs. Have at it, and have fun! (Oh, and kinda feel a but dumb saying this, but all submissions should be made here, not on the IC part)
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Really? No one wants to play?
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Ok, I can think of two suggestions:

1. Sasha wakes up before he can be injected, in his right mind.

2. Sasha is injected, but the drug doesn't kill him, only paralyse him. His 'other' mind wakes up and finds it can barely move.
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Thank you Raafling! I am back from my convention and should have time soon to do these. I'll give this one more day just in case anyone wants to add more paths, but after that, I will shut down suggestion time for the first section and get it up :P Than on to the second section. I may add a suggestion or two myself if I don't get that many more from the players :P
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Oki, part 1 is up! need some ideas for the next part! Anyone?
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Need some ideas!!!!!
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Red: Izea sneaks Sasha out of the hospital: he can't bear to kill him now and knows people will come looking soon.

Green: The beast doesn't 'change back' into Sasha, even when the body slowly starts to regain movement. Izea has to deal with the weakened beast.

Orange: - Sasha slept for years, the beast slowly merging with him in a desperate bid not to die completely. He has new instincts, but cannot be taken over completely. Izea has not moved but has become a recluse.

- It is the next day. Izea is about to move away to escape the memories when Sasha catches up with him.
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Danka! I'll give two days for more people to add their ideas then have up the next section!
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M'kay, you all got until I have time today to get up some more ideas! This is the third thing on my online plate, so you'd better hurry!
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Ooh, teal is my favourite. For teal:
- everyone is infected by the monster thing, only it is seen as a good thing. Society has adapted to the change, and the new powers are seen as 'the next step in human evolution' Sasha is seen as a saviour type figure, as he was the 'original'. Izea can either agree with the majority or hate what humanity has become.
-monsters haunt the streets at night, terrorizing anyone who is out at night. Izea is one of the few who knows how to kill them, but he is a recluse who hates himself for killing his best friend.

I might be able to think of more, but for now this is all I can come up with
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Wow, three branches eliminated this round! I wonder how things will progress this next round. Sorry it took so long. This kinda slipped down on my list(It's kinda long) and I lost track of it! Anyways, back up and running, I hope to see more players next round, along with our first and only player thus far!
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i literaly dont no how or what im doing but if you help me i can try to give you ideas
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Well, the concept is fairly simple. It's like a choose your own adventure story where, instead of picking a choice provided to you, you make your own suggestions which I then write on to continue the story. Each suggestion made gets it's own section and by following the color sequence you can track the story lines. Say you read the Orange section and have three different ideas for where the story should go from there, you would say something like "For the orange section, I think this should happen, or this, or that!" and in my next post I would write out your suggestions. You are free to make as many suggestions as you want for any color section you want. Make sense?
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